This is a rewrite of this chapter (not enough description in it and this was bugging me) I kept the original authors notes though
A/N this is a Gohan/Usagi fic I just want to establish a decent storyline before putting that also Usagi is 16 and Gohan 18 this is my first fic so be nice and I don't like flames.
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CHAPTER ONE
Usagi was walking down the hall leading to her room thinking about how odd Darien had been acting around her, lately he had been avoiding her and was really quiet when ever she was around
Why is he always so uncomfortable around me lately like he knows something I don't know and he wants to avoid telling me Rini walked out of her room with her little bunny backpack on.
"Oh hi Chibi-Usa, what's wrong"
"Nothing" she replied looking down.
"Chibi-usa, are you sure," Usagi said skeptically
"Ihavetogohomesooncausedadsaysthatistayoverheretoomuch" Usagi didn't catch a single word of this.
'Huh"
"I have to go home soon cause dad says that I stay over here too much"
"What!" Usagi said practically bringing the house down with the sound of her voice.
"Yeah see you later Usagi" Chibi-Usa ran out the front door.
"Why though she's doing perfectly fine over here" Usagi glanced down at her watch realized she was late for a date with Darien and ran off to meet him.
Gohan was having a rough day. His tail had grown back during lunch, a bunch of teachers had yelled at the class and given everyone detention cause some kids were throwing pencils in the ceiling and Videl had almost caught him on the roof on the way too school. On his way home he decided that a little training would be a good idea so he could calm down and not have to worry about school for a little while. So when he got home he put on a gi and started training.
"It's not fair, Rini shouldn't have to leave" Rei commented " she likes it here and Hotaru was going to come back for a while"
" I know but there is nothing we can do" Makoto said "though something we can do is give Usagi a decent birthday even though Rini left yesterday, Usagi needs cheering up anyway"
"Yeah" replied the rest of the scouts
They were at Rei's temple for a study session, which then became a surprise party session
"Why did Rini have to go she didn't do anything" Usagi looked up, crying. Her room looked clean because her mom had gone in there and cleaned up. Usagi looked up at the calendar. "Its my birthday and I'm crying how silly"
The sound of an explosion sounded outside
"Huh what was that"?
Usagi raced out of the house and saw a guy who looked to be about 19 looking through the rubble of an abandoned building that he'd apparently blew up just a moment ago. He heard her and turned around
"No you're dead, you cant be here" Usagi said while trying not to scream
"Well there you are Serenity I was hoping that would lure you out, now you are coming with me" He scooped her up and disappeared. The only sound that could be heard for miles around was just an echo.
"Help!"
Vegeta was training. punch, punch, kick, kick "heh its almost lunch maybe I should take a break... Nah"Help
"What, that voice sounded familiar, I wonder what that was" Vegeta stopped training and walked out of the room with a thoughtful look on his face. When he got to the living room, Trunks was watching cartoons. Vegeta sat down on the couch still thinking.
"Its kind of strange, Vegeta actually seems to be quiet lately, he hasn't broken the GR for a while he hasn't yelled and he's even stopped training for a while today" Bulma looked at the calendar on the wall "today is June 30th, huh, this day ought to be marked, Vegeta actually stopped training, I wonder what he's doing?" she walked off.
What do you think, please tell me in a review and ill try to get a second chapter out soon, please review.
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