Thanks for all your reviews. I thought that the last chapter wasn't very scary but some of you thought that it was. So that was cool. I have no idea how to carry this on, so if you have any ideas please tell me! The ghost story which the old man tells is based on the girl form the Ring. She sacred me shitless, so I used her as the ghost.
Chapter 3-
As they walked in the hut you could see that the inside looked a lot like the outside, dirty and worn down. There was a small kitchen were the old man was looking through his cupboards. In the middle of the room was a wooden table with six chairs around it.
"Please sit down, while I get something to drink," said the old man pointing towards the table. They all took a seat slowly. Summer and Marissa held on tighter to the boys as they looked around the hut. The old man turned around with a jug of water and five glasses in his hands. He placed the glasses down and began to pour water in each. Once he had finished he gave everyone a glass. Each teen looked at the glass then at each other. Had he done something to the water? What was in it?
No one knew what to do. So Ryan decided to take a chance and had a quick sip of his drink. It tasted brilliant, he didn't realize how thirst he was until he had a drink. He looked back at the others and nodded his head slightly indicating that it was ok to drink. After Ryan's nod the rest quickly sipped their drinks too. They were all thirsty.
The old man was watching them with a happy look on his face. They all looked really nervous; he thought it was extremely amusing. He then sat down next to the small pretty brunette who was attached to the tall lanky boy. He then looked towards the other couple. He noted how the blonde haired boy was very filled out compared to the other boy. He suddenly thought of something.
"Hey do you guys want to hear a ghost story?" he asked. The boys nodded while the girls tensed up. The boys were wanted anything that fill up the silence and make the time go by quicker.
"Yeah sure, I love a good horror story" said Seth. He looked over at Summer, she looked like she was going to puke, and she hated scary stories. He bent down to whisper in her ear. "You'll be fine, I'm here, nothing is going to happen. It's just a story."
Seth said the last bit louder by accident and the old man looked up at him and smiled. "This isn't just a ghost story, this is a true story." They all looked at each other with nervous looks on their faces. The old man noted this but carried on with telling the story.
"Anyway about 75 years ago, there was this young spoiled girl. She had everything you could ever want. But the only thing is her parents hated her for some reason, they gave her anything she wanted just to keep her away. The more stuff this girl got, the more annoying and evil she got. So one day her parents decided they had enough of her. While she was sleeping they tied her up and taped her mouth. They carried her to a nearby well and threw her in. once she was in the poured more and more water in. They just sat and watched while her drown. Two years later the parents were found lying dead in their house. No one knew how they were killed. Most people believe that her sprit came to life and killed them for revenge. Ever since then people have rumored to have heard and seen the sprit haunt the streets of Spain and its citizens. I never myself and seen or heard the ghost but my bud Harvey had seen it. He said she was wearing a white night down which was soaking wet and had some blood stains on. Her hair was jet black and drenched. He also said that her skin was pale white like a sheet. He was never the sane since then. Haven't seen him in months."
The old man finished his story and stared at the four teenagers who all looked shit scared. He chuckled to himself. Seth was about to say something when the small door burst open. Everyone jumped and turned towards the door. They all stared at the dark figure that had appeared in the doorway.