Well here is chapter 2 it may not be as good as the first but im just getting started. Thanks for the reviews.

Disclaimer: I do not own avatar the last air bender but I do own kalee

(did I do that right 0.o)

oh sorry I forgot to tell u how she looks ok here it is right now she has a dress that is black this is like a skirt that goes down to her feet then the shirt is of like a white cloth that went over her neck and covers her female parts (like on final fantasy 10 the what her name is the sumnor's shirt is yeah like that) sorry I really don't know how to describe the shirt. Then she has knee high boots. Her hair is Medium length blond curly hair with red and black streaks in it. She has ocean blue eyes and kind of tan skin. She had a necklace the chain was fire color and on it had a stone with water in it and holding the stone was that of a leafy color and the cover of the stone was of ice so it had all element (air is the ice because air causes coldness and coldness causes ice get it) her mother gave it to her so she loved it and would never take it off

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Chapter two

"Aang so you're the legendary avatar huh."

"Yup so you heard of me"

Yup my mother and father told me stories bout you and how u are the last air bender.

Yes that is true

Oh that is so cool it is nice to meet u

Nice to meet u to

So kalee (sokka is asking) where's your family

I don't know I came and everybody was gone there was burn marks on the houses so I guess the fired nation

It sniff was horrible

That's wrong says katara

smiles big oh well cant let the dark get u down (she is sad but she has been taught don't show emotions like sadness it's a sign of weakness so she covers)

walks up to aang everybody asleep?

Yup

pokes him hard

oww stop doing that

pokes harder

y are u doing that

because I cant believe its you wow

ok go get some sleep

ok

everybody is asleep

screams no no your not going to get me noooooooooooooo!

wakes up everybody staring at her umm hi

so bad dream (katara)

yeah don't worry ill get over it ill be fine ok oh yeah and thank you so much for asking me to come with you

its fine ok

ok falls to sleep

dream

she gets off of the her little boat to see fire coming from her village so she runs to go see what is going when she gets there she has a sad welcome she sees most of the villagers with missing body parts, heads on spears along with some burned to ash or disgustingly deformed from burning she knew it was that of the fire nations fault for this but then she see her best friends head roll off of a hill and she decides to walk up as she does carefully she see the fire nation taking all the women and decapitating them along with the little kids of her village she covers her mouth and was about to scream she then knew that she was the last element alive so she decides to keep it that way so she runs for it then meets aang and his friends.

End of dream

she wakes up sweating then she decides no more sleep for tonight she gets up and decides to do some element bending so she could keep her skills up. She walks out to the water and does some water bending then as the sun rose she did some of her air bending then katara wakes up so see this but she stays quiet and just watches and told herself that kalee was an element and didn't want them to know so katara decided to keep her mouth shut for now just till the time was right. She makes it known that she just woke up so that kalee would stop before aang woke. She had good timing because with in bout 30 sec. later aang woke up then he woke up sokka

hey thanx for the reviews but umm yeah tell me what I need to improve and I will ok so review