Disclaimer: I dont own the Teen Titans or anything else in this story
I am proud to say on June 12th I will be publishing my masterpiece, which will be titled: The New Teen Titans, this story will be loosely based on my Fall of Robin series. This means you don't have to read the series and all will be explained well in the story, but seriously, if you liked this story, you will love this new one, the first chapter will be the longest chapter I have ever written and will leave you wanting more (hopefully)- THE JAYMAN
(PS this story will have a lot more action and be a lot more suspenseful and deeper and darker than this one)
(Also some reviewers have been asking me to review their stories, I have a lot of free time so if anyone wants me to review there story, just ask, don't worry I don't flame or anything like that, nor do I criticise much, I am too nice of a guy to do that)
GOTHAM CITY
WEST SUBURBS
GRAYSON HOME
Beast Boy pulled up to her house at around two in the morning. He was simply put, exhausted and out of it. He turned off the car after parking it, staggered to the front door and rang the doorbell several times. His clothes were a mess, wrinkled and out of place, his hair was a mess, and he hadn't shaved in a few days. So pretty much he looked like dirt.
Inside the house Raven was awoken by the bell, a little angry and a little curious she walked to the door. She was ticked that she was awaken and curious as to who would come so late. She was home alone; Robin had gone to Europe for work and wouldn't be back for a couple of days, his boss and father really worked him hard. She also wondered if some cheap burglar was attempting to break in, if that was the case, "He will be in for a surprise," Raven thought with a little smile. Robin had rubbed off on her a little bit.
She went to the door, opened it and was very alarmed and surprised to see Beast Boy standing in front of her. She noticed how much of a mess he was in and wondered if he was okay. "What is he doing here at this time and in this condition?" Raven thought.
"Hey Raven," he told her with a grim smile.
"Hello Beast Boy," she responded, a little coldly.
"Raven, do you think it will be alright, if I sleep here tonight, I am really in no shape to continue to drive, and anyways I don't have anywhere else to go," Beast Boy asked, sounding frustrated and tired.
Raven thought about it for a little bit, then looked into Beast Boy's eyes to see that he was telling the truth, and she said, "All right, you can stay here for as long as you need," she didn't like the fact that she sounded like some queen telling a servent he could go out for a little bit.
"Thank you Raven... You know Raven," Beast Boy asked.
"What?" Raven responded.
"This might not be that bad, you were the best I ever dated, and if I hadn't blown the whole thing all those years ago, I might not be like this," he said, almost to himself, like he was reflecting.
"We can talk more in the morning," Raven said, ignoring his comment as she led him to the guest room.
"Where's Robin, I should say hi before I sleep," Beast Boy asked.
"He went abroad, he won't be here for a few days," Raven told him.
Beast Boy entered the room, collapsed on the bed and fell asleep, he didn't realize how much he had changed, he didn't realize he could use Robin's absence to try to get Raven. Beast Boy was maturing and changing and letting go, without even realizing it himself.
THE NEXT MORNING
Beast Boy woke up at around ten in the morning; he jumped out of bed, took a shower, changed into something decent and went to the kitchen. He saw Raven at the table reading something and then Beast Boy stopped dead in his tracks; he began openly crying when he saw the sunshine surround Raven.
Raven got up,concerned at why Beast Boy was such a wreck and asked, "What is wrong Beast Boy?"
"You don't understand, the way you stood in that light, reminded me of that night, God lead me to Nagi's garden of love," Beast Boy said with much emotion, "I was so swept away, I had nothing to say, shows how much of a fool I was, yet I was so lost in her beauty and love," Beast Boy continued.
"Beast Boy, you, you, had sex with her?" Raven asked in disbelief, she had heard rumours but didn't believe them.
"Yes, I should have waited until the time was right, should have asked her to come to me slowly, to come to me sweetly," Beast Boy reflected.
"Beast Boy, this is a bit overwhelming, and touching at how you reflect, but why don't you go to her, why have you left her?" Raven asked.
"I don't know! I love you! But now I am not sure!" Beast Boy screamed out his confusion.
"I cannot help you Beast Boy, what I can tell you, is on my wedding you went on a right of passage, and now you have to figure out what it was and what it means, on your own," Raven told him firmly
"If only I could find her now, Raven I need your help, I have to make things better," Beast Boy pleaded.
"I can't take you to her today, but you can communicate to her," Raven told him.
"Do it," Beast Boy said.
"She already wrote a letter to you, she wanted me to give this to you," Raven said as she handed Beast Boy the letter.
Dear Beast Boy,
Beast Boy, you have broken me, you told me how sweet your love was, you wowed me and persuaded me to give you my all that night and before, but now that I reflect, you only taught me these things about love: love is tragic, love is hard, love is pain, from this I conclude, love is definitely best when it is gone. I guess the problem was I wanted more, more than you could give, more that you could handle, for a love that wasn't there for you. So Beast Boy, since that is the case, I will never bother you again, I will never talk to you again, I will try not to think of you again. I wish you well on your quest to find Raven's heart and hope you have a joyful life. But it would be wrong if I leave you like this, I have to punish you in some way for manipulating me, so here it is, you will never see your child, you will never hear a word about your child for as long as you live, the child, when he or she is born will never have a father or know a father. The child will be taught of how all men I met betrayed me or tricked me, especially there father.
-Nagi
Beast Boy crumpled the letter in his hand after several minutes of stunned absorption, Raven could tell the letter troubled Beast Boy by how down and tense Beast Boy got.
"Can you send a letter?" Beast Boy asked.
"Sure," Raven responded, baffled for several reasons, Beast Boy wasn't backing down or asking for advice, nor was he trying to seduce Raven as he had been trying for so long.
Beast Boy wrote a letter and handed it to Raven, Raven transported it straight to Nagi on Azarath, the letter read:
Dear Nagi,
I am so sorry, I ran away, I manipulated and used you, I ruined you, but Nagi, I have learned from my mistakes. Nagi, I am desperate for changing, struggling to find the truth, I am closer to where I was several weeks ago, except now, now I am chasing after you. I have fallen even more in love with you, I am letting go of everything, my job, my life, my friends, I will stay here until you make me yours, I am staying until you give me your love and trust again. I am gaining what I am lacking, I am incomplete, I will take any invitation from you, only if you take me, I have fallen so deep in love with you.
Yours truly,
Beast Boy
This was the final set up chapter, think it was a bit slopy but now I go on my new path to ending the story, next chapter, will be good and we can switch gears to the one I had two chapters ago, so just hang tight and the next chapter will come
Don't forget to check out The New Teen Titans! (When it comes out tommorow)
SO, AS I ALWAYS SAY, PLEASE REVIEW!
Now its time for: THEJAYMAN Chat ( I like the name) for Chapter 15:
Jackalobe- thanks for putting my story on your favorite list, you are the 28 reader to have done so, thank you verry much, it really means a lot to me that so many people are liking this story. That was probably the funniest one you wrote so far, I was really laughing at this one, very entertaining.You could probably make this story into a humor story, didn't think it was possible until I started reading your reviews. Sadly, all hope for BBxRae maybe gone because Beast Boy is growing up and has finally made a decission in his life that he will pursue, however, I am sure you will continue to review!
casui- glad you caught up with the story in three days! Very happy you are reviewing and hope it continues. Glad you love the story and I am happy you see I have set it up so I have several paths and cards to play as the story moves on.
BBRaelover4eva- those reviews I enjoy because they tell me how much the reader is enjoying it and keeps me up to post these chapters consistantly, thank you verry much and hope the reviews continue.
StickLad- I did post that chapter for you, you are one of the core reviewers, and I felt it was the best I could do for the support you have given all my stories. Glad you are enjoying and still updating, sorry that your trip was cut short, I hate it when things like that happen
ttinuhpfanforever- thank you for the well written review and analysis, I like it when reviewers analyse the story, gives me a sense if the reviewer is getting the story or not, luckily you are getting it, please keep on reviewing, I look forward to them.
nightwingluver- glad you continue to review, and yeah, BB did get some sense knocked into him didn't he? Keep on reviewing, I love them!
AnimationWickedRaven- I also would like to thank you for supporting this story and others I have written, thank you so much and I hope your reviews continue, enjoyed this one and hope to get more as we move this story on
Vandagirl- thanks for the compliments about Nagi and her development and design, she was really a character that just clicked in my mind one day and I just had to put her in the story. I like to put flaws in my characters and that, and if you like those types of made up characters with flaws and such then you will love The New Teen Titans (I am really advertising this story), and yes I have started reviewing the story and I like it a lot. Hope the reviews continue, and hopefully, hopefully I can make a super review for your story!
iamhollywood- spelling never was my best subject, but I do the best I can, and the first sixteen chapters were poorly written, however, the last chapters I am writting with my new techniques on getting grammer corrected so you should soon be seeing improvements in latter chapters, thanks for the review and hope it continues, I love those reviews!
Dark-Canuck- thank you so much for the continued support and hope it can continue in this story and on my next big project (hint, hint) I have learned a lot as this story goes on and the lessons I gain from this story are being carried over to my next big project which I rever to as "my masterpiece" (yes I realized I also called this my masterpiece but my new story is more powerful, I think)
Rae/BB4evernever- sorry that it doesn't look like it will end up BBxRae, and don't be confident it will end up BBxNagi either, I am really tempted to make BB get no one, but I still haven't made a decision on that issue yet, keep on reading andreviewing, I liked the review and hope you continue to review.
lovex3spell- the beginning wasn't that impressive either, however, as I have mentioned above, this story has matured me as a writer as time goes on and I am glad to hear other reviewers noticing this, gives me confidence and makes me feel good. I usually update very fast, as I did in this chapter and hopefully will do the same for upcoming ones too, thanks for the review and hope you continue to review
BlackGothFaerie- glad you liked the last chapter and am also happy you enjoyed this chapter. I love these short and sweet reviews and love to recieve them, thanks again and hope you continue to review!
KellyClarkstonGirl- Thank you a lot for the kind words and support, as I said earlier, I love those sweet and simple reviews which just make me feel good on the inside. Thanks again and hope the reviews continue
Raven's Faithful Sidekick- a little harsh, but, if you want to waste your paper and burn it, its up to you, glad for the review and hope you continue eventhough it might not end the way you want it too, but I am not saying its a for sure BBxNagi, it could be a BBxnoboddy, just another possibility to hate me for, also, gotta advertise, if you liked the story but not the pairing then you will enjoy The New Teen Titans because it is a BBxRae pairing
WickedWitchoftheSE- people shouldn't be concentrating on RaexRobin too much, the focus is on Beast Boy, anyways, thanks for the review and support and hope you continue to review
Thanks for the reviews and I hope they continue, I am very happy that this story is still keeping a steady flow of reviewers, despite the fact that there favorite pair wasn't picked, I really appreciate that and hope the reviews continue
ONE LAST MESSAGE then I can shut up: the story will be updated again in four days, not two or three, just want to give some people catching up some time to review, thank you, and if the flow of reviews continue, the fast updates will contine, thanks again and:
PLEASE REVIEW!
(sorry for advertising my new story which will come out tommorow, I really love it and hope you all can read and review it)
(And alsoto all those angry BBxRae readers who liked my style but not the pairing, its BBxRae in that story so please check it out when it comes on the 12th)