Dragon Ball Saiyan Redemption

Episode 8: The Training Continues

"Die, Frieza! Die! I want to see your worthless body rot in a hole in the ground. So die, Frieza! Die!" Raditz yelled angrily as he shot an energy attack at an innocent tree.

"What's wrong with him Bardock?" Fasha asked.

"We honestly don't know," Bardock explained. "We were training, Vegeta started hounding us, Raditz said something about Frieza and he turned Super Saiyan! The next thing we know, he acts like this," Bardock said pointing to Raditz who was now blasting more trees around him.

"So you don't know what's wrong with him?" Torah asked.

"Like Bardock said, we just don't know," Vegeta responded.

"I will never respect you Frieza! I will always loathe you to the full extent of my abilities! I will fucking kill you!" Raditz said angrily as he blasted away yet another tree.

"I wish we could read minds at a time like this," Borgos stated.

"Hey, Bardock? Didn't you gain the ability to read minds?" Torah asked.

"Oh yeah! Thanks to that stupid Kanassan," Bardock realized.

"Can't you read Raditz's mind and see what is wrong with him?" Shugesh asked.

"I'll try. I don't know if I can actually use that ability or if it is as sporadic as my visions. But I'll try nonetheless," Bardock said as he flew toward his son cautiously. Bardock focused on Raditz and tried to focus on Raditz's mind. Soon, Bardock was in a whole new place.


"You are a pathetic Saiyan monkey. If this is the future of the Saiyan race, I should just destroy them here and now!" Frieza yelled. Bardock looked around the dark red room, which contained Frieza, Dodoria, Zarbon, and the young Raditz. At this point in time, Raditz was on the ground crying, clutching his severed tail. Bardock tried to return to reality.


"Guys, I know what's wrong with him," Bardock yelled.

"What is it?" Fasha asked.

"Well, you know every time a Saiyan child conquers their first planet, Frieza allows that child to train with him?" Bardock asked. The Saiyans nodded their heads. "Well, Raditz must have had a pretty traumatic experience there. He actually thinks he's back in that time period!" Bardock explained.

"Well how do we get him out of it?" Borgos asked.

"I think we have to get another emotion out of him. Instead of something sad, we should try and get a happy feeling into him," Bardock suggested.

"Other than fighting, what is a Saiyan's strongest instinct?" Torah asked.

"Well in Lighter Hell, I always told everyone that if I wasn't fighting, I could be…well, you know?" Shugesh said.

"Be serious!" the Saiyans said.

"I am serious! Notice that I didn't actually say the word," Shugesh hinted.

"Well then, what do you propose?" Vegeta asked.

"Did Raditz have a girlfriend in Lighter Hell?" Shugesh questioned.

"Let me handle this Bardock. You don't know a single thing about your son's social life," Fasha declared. "Yes. Raditz did have a girlfriend. Her name was Strudel, I believe," Fasha answered.

"Good. Bardock!" Shugesh called.

"What?" he responded.

"Read Fasha's mind. Fasha, put a mental image of Strudel so Bardock can do what I am planning for him."

"Okay, I can do that," Fasha said as she focused on the figure of Strudel. "Got it!"

"Bardock, read her mind," Shugesh ordered.

Bardock focused on Fasha's mind. Bardock then said, "Woah, Raditz must have had a very good taste in women. Strudel is hot! He got that from me you know?"

"Good. Now I heard something about the fact that some Kanassans could not only read minds, but also bend the will of their victim. Maybe, the Kanassan you faced also had that ability. What I want you to do Bardock is implant a false memory of Raditz's encounter with Frieza. Make it so Frieza's training session gets interrupted by Strudel," Shugesh ordered.

"I think I can do that," Bardock agreed. Bardock focused on Raditz's mind again and tried to implant the false memory.


"Why did you have to cut off my tail you bastard?" Raditz sobbed.

"Because you are a pathetic excuse for a Saiyan warrior and you don't deserve it!" Frieza yelled. Suddenly, a knock was heard on the room door.

"Frieza, are you busy?" a woman asked in a sultry voice. "May I interrupt? I need to see Raditz for the rest of the day."

"Fine. Come in and retrieve the pathetic excuse for a warrior," Frieza answered. The door opened and in walked a completely ravishing Saiyan woman. She had long, flowing, black hair. Her eyes were a dark purple that hinted something devious behind them. Her chest was especially full for a Saiyan woman. Usually they had relatively flat chests due to the raised levels of testosterone. Her body was in the classic hourglass figure with one of her hands on her hips. She had long, slender, sexy legs, and although you couldn't see it, she had a nice firm rear. This is Strudel.

"Raditz, I wish to see you," Strudel said in a seductive, sultry voice. Soon, Frieza and everything related to him vanished and Raditz regained his adult form.

"What do you want Strudel?" Raditz asked in his adult voice.

"I found this book about Kami Sutra. You know, 'the sex of the gods'? I have always admired your sexy body and I want to experience your body in the most erotic, orgasmic experience. I want you to fill me up with your manly juices and feel your member penetrate me. I want to hold your body and scream with ecstatic pleasure," She said in an even sexier tone.

"But don't you know? Kami Sutra is forbidden?"

"I don't care. I want to screw that law and screw your amazing body."


Back in reality, Raditz closed his eyes and moaned with pleasure. When Raditz opened his eyes again, the translucent gloss on his eyes disappeared. Raditz then spoke sanely for the first time as a Super Saiyan.

"Okay! I have to ask you guys something, One: What just happened to me? Two: What is up with my body? I feel weird and different. Three: What is this golden aura around me for? And Four: Why does it look like I was fighting my brother and the Namekian?" he asked.

"Well, we were training, words were said, you suddenly became locked in a traumatic memory and became Super Saiyan. You went nuts, and we tried to calm you down," Vegeta responded.

"Wait a minute? I am a Super Saiyan?" Raditz asked skeptically.

"Yes you are my son. That golden aura is what surrounds you as a Super Saiyan. Your hair turns gold and your eyes become blue. Vegeta, check his power level," Bardock explained to Raditz and ordered Vegeta. Vegeta pushed a button on his scouter.

"His power levels decreased but is still, amazingly strong. He is currently at 1,000,011!" Vegeta exclaimed.

"No way! I cannot be that powerful!" Raditz exclaimed.

"Yes you are son. The reason why it looks like you were fighting those two was because you temporarily became insane. You started to destroy all of the trees around you. Luckily for us, you only blasted the trees away. Now I never got to ask Kakarot this, so I am going to ask you. How does it feel being a Super Saiyan?" Bardock asked.

"Well," Raditz explained, "I feel more powerful, my veins are visible for the first time, my hair seems to be lifted up by this aura, cause, I can no longer feel the weight of my hair anymore. And, let's just say, I'm awake in more than one way."

"Woah oh oh! I bet your girlfriend would be happy about that!" Shugesh said as he laughed dirtily.

"Wow! My two sons are both Super Saiyans. My first born son Raditz, and my second born son, Kakarot. I just can't believe this. This is what a Saiyan Father lives for. To see their own sons, become stronger than them. My dream has come true and then some. I mean, my second son Kakarot can go up to Super Saiyan 5! I couldn't be happier," Bardock said as his eyes became cyan, and hair stood on end. But they didn't last that way for long. They reverted back to their original state. Bardock then mentioned, "Damn. What is that feeling I have? That's the second time that's happened to me on Earth, third time that's happened in my life."

"Hey Raditz!" Vegeta yelled.

"What?" Raditz responded.

"Want to train in your Super Saiyan body?" Vegeta asked.

"Sure. Why not?" Raditz said as an apparently evil grin stretched across his face.

"Vegeta!" Bardock yelled.

"What?" Vegeta responded.

"Never put down my mate again," Bardock yelled angrilly.

"But you told me to?" Vegeta said defensively.

"It's not out of respect, it's out of safety. I don't want this happening again!" Bardock yelled.

"Fine," Vegeta responded. The Saiyans powered up, a white aura surrounded them all. Suddenly, Raditz became extremely focused and in what appeared like a second, he knocked out all of the Saiyans except Bardock.

"I thought I would make you interesting," Raditz said.

"Why thank you son. But I won't go easy on you," Bardock responded. Bardock then tried to trip Raditz again.

"Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me. You can't use the same trick on me twice," Raditz remarked. Raditz was off of the ground at this point. He then pulled back his fist and punched his father in the stomach. This sent Bardock flying. Raditz then landed, and the golden aura died down, and Raditz became a regular Saiyan once again.

Next Episode:

The Calm Before The Storm.