An extra little fic that i came up with in english class. It's a small description of the Valuan Dockyards (duh) from the POV of Zathrass, and Ixa'taken High Preist that will appear in LoAS. I'll leave it to you to guess where he appears.


THE DOCKYARDS OF VALUA

The Military Dockyards of Valua.

Thousands of Metal Behemoths stretch across bay as far as Zathrass can see. Underneath Zathrass's feet is worn, gravel concrete, signs of much use, yes, much use indeed.

Sky above Zathrass's head is cold, black and thunderous, yellow moon looking murky and unwell in-between the dark clouds.

Zathrass wrinkle nose at putrid smell of burning iron and grinding stone that hangs in air as Zathrass and Zathrass's companions continue in the construction of Grand Fortress, throwing up fumes into already polluted air.

Imported from Zathrass's home of Ixa'taka to build giant Castle Zathrass was. Compare to Mines, Zathrass would have preferred to stay in mines.

Zathrass can taste soot as it enters Zathrass's mouth from nearby ship building factories, the immense heat forcing me choke.

As Zathrass walks unsteadily down path, heavy cart breaking Zathrass's back, Zathrass watches row upon row of metal ships, each getting ready to sail for home or Sailor's Isle.

Zathrass sigh as he gets back to work, hoping and praying to Queyta that this will be over soon.


Iknow it's short, but as I said, it's not the actual update,I only update officially on Fridays. Anywho tell me what you think as i leave you in suspence for the next story in line; Academy Days