Aviath stood there over him, "do you give?" she asked sweetly. Portraying innocence yet in such a dark manner that all prospect of innocence was lost. Validor lay on the ground severly burned and wounded.
"Never shallI give in to a child," he whispered before trying to get to his knees.
"You will never learn now will you?" Aviath frowned. "wellI guessI can't be nice all the time," she sighed.
Taking a small drop of her energy she focused on Validor and gave that energy a purpose. When she did that the energy lept over to him and took over his nerves.
Validor screamed in pain withering on the floor all his sences afire.
Aviath had used her energy to ignite the nerves in his body, making it feellike he was in an endless fire burning his body,but never getting burned. every time he moved on the floor, it only made it worseit only magnified the pain.
(not done) sorry I'll finish my chapter latertoday...(in english class)...I wasnt going to continue this story but i got a very wonderful review and so i will continue it so please be patient with me
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