What is love?
Ch 2
Ok, I'm mad, ONLY ONE FLIPPIN REVIEW? And it was from my best friend. Ok, the only reason I am updating is cause I wanna. That is all!
The next morning Yusuke got up, early…(I know scary) and checked the site again. LitanKurama had updated. "YES!" Yusuke said, which woke everyone up.
"Yusuke, what are you shouting about?" Kurama asked.
"She updated! Lets read the second chapter." Yusuke said. Everyone gathered around the desk and Yusuke began to read:
The next morning Hiei awoke before Kurama did. Hn, my fox is still asleep…wait, MY fox? Where did that come from? He is not mine…although he is vary attractive…wait? Stop! Stop thinking such nonsense, I am the forbidden child, I can not love nor can I be loved. Hiei tried to clear his thoughts. He flittered out the window and into the cool morning air. I need to think… Hiei went to a secret part of the forest and sat in is favorite tree.
Back at Kurama's house Kurama had woken up… "I guess Hiei left, and I was going to tell him too." Kurama said. He got dressed and left his house. He walked to a secret part of the forest that, he thought, only he knew about. He sat under his favorite tree. It always reminded him of Hiei. "Hmm…Fate is funny…you never know what will happen…" Kurama said, speaking to the wind. "I wonder why fate has decided to have me fall in love with him, my cute little fire demon." Hiei looked down, shocked at what Kurama said.
He…he loves me? But…why? Hiei thought. He continued to look down at Kurama.
"I don't know why I love him, I know he will never love me back, but…a small part of me still hopes…" Kurama said with a sigh. Hiei, who was not paying attention, snapped a branch. Kurama looked up with a start. "H…Hiei? When did you get here?" Kurama said, his face turning Bright red.
"Hn, since before you got here." Hiei said. Just lie, damn you! Just say Hn and get it over with! But he could not lie to his fox. "I heard what you said."
"Oh…I…I see. Well, I must be getting back. My mother is probably worried about me." Kurama said as he stood to leave. Hiei grabbed Kurama's sleeve. He pulled Kurama down and captured his Kurama's lips with his own.
"I never said I didn't feel the same fox, you assume the worst to quickly." Hiei said when they broke apart.
"Hiei, you…" Kurama stuttered.
"Yes fox, I love you." Hiei said. They kissed again. Kurama smiled. "What are you smiling about fox?" Kurama was staring at the lake that sat in the middle of the forest. "What?" Kurama just smiled bigger. He picked up the little demon and carried him to the lake. "What are you doing Fox?" Kurama dumped him into the lake. "What was that for!"
Kurama shrugged, "I don't know, I just thought you would look cute wet." Kurama said. Hiei glared at him.
"Baka fox." Hiei muttered. They left the clearing and went back to Kurama's house so Hiei could get dry cloths on.
Yusuke finished the chapter and looked behind him. Kuwabara looked ready to puck while Hiei and Kurama were blushing like mad. "Lets review." Yusuke said. He clicked the go button. Hay, great job. My friends are gonna send a review too, so yeah! Keep up the good work. I think it is turning out awesome! Update soon. Spirit Boy Yusuke!
After he sent the review Kurama toke Yusuke's seat and clicked the go button. This story is well written. Not bad. It is vary interesting. Keep up the good work. Kitsune Kurama.
Hiei was next to review. Hn, baka author, baka story, update. Forbidden child
And last was Kuwabara. Good job, kinda creepy, but update! The great Kazuma Kuwabara. Once they all sent their reviews they ate breakfast and left to visit Genkai.
When they arrived they saw a girl with long brown hair in a ponytail sitting on the top step. "Hello, and who are you guys?" She asked.
"We should be asking you." Yusuke said.
"Lita Kitsune! Nice to meet ya, Yusuke. I've read your reviews, so ya like my Yaoi stories, huh?" Lita asked.
"Your LitanKurama? Nice to meet ya. Yeah, I love your stories! They rule! These are my friends…"
"Hiei, Kurama and the baka, I know. I am the one who wrote the story. And…I know something you don't!" Lita said, beaming.
"And what is that, baka." Hiei said.
"You and Kurama have been together for two months now." Lita said. Yusuke and Kuwabara stared at their two, blushing friends.
Ok, hope ya'll like! I tried! I like it, any who, update! ……I mean Review!
