Hey guys. A pretty common thread that I'm getting in my reviews is that I left a lot of stuff out. So I thought I would have a go at answering some of the major things. I will be working parts of this into my story so if you can wait for most of the answers don't read this. I just thought I would put it in because I'm a pretty impatient person myself.
I know I said Harm was covered in blood, but that was from Bud's point of view. In case you didn't guess Harm overdose of whiskey and painkillers. In cases of severe alcohol poisoning you cough or throw up blood, thus causing the "covered in blood line." Alcohol and prescription drugs are both depressants (lowering the power of the central nervous system) in Harm's case this lead to a collapsed lung (he was on a respirator). He needed to get his stomach pumped to remove the un-digested alcohol from his stomach and stop further damage. The doctor was worried about brain damage because of the lack of oxygen he suffered due to the collapsed lung, also prescription painkillers when taken in excess can literally fry your brain cells causing brain damage
I haven't finished the story yet, but I know were it is going. Don't worry about it too much. I am not going to turn this into a totally unbelievable sappy romance story. No one wakes up happy after trying to kill themselves and failing. They don't want to live now any more than they did before. I am trying to make this story some what believable so don't expect everything to turn out perfectly (nothing in life ever does)
In Australia we have only seen up until the middle of season nine, and Mac's actions during most of these episodes hasn't always been the best. So at the moment she isn't my favorite character in the show, therefore I am not going to turn her into some God that will save Harm from himself.
I live in Brisbane, Australia and you have no idea how hard it is to try and find a map of Washington D.C online. Because of this I took a bit of creative license and used the only hospital in D.C that I know of. I thought that maybe Bud could have requested that Harm be taken to Bethesda as it was a military hospital and Bud didn't know that Harm was no longer in the CIA.
I think that answers most of the questions I have been asked, but if you want to know anything extra please email me at this is my first story so any thing you think I am missing please tell me.
Thanks,
Tara (jaggergirl182)