Disclaimer: Naruto is belonged to Kishimoto Masashi-sama.

Rate: R (may contains yaoi/yuri relationship, review me if you interested in reading them but I will make this story logically)

Genre: Romance/Drama

Pairing: Neji x Hinata (other pairings…. please vote by reviewing this fiction…onegai shimasu! YAOI/YURI/HET)

Season

Chapter 4

Shikiyama Disaster!

Original Sin?

The snow had stopped falling but a gloomy, iron-hard cold had clamped down on the world. As if it was connected with his feelings - dark and gloomy.

"Neiji you look awful," Tenten exclaim.

He knew he does. He has been in this peculiar disposition since… he could not remember since when.

The forest was utterly silent. No birds sang, nothing moves, and in the green tinged gloom, the trees crowded around them like sinister phantoms. Fuyu is about to end, yet in his heart, snows continue to fall, and the coldness makes him deadened in the inside.

"Neiji, doshite kokoni?" Lee asked. He and Tenten were training together.

"What do you reckon?" He asked quizzically. But they remain silent. They continue to observe him with some expression he presumes to be sympathy. In which make him feel uneasy.

"Training, what do you expect?" Neiji shook his head with a gesture that shows; he was thinking that his friends were stupid.

They train together until they exhaust themselves. Without realization, it's already noon. Neiji sat under a big tree while Tenten continue practising with her kunai and Lee was standing at the opposite direction with his back leaned to a tree. Neiji soon realize there is someone approaching him. It was Hinata.

"Hinata Sama, what are you doing here?" Hinata sat silently besides him.

"You've been training for the whole day, you missed lunch. So I made one for you, kore." She handed him a bento box. Neiji receive it with a trembling hand.

"Hinata …Sama, thank you." He was deeply touched. Both of them seem to forget the existence of the other two people.

" He's loosing his cool attitude," Tenten sighed.

" Neiji, we're done for today. Let's continue other time, okay?" Lee shouted. Neiji nodded and they leave both of them alone.

Lee was heading back to his home when suddenly an idea struck in his head.

" …somebody he shouldn't have…" he recalled back Tenten's words.

"Masaka…"

"How… is it? I… made it my self." eager to know his answer Hinata lean closer to him. Neiji's heart hammering faster due to the closeness between them. Neiji was knocked for six.

"Umm…it's… okay," he replied. Stuttering. Damn it! What had come over him? He hates this miserable feeling.

"Just… 'okay'?" Hinata sounds disappointed. She expects him to say more. She expects him to praise her cooking.

"I mean its oishii2." His compliment makes Hinata blush a little.

"It's… my first time. I am learning…um… how to cook recently."

He was looking hard at Hinata with a puckered brow. Hinata was trying to avoid his gaze, her mouth quivered; she was holding herself from suppressing a mirth.

"You mean, this is your experiment and I am you guinea-pig?"

"No, I made it because I thought… you might get hungry, you skipped breakfast and missed lunch. Frankly said, I…you bother me, training with empty stomach." She is sincere; she was born with those qualities. Hinata will hide no secrets with him. Odd though, she had always been so shy with others(especially Naruto) but it is surprisingly different with Neiji. She could talk about…almost anything with him.

"I've just notice, your cooking is… very unique." He suddenly said, munching his food slowly.

"Eh?" She did not seem to understand.

"They sometimes, a bit crunchy…" Hinata's expression aghast.

"They… are… not… suppose… to be crunchy…" Neiji panicked by the sudden change of her expression. He shouldn't have said that.

I mean, it's really good, it tasted good," 'at least' he conceals the truth for himself. "You have invented a new recipes that…wo…would… take over the world!" that really sounded absurd "I me…mean…it would…" she ate a whit of her own cooking while Neiji stutter to say something that could make her qualms at ease. There is something that tasted foreign in it. There is something solid but fragile. She spitted it out.

An eggshell,

Her hands tremble as she found the source of flaw in her cooking. She snatched the bento box from Neiji and broke off.

" I'm sorry, I'm so useless," She buried her face in her hands. She started to cry. Neiji was stupefied; he lost his abilities in thinking calmly. Great remorse slithered in him. This was all his fault, if he didn't told her the truth…

She raises suddenly, looking determined to do something, she turns the bento box upside down, and all of its content descended in the remaining snowfall.

" What are doing, Hinata?" he was astounded.

She wiped her tears away and takes a deep breath.

"No…Hinata, I mean it, I like them so much…" but Hinata cut in.

"Please, lie no more, Neiji-nii san" she smiled weekly at him,

" I know you're just trying to make me feel good. Honto ni, Neiji-nii san wa yasashiku desu ne," His face became the colour of bright scarlet. And then a thought came to him. They are alone; it appeared to him to be the perfect time to…confess his love to her.

Yosh! He had make up his mind. Gambatte! Gambatte! Gambaruyo Neiji!

" Err… ano, Hinata," he said in a very queer manner. Just like Hinata used to whenever Naruto in sight.

" Yes,"

"Hinata…sama," he was stumbling for the right words

" Yes,"

Damn it! Damn it! Speak Neiji! Speak! Say the word!

"A… ano," no words came, his brain jammed.

" What is it Neiji-nii chan?" She started to think there something wrong with Neiji, he is being weird, and that makes her feels uneasy.

"Bokuwa… boku… just thinking, will you train with me tomorrow?"

He's hopeless. That is all his brain could come up with. The word 'suki' was too hard to say in this situation. Now, to him, judging the recent event, Aishiteru are far more than impossible. Any man who can utter the word must be really sugoi.

"Ashita? You promised to practice with Lee tomorrow." She reminds him.

"Right, that, well I've change plan. I didn't feel like training with him tomorrow." She was looking at him with a puzzled expression. What is that suppose to mean? He didn't feel like training with his friends and ask her instead?"

" Don't get me wrong, it is just that I wanted to practise my Byakugan with you," that seems to brought reason to her.

" Okay," she agreed.

"And…could you make me your bento again tomorrow, I don't really mind what you add in it. To me, it's the best I've ever had." It's the only bento a girl had ever prepared for him exactly. Plus Hinata made it for him; somehow it makes him feel… 'Ureshi'.

Hinata smile meekly at him.

"I will, when my cooking gets better. But for now I'm sorry that I can't."

"NANNNIII? YOU NEVER HEARD ABOUT IT?" Kiiba mouth dropped in disbelief.

"No, no one had ever tell me about it, go on, what else do you know about it?" She was urging Kiiba to tell her more. Her eyes were big and bright filled with such anxiety ardour. Which makes her look adorable. And Kiiba just can't help to restrain the temptation to pinch her cheek. He smiled impishly. Hinata face reddens.

" Well, it's just some saying. That place is dangerous. I am against any thought about risking my life for some…fancy myths. What a waste of energy."

" You're talking like Shikamaru, you are lingering to much with him. Tonikaku…I really wish I could see them." There was a note of frustration in her voice.

" Can't your Byakugan work? Why don't you use them, they can see beyond anything, right?" he suggested, Hinata shook her head vigorously.

" It won't work! Byakugan had its limit. I want to see them right in front of my eyes, to see, to touch and to smell them..."she said with some sort of dreamy tone with her hand crossed and closed to her heart.

" They didn't have any smell." Kiiba corrected her. He rubbed the back of his neck and sighed. Hinata seems a bit carried away. He said too much. He just hopes she didn't have any folly idea in her head. But then, the picture of her, forcing her toe out of her line was beyond possibility. It is not like her to do something like that. He patted her head.

"Someday we might go and find them out together,"

Damn! They look happy. Neiji was watching Hinata and Kiiba disdainfully from a distance. He was clenching his fist tightly, ready to launch it at anytime when he finds Kiiba was doing anything bad to Hinata Sama. He suspects Kiiba have a… dishonest intention with her. For example, what's with that patting in the head? She is not his dog! It's must have been a habit since he is a low class dog trainer. And…what's that thing he just did, how dare him trying to act so intimate with Hinata Sama. Neiji gnashed teeth were about to crack. That guy really pissed him off.

"Oi, Neiji, are you listening? Hurry up, you promise to practise with us," Tenten was waiting for his answer. She had become impatient since she had been asking the same question for about ten times already, but Neiji was too occupied to answer her.

"I'll pass…" He was still busy watching Kiiba and Hinata. Tenten grunted.

"Fine, I'll tell Lee you're not coming." Tenten shook her head, first they actually find out that Neiji was capable of falling in love, and he is stumbling for someone he could never be with. Then, just now, he has proved to her that he also was capable of being jealous. Man! The growing up Neiji sure have learns many things, and he is learning fast.

Neiji just could not stand the pressure of being jealous, so he made a plan to set a distance between them. (Yeah, I know that sound pathetic.) To him, fate had been decided, and fate tells him that Kiiba was not meant for her. He approached them.

"I need to go now, my mom asked to run some groceries." Kiiba stand up, signalling Akamaru to jump on his back

Good, he's leaving. Neiji felt relieved somehow.

"See you later Hinata," he waved his hand.

"See you in hell," he mumbled to him self. Hinata turn to him.

"Hinata sama, you promise to…train with me, you haven't forget right?"

"No I haven't, let's go then," she slid her arm to his and lead him to the dojo. Hinata seems a little bit energetic, which is so not like her. Neiji was staring at her, utterly surprised. Hinata suddenly let his hand go, as if she had read his mind. Her face turns scarlet.

" I'm sorry, it just that I'm getting too excited after listening to Kiiba's tale." She said.

"They had some effect on me, I think. I feel a little bit… rebellious. I was imagining I am some kind of bold treasure hunter, so that is why I…get…excited and act like so. Sorry if troubled you." She was smiling meekly at the floor with her typical hand motion. Well, after that absurd act, she didn't dare to look at Neiji.

"Sou ka…" Kiiba was actually competent of making her feel like that. Hesitation swirled in his head. Does he ever make her feel thrilled like that before? Recalling back their memories together, the answer was never.

Itsudemo… there is always someone else that keeps her away from him . Sometimes he wonder, have she ever had any passionate feelings toward him?

He sighed. First Naruto and now Kiiba. This is one tough battle of love, but his rivals are going down. Fate told him so.

She was strolling at the crowded street with her hand at the back of her head, doing absolutely nothing. She hates them. Neiji ditched her for some girl. And Lee had actually realized he needs some time to train alone. She was in an absolute boredom. Her nakamada need her not. And she does not have a boyfriend to get giddy with. And her girl friends were too engaged with other matters. It was cold outside as arctic as her inside. She slid her hand in her pocket and take out a piece of paper.

So, her mother wanted to cook Chinese food today? Judging by the things she wanted her to buy, it's definitely going to be Chinese cooking. Cooking was not so bad for filling leisure time. Doing girl things were pretty much fun actually. It also can help her to ease her rage over those two.

"Damn it! How does ginger really look like?" Kiiba was cursing his lack of information for ginger and its species . He was in a total dilemma. He was about to take a saffron and suddenly he noticed a crate of ginger at the left. Both of them really confused him since they look almost alike.

"Akamaru, which one do you reckon?" but Akamaru barking at him telling him he has no idea either.

Someone enters the shop and the owner great that someone warmly. It seems like someone he knew.

Kiiba groan in frustration.

"I guess I just have to take them both, oi, Oji-san! I want these…"

He was heading to the counter without looking forward, his eyes still darted to the crates of gingers and saffron. And then he bumped into someone who was carrying heavy sacks of cooking ingredients. The contents spilled onto the floor. Akamaru barking madly, scolding him for being so clumsy.

" Hey! Watch it you fool!" a girl shouted at him.

"Okay, okay I'm sorry. Gee, don't be so harsh okay." Kiiba was taken aback for a moment when he finally saw the girl.

" Omae, Neiji no nakamada, na?" Tenten regard him with an irritated expression in her eyes. She didn't answer.

"Get out of my way, you're making my eyes sore." She snapped. Kiiba whistled. That's glacial. She takes a look at the things that had tipped out from her grocery bag and suppressed a moan

"Look what have you done imbecile! They are ruined . Now I have to buy them again." She was grumbling to herself actually, But Kiiba could hear her. And her curses were also audible to be heard. His ears were twitching.

"Oji-san, sorry your store were in mess. I'll help you clean," but the owner shook his head and hurried by her.

" No need Tenten, it's not your fault." The owner said with commiseration.

Now the owner and Tenten really make him feels like an outcast. Kiiba walked out from the store. Tenten was glaring at him with the corner of her eyes.

" Hey kid." The owner stopped him. Kiiba paused in one position.

"Here, you left this," it was the gingers and saffron.

" No need Oji-san. I don't think I want them anymore." He was about to turn away and went to the other store when suddenly a thought came to him, he headed back to the shop. Stopped in front of Tenten and hand out some money.

" Here, to make up the mess." He gave Tenten a breath taking smile. Tenten was astounded.

"No, thank you. I don't think this is necessary." She said brusquely. What's the matter with him. Acting like some charming prince all of sudden.

"But it is for me. Please take it, this is the least I could do to right this mistake." He said humbly. Tenten became speechless. She snatched the money from his hand.

" Fine, if you insist." She turns her back to him. She did not want to look at him, because his manners somehow irritate her so much.

Kiiba walk away, she glanced at his direction.

"That's doesn't mean I'm going to forgive you!" she shouted. Kiiba stopped and diverted his head to her

" You don't have to." He smiled at her. There is a strange light surrounding him, and his entire being sparkling. The winds suddenly blew, his hair sway in one appealing motion. Tenten bloods surged to her face. The coldness inside her subdued and had been replaced with warmth. Tenten looked at her side, the owner was grinning broadly at her.

" How I missed being a youth." He muttered to himself.

"Yeah, I know Akamaru. Man, what a friend are you? You supposed to support me. Help me when I'm in trouble. And ease my pain. You've disappointed me Akamaru." Kiiba sighed. He sure going to be punish by his mother. He had given Tenten every penny he has. He sighed again; the cost of being gallant was too high. He shouldn't have done that, but apart from that, he had to act like a real man. This is a battle of principle. Well, he guessed he would just have to find Aburame and ask for some money, or he'll lose his head to his mother.

"You need to make your Byakugan range of vision to nearly 360 degrees, or your Kaiten wouldn't work perfectly. Byakugan is supposed to be able to sense the opponent movements. As for Hakkenshou Kaiten, you must learn how to release your chakra from your entire body. Then the chakra will absorbs the impact when your opponent tries to hit you by spinning like a top. Your chakra and your momentum will trap the attacker and cease the damage. Conclusion, Hakkenshou Kaiten was impenetrable defence. You wouldn't be hit at any cost." Neiji gave an explicit explanation.

"Neiji-nii san, controlling and releasing chakra was not easy," Hinata was gasping for air. Neiji was so strong, but training with him was fun. He wouldn't be so harsh with her, he would right her wrongs by instructing her with an amicable voice. He touches her gently whenever he was correcting her stances. Neiji was really a good teacher.

"I know, that's why one must mastered the Jyukei technique first. Don't worry, you will master it in short time, I'm sure. You've got talent." He smiled optimistically at her.

Three years ago he had insulted her for being an Ochikomore7 that was before Naruto knocked the sense out of him. And now, he was worshipping her like some besotted fool. And insist upon praising her for being a genius. He was grinning broadly to his ears. Training together was 'fun'. They(he to be exact) can do lots of things together. He shoved the lecherous thought out of his mind and tried to concentrate on Hinata's training. But he can't, all he sees every time his visions darted on her was how would it feels like when he took her into his arms. Yet did Neiji remain unmoving in his seat, only looking at her. Every now and then when he met her gaze, his heart beat frantically. For a sickening, dizzying moment he felt himself utterly open and exposed to every pain, every cruelty, every sorrow, that would destroy him. Yet often though had he thought of the other sensation. Of the other urging feelings. That bona fide suicidal scent of her body. He's to damned, tempted to touch her. He sighed again. Like he doesn't know what's the big problem is. Why they can't be together. It was merely because…

"Can we stop for now?" He didn't realise that she had been standing right next to him for the last three minutes.

"Yes, I think it's enough for today," he handed her a towel.

" What did he tell you?" Neiji said suddenly. Hinata fluttered several times.

"I beg your pardon,"

"What stories did Kiiba told you," he asked.

"Oh, that. It's about the Shiki Yama. There are rumours saying that a clan of elves lives there. Honto-ni ikitai! Kiiba promised to go there with me someday." She said.

Than a sudden thought struck his mind. An invinsible smile played across his blank face.

"Ikimashoyo," he stretched out his hand to her. Hinata was staring at him with a blank expression.

"Do-iu imi?"

" Ima, Shiki Yama-e iko." He smiled.

"Just look at that, who does he thinks he is." A manservant complained to his friend.

" Getting easy with Hinata sama, he really pissed me off. He's a bounke, how could Hiyashi sama ever let them getting along together." His friend spitted in disgust.

" Isn't he the genius from the branch family, the one whom said to be blessed with more Hyugas talent. Nakajima once saw them… getting intimate with each other." Another man said tediously . he continued.

" There's nothing we could do, Hiyashi sama fancy him. He's his nephew."

It was well after midnight, yet Hyuga's fortress blazed with light. Not a man, woman or child had sought rest. In every nook and cranny, every outbuilding and dependency, every passage and every inn, people were searching for two missing teens. Every ninja in Konoha had been instructed to help the searching. Some had been assigned to inspect the neighbouring nation, just in case the enemy had tried to kidnapped Hinata and Neiji to obtain the secrets of Byakugan just like the same incidents that had occurred twelve ears ago between Kaminari and Konoha.

"Since when had they been missing?" Tsunade sama was discussing the matter out with Hiyashi sama when her door abruptly open. Kiiba enters the room hastily.

" I think I know where to find them."

They had forded a river at a wide shallow place, full of the noise of stones and foam. The far bank was steep and slippery, the weather were arthritically cold. The Four Season Mountain was located at the centre of the world, at the edge of Konoha boundary. It was also the only place where the four season had occurred at the same time. And every season was at their maximum state. For example, if Konoha now was in winter, if you're approaching from Konoha, the sides of the mountain where it was related with will have a beyond cool temperature. But now that Fuyu was almost at their end, the temperature there was not so bitingly frigid as it was supposed to. It took them a whole day to arrive there from Konoha, and took them almost three days to venture the place. They had finally arrived at a place where Haru(spring) had come early. The air became warmer as they enter further more in the forest.

"This is insufferable." Neiji moan, he just can't believe for the fact that they were lost. He knew about the folk-tale, he knew he shouldn't come here in the first place. He knew it since the very beginning that their search will be nothing but in vain. But he still insisted to come here. He's a fool, he wanted to make her happy, but instead, he had made her feel miserable. They had been wandering, astray, searching for and exit for the last two days. He glanced at his sides. Hinata was in mess, grime had covered all over her. Her skin flushed in exhaustions. She was breathing heavily. Her hand blistered. He was in great remorse, the sight of her in that condition tormented his soul. He could not track back the way from where they had come. They've been trying many paths but still ended up coming to the same place. His Byakugan won't work here, there is something that constrained his range of vision. And it was not some shinobi no jutsu. It was something else, as if the forest had been bewitched. At night he had always aware of the sinister feelings that had concealed the atmosphere around them. They' have give up searching the elves a long time ago, now their only wish was to find the ways back home. Night came.

" This is it, we stuck in here forever." He had give up his hope. He laid on his back on the soft ground, closed his eyes and begins to imagine how would it feels like to be back in his room. Seems like tonight, they have to sleep under the stars again.

" No, Neiji-nii san, don't give up yet." Her voice begun to trembled. She was at her limits, she would broke off and cry at any moment, she knew. Neiji was looking at her, her soft lovely face tightened. He does realize that she was afraid, and he regretted that. But far more he saw her courage and admires it. He stroked her face with his knuckles.

"I'm sorry, this was all my fault," He admitted painfully. She shook her head,

"No it's not, please swear that you would not give up hope, we will go back home. Until then, please…" she plead. But what she said seems unachievable now.

"Why wouldn't you give it up? It's over, even ninjutsu won't work here. We'll never get out from this place." He sighed in woe. Neiji sat up and prepare a place for Hinata to sleep.

" Akiramenai, Sorewa atashino nindo dakara11," she said. He holds her hand tightly. She was trying to be strong. She always did, whenever she utters that word. It was Naruto's favourite line. Suddenly they heard a strange song, it echoed throughout the forest. Something big emerged thorough the darkness.

" Humans, you shouldn't have come here…" as the figure drew closer, the airs around them became heavy, their throats became sore, the thing was spreading something that had made them suffocates, then the thing comes closer, the silhouette became clearer, it was a very fair man, with pointed ears, blue eyes and blond hair. It was an elf.

Hinata woke up, her head felt heavy. She was very surprised to find out that she was at her own room in the Hyuga's residence. Her veins were throbbing madly, and her body felt weak. Thank god they are finally home. But then everything now appeared to be like some kind of bad dreams. As if they never took place. What had really happen back then, as far as she could remember, they have been lost for four days and the last thing she could remember was, something dreadful had came in the middle of the night but she didn't know what it is because she had fainted. The only one who could probably know the answer was Neiji. She gasped. Right, Neiji-nii san! Where is he? She stumbles to stand up, she was tottering to the door when in all sudden, somebody had opened them briskly. It was full moon that night; he was standing in front of her room, staring at her with a blank expression. The light shone dimly in her room as he blocked them with his body casting rays of light around his profile. He walked slowly in. His form darkening and Hinata senses something baleful with it.

"Neiji…ni san?" he was wearing the same outfit that he had wear the day they had ventured to Shikiyama together. And his garment was soiled and torn. He reached for her, she was so scared by his sudden action, had snapped . But he swiftly grabbed hold of her wrists as she tried to rush past him. He holds her firmly, urging her to stop her struggle. Her body seems to understand his silent bidding. He drew her to him and suddenly broke off. In his voice was torment.

Softly, sorrowfully Neiji said. " I thought you're dying. I can't do anything. I'm so weak, forgive me." He buried his face on her hair and started to sob. "Gomenna Hinata, orewa… yowai na, kowainakatta, orewa… nan demo dekinakatta, demo, omae no tameni… tsuyoku nareru. Orewa… mamoru kara, kanarazu mamoru kara."12 Hinata was dumbfounded. She didn't expect Neiji to behave like that. She had never saw him appeared so weak before. He was crying, why? Worried of her? She didn't know what to do. Her hands trembling, she embraced him, that's all she could think of, although her face was burning for she had never done this to anyone before.

"Nakanai-de," she whispered.

"Kore wa, Ore-no sei…"he said in great remorse.

She caressed his cheek tenderly. And look into his eyes.

"It's ours. You're not the only one to blame." Neiji moan, he suddenly became aware of the closeness between them. How her breast had feels like in that close contact. How appealing was her scent. He strived to restrain the darkening sensation that was urging him to take her. But when she placed her small hands on his chest he could hold no longer. His hands shook with the need to touch her… all of her. His hand slid inside of her robes, caressing her breast. Hinata stiffened. A shiver passed along her spine as Neiji's hands runs over her upper body.

" Neiji-nii san…" She was so naïve with such knowledge. She twisted her body, trying to break free. But that only make Neiji's craving for her more. She was not aware of his move; the experience was all too new to her. She could not guess what he'll do next, yet he had reached beneath her robes. His fingers were long and warm. She could feel the callused tips moved lightly over her skin.

"Let me go."

"No…" He tugged gently, forcing her to move closer. His hands slid up to her slender leg, over the slender calf to the back of her knee and slightly higher.

Hinata frozen. No one had ever touched her like that.

"Neiji…nii…san…" Neiji placed his forefinger to her mouth,

"Hush," he murmured. His finger trailed the lines of her lips, and as they parted he kissed her gently. Barely had she time to gasp. She didn't want it. Yet his kiss when it came was achingly pleasing. Then his mouth traced the delicate curve of her jaw, down to her slender throat, to the curve of her breast. Her flesh flushed. Blood pounded in his veins. Maddening, dark sensation surged through him, making him heedless of all else. He was going faster in every move. He knew he shouldn't, He couldn't stop it. Hinata body treacherously playing along.

"Neiji…"

He clasped her face between his hands and took her mouth once again, parting her lips for the hard, driving thrust of his tongue. The breathless little gasp she gave overwhelmed him. The strong wall that he had built for all this time, the wall that imprisoning his lust for her, had been shattered.

He wanted her too much…

Her body never knew such pleasure…

Yet, her heart also never knew such pain…

"Neiji…"


translation:.

1 Neiji why are you here?

2 Tasty

3 Bro. Neiji is very kind.

4 Happy

5 What!

6 You are Neiji's friend, right?

7 Drop-out/ Loser

8 I really want to go,

9 what do you mean?

10Now, let's go to Four Seasons Mountain.

11 I'll never give up, because that was my way of ninja,

12 I'm sorry Hinata, I'm so weak, and I'm scared. I can't even do anything. But, for your sake I'll be stronger. Because I'll protect you, always.

13 Don't cry

14 This is my fault


Sorry. I'll rewrite this later too. Some of the idea seems absurd especially about the elves, but please accept them... we're trying to make a story here!