Is there a return on the island?

by hippydude

The sound was becoming louder and louder, over the thickening rain and strong winds. Suddenly the wild grass was being tramples on.Another mysterious evil was being unleashed. Recently changed around a bit please review

2. Chapter 2

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10 minutes later

Jack and Kate are running trudging through the jungle, it's lashing down with rain like cold spears through their bodies

Kate: I thought you said the storm wasn't that far off (Screaming)

Jack: I didn't know it was gonna come this quick (shouting back)

Kate: (screaming) did you hear that?

Jack: What did you say?

Kate: (screaming) that sound did you hear it?

Seconds later

Jack: That?

Kate: Yes

A loud, grumbling sound could be heard just off into the distance into the jungle

Kate: Jack (whispers and stands close next to him), what is it?

Jack: I'm not sure, stay close

The sound was becoming louder and louder, over the thickening rain and strong winds

Suddenly the wild grass was being tramples on.

Another mysterious evil was being unleashed.

Sorry it's such a short chapter I'm still building up the story hope you liked it