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Chapter 14
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"Sesshoumaru?!" the Inu gang said. "Who is Sesshoumaru?" Jin asked. "Oh I know," Botan said and took out a book. "Sesshoumaru is an Inu youkai. Taiyoukai of the Western lands. Older half-brother of Inuyasha. A cold and distance person. Or in other word an emotionless person," Botan said and put her book back. ~Or in my word another Hiei~ Kagome thought. "Hello little girl what is your name?" Kagome asked. "Rin's name is Rin," Rin said in a cute way. "Rin want to know everyone names please," Rin said. "Hello I'm Kagome or in my youkai form my name is Ayumi," Kagome said. "Mice to meet you ugh Kagome-chan," Rin said.
"Hello Rin my name is Kurama," Kurama said. "Hello I'm Botan," Botan said with a cheerful voice. "I'm Yusuke," Yusuke said in a bored tone. "I'm the great Kuwabara," the baka said. "I'm Jin and that person over there is Touya," Jin said and pointed to Touya. "Hello," Touya said. "Hello I'm Sango nice to meet you Rin-chan," Sango said. "I'm Miroku," Miroku said and walked near her, but got knock out from Sango and Botan. "Hello I'm Kikyo and that person is Inuyasha," Kikyo said. "Hn," Came from Hiei. "That person in the black is Hiei," Kagome told Rin. "Mama what about me?" Shippo asked. "Hai Hai. Rin-chan this is my pup Shippo and a kitsune I have found," Kagome told her.
"Hello minna-san," Rin said and bowed. The bushes rattle again. Only this time an ugly toad youkai came out. "Jaken-sama," Rin said. "Rin get out here now," Jaken said. Rin just stood there and blink her eyes. "Rin!" Jaken shouted. "Jaken were not going to kill her," Kagome told him. "How would I know you won't fox?" Jaken questioned. "Jaken-sama, Kagome-chan won't hurt me," Rin said. "That name sound like Inuyasha wench," Jaken said. "I am NOT Inuyasha wench!" Kagome yelled. "Wait I thought that girl was a human. Not a kitsune," Jaken said. "This girl has a name you know!" Kagome said. "Does it look like I care?" Jaken asked. "Why you ugly toad!" Kagome shouted.
Kagome got her spirit whip out and tried to hit Jaken. "Watch it woman," Jaken said. "You Ugly Toad! I told you my name is Kagome! KA-GO-ME! Get it to your small little brain!" Kagome yelled at him (Jaken). "Fox I would not want you to kill my servant," a cold voice said. A shadow came out from the tree.
"Sesshoumaru-sama!" Rin shouted and ran to him hugging his leg. Sesshoumaru put a claw on top of her head and patted it. "What are you doing here?" Inuyasha asked rudely. "I was looking for Rin you half-breed. So I see you got more humans on your little team," Sesshoumaru said. "Where is that little miko that is always around you people?" Sesshoumaru asked. "Gr…….even the Lord of the Western Lands don't know who to respect a girl," Kagome said.
Sesshoumaru turned to face Kagome, but at what he saw surprise him (but he didn't show it tho). "You are the human the travels with my baka half-breed brother?" Sesshoumaru asked with his emotionless mask in place. "Yes, I am, but thanks to Naraku "little" kitsune turned me into a youkai," Kagome told him. Sesshoumaru saw the kitsune in her arms. ~What is the Lord of the Southern Lands doing here? ~ Sesshoumaru wondered. "May I ask what the Lord of the Southern Lands is doing here?" Sesshoumaru asked.
The kitsune smirk (if it can) and jumped out of Kagome's arms. When it was on the floor a white light went around the kitsune. Everyone block there eyes from the light. When the light died now standing the place of the kitsune is a youkai lord. A male standing tall with brownish red hair that flow to his knees. Two cute ears on top of his head which were black with a red tip. Same color as his tail. On his forehead a marking of two swords that made an "x" sign. On his cheeks were two dark blue strips on each side. With claws and one dark blue stripes on each arms. He was as tall as Sesshoumaru but he looked younger. The kitsune was wearing black fighting clothes (why black? I don't know I just like the color black). He was had a little red eyes.
"Well it's nice to see you again Sesshoumaru," the Lord of the Southern Lands said. "Um…..who are you?" Kagome asked. "Yeah who are you and what are you?" Yusuke half asked and half said. "I am the Lord of the Southern Lands. My name is Kiyoushimaru (name sucks I know but I couldn't think of any other name), but for short they call me Kiyoushi. I am a kitsune youkai like the fair lady over there," Kiyoushimaru said and also point to Kagome when he said fair lady. ~Gr……I think he is hitting on Kagome-san! Kurama thought.
"May I ask Kiyoushimaru-sama a question?" Kagome asked. "Please ask away," Kiyoushimaru said in a light humor. "What is the Lord of the Southern Lands doing here?" Kagome asked. "I was protecting my lands from a youkai, but I got hurt. So I changed into my small kitsune form and try to heal myself but then I fell asleep because I just too much of my energy in one day. Then you came and healed me and here I am telling you what happen," Kiyoushimaru said. "Now it's my turn asking a question. Who are you peoples?" Kiyoushimaru asked. "I'm sorry for being rude. I'm Ayumi in my kitsune form. My human name is Kagome," Kagome said. "Yo I'm Yusuke," Yusuke said. "Hello I'm Sango," Sango said and Kirara jumped on her shoulder. "And this is Kirara," Sango said and petted Kirara on the head. "Meow," Kirara meowed. "I'm Miroku," Miroku said and bowed. "I'm the great Kuwabara," Kuwabara said. "I'm Jin the wind master," Jin said with a grin. "Hello I'm Touya the ice master," Touya said. "Hello I'm Kurama," Kurama said. "Hn," Hiei said. "That is Hiei," Kurama said. "Hello Kiyoushimaru-sama I'm Botan," A cheerful Botan said. "Hello I'm Kikyo and that is Inuyasha," Kikyo said.
"Nice to meet you all," Kiyoushimaru said. "So where are you heading?" Kiyoushimaru asked. "Don't know. We're look for shards," Kagome told him. Then Kiyoushimaru turn to face Sesshoumaru. When Kiyoushimaru was going to ask him what he was doing here. Inuyasha talk before him. "Sesshoumaru what are you doing here?" Inuyasha asked rudely. "I was looking for Rin. Jaken lose Rin again and you lose 100 years for your life," Sesshoumaru said in a warning tone. "H…..hai Sesshoumaru-sama," Jaken said and bowed. Kiyoushimaru smiled at the sight. ~Why is Jaken so loyal to Sesshoumaru? ~ Kiyoushimaru wondered. ~Man that toad is starting to scary me~ Kagome thought. ~I wonder what she (Kagome) is thinking~ Kurama wonder. ~ Hm…..it looks bad. Seem like a love triangle (can you name who is?)~ Botan thought. ~Wow Kagome-chan is getting a lot of guys after her~ Sango thought.
"Would you like to come to my castle for a rest?" Kiyoushimaru ask. "I would if we have time, but we have to look for the shards," Kagome told him. "So you mind then if I join your "little" adventure?" Kiyoushimaru asked. "No your not! We already got more stupid humans to take care of we don't need a lord to come along," Inuyasha said while holding Ms. Clay pot's cold hand. ~ Is that dirt and mud I smell? ~ Kiyoushimaru thought. "Inuyasha let him come if he wants. My friends are not weak wither," Kagome said, "Feh," Inuyasha said and walked away with ms. Clay pot.
"Kagome-san may I ask was that a dead corpse walking around?" Kiyoushimaru asked. "Hm……are you talking about Ms. Clay pot over there?" Kagome asked and pointed to the walking pot. "Yes I am talking about her. She smells like the Earth and mud," Kiyoushimaru said. "Yeah she's dead. Also smells really bad," Kagome said. Everyone laughing at the comment, but Sesshoumaru and Hiei. They were giving each other death glares.
"Kagome-san I will have to go back to my castle to tell them I'm fine, and not dead yet. I will find you to join your adventure. Till then," Kiyoushimaru said and in a flash he was gone. "Sesshoumaru-sama will you be joining us also?" Kagome asked. "No. I came to here to find Run. Now I found here I will be leaving," Sesshoumaru said. He pick up Rin and also left in a flash.
"Come on you guys before Inuyasha and Ms. Clay pot gets made and say "weak humans"," Kagome said. She went over to Kurama and smiled. ~When she smile I think my heart does a flip-flop~ Kurama thought. He then smiled back at Kagome. Kagome blush when Kurama smile back at her. She turn her head hoping he won't see.
*With Kiyoushimaru*
While Kiyoushimaru was running he was also thinking about Kagome also. ~ She is the most beautiful kitsune youkai I ever saw. Also she don't hang around me for my lands and power~ Kiyoushimaru thought. ~ I know I should give her something to protect herself with and something else~ Kiyoushimaru thought.
END OF CHAPTER
Well hope you all like it. So if I made a lame name for the Lord of the Southern Lands but I couldn't think of anything else. So please review. Thanks to all those who review. I'M SORRY FOR SPELLING "SPIRIT" WRONG!!!
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So thanks to everyone who reviewed. Now time for me to ask my reviews and people who read my story. I have a question a really big time question. Well not really big question just a poll
Should I change the paring? Please vote on which one:
1. Kurama/Kagome and Hiei/Sango
Or
2.Kurama/Kagome/OC and Hiei/Sango/Miroku
Now please vote. It ends in two chapters.