School started might update more less than I use to. Sorry but blame school. They suck! Also the flamer sucks to!!
To: Ele Goddess of Elements, if you want to flame someone please have a fan fiction. I mean I know my grammar sucks like shit but at least I have posted something. Truth to tell my grammar still sucks, but I'm working on it. So if you pick to flame someone at least have a fan fiction so let the person you flame see what you can do, and it took me a while to update was because like other students I have school. I think my school work comes before fan fiction so I can't update my freakening fic like every day. I mean for those people who do good job, but for me I like to update when I like to. And to make a short note short. Have a story before you flame someone about their grammar.
That is all I wanted to say to you Ele Goddess of Elements.
Chapter 22:
Last time:
"I'll help," Sango and Nakira both offered.
"Thanks you two," Kagome thanked her friends.
Right now:
Sango and Nakira offered to help Kagome. The girls were busy making the big gang some lunch. Botan was hanging out with the guys. She was mostly talking with Miroku.
"So how did you come to travel with Inuyasha and Kagome?" Botan asked.
"Well at first I stole Kagome's shards and also took her bike. I also took Kagome….," Miroku went on talking about how he and Kagome meet.
"Ohhhhhhh," was what all Botan said after she heard the story. Than she felt a hand feeling on her bottom. Her org popped out of no where and she smacked Miroku on the head with it.
Near the trees is our favorite fox and fire demon. Kurama was sitting on the ground while Hiei was in a tree. One of his leg with bent and hanging off the tree while the other was straight.
"Hn stupid human. Never learn," Hiei piped up and turn his head the other way.
Kurama laughed softly. He thought it was amusing watching the pervert get hit on the head for his actions.
You find that amusing don't you? Youko asked
Yes I quite do Kurama truthfully answered.
If he touches MY Kagome I'll kill him Youko promised.
I'm sure he knows what is off limit Kurama assured Youko.
He better or he will lose an arm Youko angrily said.
Kurama kept quiet and didn't listen to Youko's rumble. He turn to Kagome and the other girls and watched them cook lunch. Kagome was stirring the ramen while Sango told Nakira what everything was. Nakira looked more interested in the things Kagome bought from the future.
Inuyasha was still in a tree never left his spot. 'Kagome looks happy' he thought. 'Well of course she would look happy. She has everyone close to her' Inuyasha told himself. (His talking to himself) Inuyasha looked at Kagome's way with a sad look. 'I cause her pain but she still smiles like nothing has happen' he thought while looking at a smiling Kagome.
Kiyoushimaru walked over to Kurama and sat down by him.
"She looks happy," Kiyoushimaru commented.
Kurama kept quiet, but looked at the Southern lands lord. "I guess she may look happy but her heart must hurt," Kurama pointed out.
"She must have been in a lot of pain and have had a lot of practice hiding her pain from everyone," Kiyoushimaru looked at Kagome.
Kagome had on a smile but Kiyoushimaru saw threw it. Her heart hurtled.
"Even though she is sad. She wants the people around her happy," Kurama announced.
Kiyoushimaru nodded his head in agreement.
Kagome looked up and smiled at Kiyoushimaru and Kurama. Kiyoushimaru and Kurama smiled back.
"Sango can you please stir the ramen. I'm going to go get the bowls," Kagome asked while she got up.
"Sure. I'll teach Nakira how to also," Sango teased.
Nakira blushed was fainted, but Kagome saw and smiled. Kagome walked over to where her bag was and she dig to get sets of bowls for everyone who needs to eat. After a while of digging Kagome got what she needed and she went to Sango and Nakira. Nakira was stirring the ramen while Sango watched.
"I got the bowls," Kagome said and she held up the bowls.
"Grate lets get the ramen in the bowl before there is no water left," Sango exclaimed.
Nakira giggled a little.
"Hey! Its not funny," Sango shouted at the giggling cat.
Nakira giggled more.
"sigh I give up," Sango proclaimed and threw her hands up in the air.
Kagome giggled along with Nakira and seat the bowls on the floor. Kagome handed Nakira and Sango a pair of chopstick to get the ramen in the bowls. After a while of doing that lunch was ready.
"Shippo! Lunch is ready honey," Kagome shouted to the pup.
Shippo came running to his mother figure. "Yeah!" he shouted in happiness.
Kurama walked over to the three girls. "There is one for me right?" he asked.
"Yes there is. Right over there," Kagome pointed with her let since her right has Shippo in it.
Kurama smiled at her and Kagome returned the smile. Yusuke and Kuwabara were coming. They were running pretty fast. Another race of theirs maybe everyone thought. The out come was Yusuke is the winner.
Kagome turn to the tree Inuyasha was sitting in. She knew the half-demon wouldn't miss out on ramen. Sango patted her shoulder and gave her a look that said "I'll give it to him" look. Kagome mouthed a thank you to her "sister".
Everyone sat in a circle to eat (take out Hiei and Inuyasha). Kiyoushimaru and Nakira sniffed it. Yusuke and Kuwabara were eating the thing like there was no food in the world or something. Sango, Miroku, Botan, Shippo, Kagome and Kurama were eating like normal people would eat a meal. Kiyoushimaru, Nakira, Jin and Touya stared at the ramen.
"You guys should try it before it gets cold," Kagome told them after she was done chewing.
"Yea. If you don't want it I'll help you finish it," Kuwabara said with a mouth full of food.
"Where are you manners?" Botan ask the idiot.
He was to busy eating to pay attention to Botan. By the said there was a small bowl for Kirara and Tsukikage. Kirara was nibbling at the ramen. Tsukikage sniffed the ramen and tilted it's head cutely to the side.
Kagome giggled at the action of the kitsune.
"Tsukikage try it. It's good," Kagome ushered the kitsune to eat something. Tsukikage meowed in responding to its master commanded. Tsukikage went over to the ramen and took at nibble at it. Tsukikage meowed at the taste and started to eat it like Kirara.
Kiyoushimaru and Nakira starred at the foreign food. Kiyoushimaru picked up the chopstick and tried it. He chewed it and much to his displeasure he liked it. Nakira tasted her helpful hand food. She chewed the noodles and liked it.
Jin and Touya looked at their bowl and decide to try it before their bowl gets eaten up. Jin and Touya chewed the noodle and as like everyone else. Like the noodles.
"Kagome this is good," Nakira commented after she finish chewing her noodles.
"It was all me, Nakira. You and Sango helped me make it," Kagome smiled at the neko.
After eating lunch
Kagome got all the dirty bowls and chopsticks and put them in a plastic bag, and stuffed it in her backpack.
(Sounds like me but I only do it with paper)
"Well I guess we should rest here. We spent most of the time here anyways," Kagome told the whole group.
"Who agrees raise your hand please," Kagome asked for vote.
Everyone raised their hand, but for Inuyasha, Hiei, Kiyoushimaru and Nakira. Inuyasha was in his tree in his mind right now and Hiei never cared. Kiyoushimaru and Nakira didn't care as along as they were with Kagome and co.
So before the sun went down the girls headed to look for a hot spring. Every demon in the gang sniffed the air but Inuyasha. They all pointed to one place and the was west from the spot. Kagome gather her things and other stuff she needed to take a bath with. The girls brought their weapons and bath things.
"Miroku if you peek you wish you haven't," Kagome warned the houshi.
"Don't worry I won't," Miroku assured with a smile and a wave of goodbye.
"You better not," Sango glared at Miroku. Botan was smiling like she always is and Nakira just looked confused at what Sango and Kagome were talking about. Than the girls head off for the hot springs. They disappeared threw the trees in the forest.
"You know I'm going to go take a walk around the forest," Miroku lied and started to walk the girls had walked.
Kurama caught onto his collar and dragged him to a tree. Kiyoushimaru got out a rope from somewhere and tied him up.
(Wow things pop up from no where get a cookie in the air and take a bite out of it)
"Now be a good houshi and stay put," Kurama growled at him.
"Yes, be a good houshi," Kiyoushimaru agreed with Kurama and walked over to a tree and leaned on it. Kiyoushimaru kept an eye on the pervert priest.
Kurama looked over at the two quiet trouble makers. When he looked at them he say Yusuke and Kuwabara taking a nap. Yusuke was laying on the grass with both arms tuck behind his head and his legs were cross that made an "X". Kuwabara was asleep on his right side one arm tuck under his head and the other the thumb was in his mouth. He was sucking on his thumb like a little baby.
Finally some peace Kurama thought.
End of chapter
A/N: okay we starting school again damn it all. Yeah and I got technology homework and I don't even know what we do. Than have some other homework. First week of school and homework already. I'm also editing my story. I've already got 1-7 done.
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