Disclaimer: Don't own the X-men. Only that creative in fanfic… and in bed. I also don't really own the idea for the mermaid outfit. I read it in a book somewhere. I also don't own Coke, or Lays Chips.
Author's Note: Sorry! As you ALL know, I update really slowly. It's partially because I'm lazy like that (I mean, it's summer!) and partially because I mostly get inspiration when it's dark outside and if it's dark that means my parents are home. Unless you have african parents (like me) or black parents, you won't understand. They don't do ANYTHING they don't want to. Half the time they send me to do it. Need your checkbook? Send me. Need someone to cook dinner? Call me. So yeah, I don't have much time to write. Also, my fax line crapped up on me, so I'm not able to go online unless it's an EXTREME emergency where I'd use the home line (we have two) and I know my sibs will get all pissed off if I tell them the emergency is I need to update. Since my sibs are at a party I'm home free! But I can't stay on long, since i'm tying up the line.
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Last Time:
"Trust Remy," said Remy. "It'd b' better if y' stay."
"Okay," he said and kissed Kitty again. John and Remy both kissed Wanda and Rogue and they left.
"Wait," said Kitty. She ran back to Piotr.
"Get like, a ride from John or something because I'm taking the car," she said.
"Okay Katya," said Piotr. "See you."
"K," said Kitty. "Bye."
Chapter 13- Piotr's Surprise Part II
"Let's go!" said Kitty as she ran back to Wanda and Rogue who were standing by the car.
"Wait," said Rogue. She held out her hand to Kitty.
"What?" asked Kitty acting clueless.
"Give meh da keys," said Rogue.
"Why?" asked Kitty.
"Um, does 'I value my life' work?" said Wanda. "Or how about, 'I'm kinda getting used to living'?"
Kitty rolled her eyes. "I'm not that bad," she said.
Rogue smiled. "Yes ya are sugah," she said.
"Fine," Kitty said grudgingly. She handed Rogue the car keys.
"Thanks," said Rogue. She turned towards the car and got in the driver's seat. Wanda got in the passenger's side.
"First you like, don't let me drive, and then I have to sit in the back?" asked Kitty. "That's totally unfair!"
"That's the way life is Kit," said Rogue. She started the engine and they drove off to the drugstore.
(-strawberrie-)
"What colors do you want Kit?" asked Rogue. She, Wanda and Kitty were standing in Stylez (1) a local hair store, by the temporary dyes. They were spray on dyes. Kitty was holding a shopping basket with a hair crimper in it. (2)
"I'm thinking blue and pink," said Kitty. "They'll match the outfit after all."
"Okay," said Wanda. She grabbed both colors and they went to the front of the store to pay for everything, grabbing candy on the way to the register.
"Hey Kitty," said Chris.
"Chris! Hey!" said Kitty.
"We'll pay while you talk to him," said Rogue. She took the basket from Kitty and she and Wanda walked away.
"Sup?" asked Kitty.
"Nothing really, just getting a few things," said Chris as he held up a bottle of coke and some Lays Chips.
"Cool," said Kitty.
"What are you doing here?" asked Chris.
Kitty shrugged. "Just getting a few items," she said. "I have a surprise planned for Piotr."
"Are you sure you want him instead of me?" asked Chris.
"What?" asked Kitty.
"I mean, I can please you so much more than he can," said Chris.
Kitty looked shocked. She put her hands on her hips.
"I don't think so," she said looking pointedly at his crotch.
"Sixteen inches baby," said Chris.
"Is what you hope," said Kitty. She turned around.
"Your dick isn't any bigger than my pinkie nail," she said and walked out of the store.
She walked up to the car, got in the back and slammed the door shut.
"Asshole!" she said.
"What happened?" asked Rouge as she started the car.
Kitty quickly told them what happened.
"Good job!" said Rogue.
"You handled that like we would," said Wanda.
"Well, not exactly like we would," said Rogue. "I don't know about you Wand, but I would have kicked him in his lack-of balls."
They all laughed as Rogue turned into their driveway. She shut off the engine and they all climbed out of the car.
They walked inside, put their candy where the guys wouldn't get it, and walked downstairs to the mini living room. Kitty put the dyes and the crimper on the table and sat down. Rouge and Wanda turned to her.
"It's time to make some magic," said Rogue.
(-strawberrie-)
The guys came home to see Wanda and Rogue sitting on the couch watching TV.
"Hey," they said. John and Remy picked the girls up, sat in their place and placed the girls on their lap.
"Much better," said Wanda.
"Yeah," said Rogue.
"Where's Katya?" asked Piotr.
"She said somethin' about waitin' fah ya bah tha indoor pool," said Rogue.
"Thanks," said Piotr. He walked towards the indoor pool.
John looked at Wanda. "So what does the sheila have in store for him?" he asked her.
"Let's hope Piotr doesn't have a phobia of fish scales," said Wanda.
(-strawberrie-)
Piotr paused when he got to the bookshelves that led to the indoor pool. He listened closely and he heard splashing as Kitty swam around the pool.
"Katya?" he called. He knocked on the bookshelf uncertainly.
On the other side, in the pool, Kitty stopped, thinking she heard a noise.
"Katya?" called Piotr a little louder.
Kitty laughed. "Come in, Piotr," she said. "It's not like I'm naked or anything and even if I like, was, you've already seen me like that."
Piotr pressed the button and the bookshelves opened, revealing Kitty. She was in the pool, her scales glistening as she swam laps.(-strawberrie-)
"Scales?" thought Piotr. He walked into the room and towards the pool as the doors closed behind him.
"Hey," said Kitty calmly as she swam and stopped at the edge of the pool closest to him.
"You're… you're…" said Piotr, unable to believe the sight before his eyes.
"Unable to move on land?" asked Kitty with a smile.
Piotr blinked. "That, and," he said. He paused. "You're a mermaid."
Kitty grinned. "Yup," she said. "Surprise."
Yes, Kitty's a mermaid. She had on a mermaid suit she had gotten online. The bottom of her mer-outfit clung to her like a second skin showing off her long, covered legs. At the end were two fins about three feet in length. It had scales that changed colors, from blue to pink, as she moved. Her bra like thing had two pink strings that went around her back and connected to two seashells that covered her breasts. The seashells were also pink. Kitty's hair flowed around her as she swam. It was slightly crimped with two pink streaks and two blue streaks. She had put on blue waterproof eye shadow also. (3)
"Wow," Piotr said. "You look…"
"Hott?" said Kitty. "Sexy? Seductive? Desirable? Alluring?"
Piotr laughed. "All of the above," he said. "How can you swim? Doesn't it feel weird with the fins?"
"At first it was," said Kitty. "I like, nearly drowned, Rogue had to help me stay up, but after awhile I like, got the hang of it."
"It's actually fun," she said. "You should totally try it sometime."
Piotr grinned. "Sure," he said sarcastically.
"I'm serious!" said Kitty. "Anyway, look."
Piotr looked up, and over at the other side of the pool where a gigantic easel was surrounded on both sides by wooden trays that stood on wooden legs at Piotr's waist height.
Piotr raised his eyebrow at Kitty. She smiled and he walked over to the easel. When he got there he saw that it was made out of the finest material money could buy. (that you could paint on) In the trays were paints of every color available and every type available. There were pencils of every color and size and paintbrushes in 60 sizes. There were also seven different sized pallets. Everything had "Colossus" engraved into it or written on it in silver. (4)
Piotr's jaw dropped.
"All yours," said Kitty as she rested, her arms on the edge of the pool.
Wordlessly Piotr walked over to her, crouched down and kissed her thoroughly, expressing his gratitude, love and a lot of passion in that one kiss.
"Wow," said Kitty, when they broke apart, her eyes clouded in desire. "Maybe I should do this more often," she said.
Piotr laughed. "Thank you Katya," he said.
"You're welcome," said Kitty.
Piotr looked down at her, amazed at everything she's done.
"Can I paint you?" he asked her.
Kitty smiled. "I know you," she said. "I set like, the easel up there for a reason. I knew you'd want to like, paint me."
"Am I that predictable?" he asked her.
"Only to me," she said.
"Well I guess I'll have to do something unpredictable," said Piotr.
"Like?" asked Kitty curiously.
Piotr kissed her again. He ran his hand down her wet back, into the water and down to her butt. He held his hand there for a minute and then firmly squeezed.
Kitty squeaked. "Okay," she said. "You aren't like, totally predictable."
Piotr smiled and went back to his easel.
"How do you, like, want me to pose?" asked Kitty.
"Just keep swimming," said Piotr. He picked out a paintbrush and a pallet. He chose the colors he wanted and put them on the pallet. He glanced up at Kitty and started to paint.
(-strawberrie-)
"Done," said Piotr after another hour and a half.
"Cool," said Kitty. "I'm ready to get out of here."
Piotr walked over to the pool where Kitty was resting. He lowered his arms into the water and gently lifted her out. Kitty immediately put her arms around his neck.
Piotr headed out of the indoor pool, leaving his stuff there.
"Where are we going?" asked a slightly dripping Kitty.
Piotr glanced at her. "I don't know what you want," he said. "But I know I'm getting you out of that outfit."
Kitty fake pouted. "But I liked being a mermaid," she said. She grinned. "I think I'm going to like not being a mermaid even better though."
Piotr just looked at her, as they entered walked down the hallway towards the staircase leading to their room.
"Holy fire," said John. He had been with Wanda and the others at the beach when he went inside to get a glass of water. As he passed the hallway he turned to see Kitty.
"You're a mermaid," he said incredulously.
Kitty smiled. "Yup," she said.
"If you'll excuse us comrade?" asked Piotr. He turned to go to his and Kitty's room.
"Then what have you been doing for the past two hours?" asked John.
"Painting," Piotr said over his shoulder.
"Only you can do that," said John shaking his head. Piotr barely heard him as he walked into their mini living room.
Kitty, impatient, brought Piotr's head down to hers and she kissed him passionately. She brought her hands from behind his neck and started to explore his chest through his shirt. Unhappy, she phased it off, and explored his bare chest.
Piotr broke away. "Katya, we won't be able to make it to the bed if you continue," he said.
"Who said we like, have to make it there?" she asked.
"I don't want to hurt you Katya," he said.
"Don't worry," said Kitty. She kissed him again as he lowered her to the couch in the mini living room. He fingered around her "top" and found the hook.
(-strawberrie-)
"She was a mermaid," said John to Remy. He, Rogue and Wanda were all playing volleyball, guys against the girls.
"You saw her?" said Rogue while smiling.
"Yeah, she and Piotr are heading down to their rooms," said John. "Piotr said they were painting earlier."
"Let's go see," said Rogue. "That way you can see how she looks Remy, because chances are Piotr has her out of her outfit now."
They all went inside. They walked into the indoor pool and took a look at Piotr's painting.
"Wow," said Rogue.
The rest of them stood there, staring at the painting speechless.
"First, de chat looks belle," said Remy. "And second, de paintin' is amazin'." He turned to look at Rogue.
"Kind of like de sex we have non? Amazing," he said. Rogue rolled her eyes and elbowed him in the stomach.
"Damn," said Wanda. "This painting is just too good."
The painting was a giant picture of (of course) Kitty. She was sitting by the edge of the pool, part of her fins were submerged in the water. You could see the plants around her, and the waterfall in the distance. The picture was huge, it filled up the whole easel. Inside some of the Kitty's scales were mini pictures. You could see different pictures of Kitty swimming and resting by the pool. Each one was different and perfect. Every thing was detailed down to the last color.
"What do you think Mr. Stick-up-his-arse would offer for this?" asked Wanda, half grinning.
"If he would offer at least half a million," said Rogue.
"Let's go back t' de beach while dere is still daylight," said Remy. "We can praise Piotr later."
(-strawberrie-)
Kitty and Piotr woke up four hours later. They took a shower, changed and went downstairs. Everyone was sitting down at the kitchen table, eating dinner, spaghetti.
"Hey guys," said Rogue as they came in.
"Hey," said Kitty.
They got a huge plate of spaghetti (vegetarian for Kitty), sat down and dug in.
"I guess we're glad that this house has soundproof walls right?" asked Wanda.
Kitty nodded. "He makes a lot of noise," said Kitty.
"Like you don't," retorted Piotr.
John shook his head. "Didn't need to know that," he said.
"Beautiful painting Piotr," said Wanda.
"Yeah, it was awesome," said John.
"Thanks," said Piotr.
"When do I get to see it?" asked Kitty.
Piotr shrugged. "After dinner I guess," he said. Kitty nodded.
"Guys, Remy found a club we could go t' tomorrow night," said Remy. "Remy was plannin' on us goin' today, mais Remy tinks y' two need y're rest."
"Is it the same one we went to when you had your surprise Remy?" asked Kitty.
"Remy don't know," said Remy. "Which one did y' go t'?"
"It was called…" said John. He grinned. "Mermaid." They all laughed.
"De one Remy found is called Celestial," said Remy.
"That'll be cool," said Wanda.
"Tomorrow then?" said Kitty.
"Yeah," said Rogue. She paused and looked around at them sitting at the table. Most of them had finished eating. "Last one to put their dishes in the sink cleans up, puts every thing away and washes dishes."
Immediately there was a scramble to not be the last one done. In the end everyone was up and Kitty was sitting there alone, trying to finish her spaghetti.
"No fair!" she screamed.
(-no more strawberries-)
Yeah, hope you liked it. I'm sorry If I disappointed you Kiotr fans.
(1) I made this up.
(2) Um, I'm not sure if I spelled this right. I don't use it, so I don't know. It's that thing that makes your hair look, wavyish.
(3) I don't know if they make waterproof eye shadow, I don't wear make up (not until sixteen! Damn African parents.)
(4) Like, I have no idea about paints and stuff, so I'm not sure like, how many colors Piotr had (probbly a lot) and what kind of easel and all that stuff.
BTW, I have been inspired by one of my reviewers (You'll probably know who you are). Here's what I'm thinking. I want to know where you're from. When you next review me, can you tell me where you live and where you are from? For example, we'll start with me. I live in the state of Maryland in the United States and I am from Nigeria (at least, my parents are from Nigeria). So in the next chapter, we'll see where my reviewers are from. Don't be ashamed of who you are!
Um, a lot of people reviewed my last chapter, but not many said gave me their email address. One said they didn't want me to give them a preview of upcoming chapters, so I know. If you want your preview (the offer's still open for ONLY the people who reviewed the last chapter), there's still a chance for you to give me your email address.
Anyway, hopefully I'll update soon. I have no idea if my internet will work on the proper line, and I'm going to NY to visit my cousin from Monday through Friday. I don't know If I'll be going online, I might not be updating. But I'll try, I'll try really hard b/c I love you guys.
Love Always,
Strawberrie