I tried to make a comparison between Bakura and a vampire…here he has been caught unawares, struck down by his nemesis (insert name), and must now hide in his weakened state to recover. Definitely not one of my best.

Senses Reeling

Eyes closed against the bittersweet light
Degraded to crawling, sensing, feeling…
I must now take a life to stay alive
The fabled task of soul stealing

Is far too much to carry out
This lightning strike; my energy drain
I curse the one who cursed me whole
Unawares, he caught me in the blackening rain

Matted locks shield my once pure face
My tongue, a tuning fork licks the thick night air
My lips sneer, mocking at your hospitality
Do I really think that you would think I care?

Like a skeleton I crawl back into my lonely grave
To wait out this whirlwind storm in it's wake
I taste the night; senses reeling undone
And pray to a victim for my sweet sake.

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