Heh…hi…..I'm kinda getting quite little reviews compared to my last story so will you guys who read this please tell me whether u like it or not cus I find it a waste of time if I'm gonna put all my imagination, time and effort into it and get so little response not knowing if anyone likes it or hates it. Don't get me wrong those who have been faithfully reviewing, I appreciate it, if u like it, tell me, if u dun like it then say something dammit. I accept criticism if it is constructive, it takes less then a few minutes so would you please make a little effort? Aah well, now that that's off my mind I shall post the next chap
The red chakra disappeared into the cold, night desert air. It was so hot that the roof felt as if someone had taken a hot spring bath. She pulled her other sword out of the wall and stuck it back to its holder.
"Talk."
Silence, except the little whimpers of the ninja and his gasps for air. Soon the hot air blasted again and screams broke the silence, it stopped and there was silence again.
"IF YOU REALLY WANNA DIE SLOWLY THEN SAY SO."
Jiyu shouted, pissed. She pulled back her blade, revealing a long, thick black mark on the ninja's neck and charged her blade with so much chakra that the blade looked as if it was flaming with the ignition of a forest of dried wood.
"STOP, STOP PLEASE I'LL TELL YOU EVERYTHING."
"Then you better hurry before I get pissed off even more."
The chakra on her blade died down and smoke rose from the hot steel.
"I was sent here by the Kazekage, he reckoned that you would use up all your chakra fighting against Gaara. He said that he might as well complete two missions at once and that we may have a chance to kill you after you collected your bounty. You found me too soon."
"We?"
The ninja suddenly smacked off her hand, bent down and did a few seals before slamming his hands on her ankles; two harnesses appeared, stuck to the ground. She couldn't move. Her mouth turned up as she felt the presence of another 10 men's chakra. As they closed in on her, she grabbed the hilt of her swords and the next moment, they fell with deep cuts in their abdomens. Jiyu was bent down and with her hands behind her, holding both her swords. She straightened up and turned to the first ninja who stumbled backwards. Bending down again she touched the harnesses with her blades and they came off easily, the ninja stumbled until he banged into Gaara who stood up just now but didn't budge.
"BAKEMONO (Monster) YOU LED TO MY TEAMMATES DEATHS."
"And I will lead to yours."
Sand wrapped around the ninja and he was crushed. Jiyu grabbed one of the dead guys by the collar and rammed her hand hard into his chest, pulling out his heart. She then did the same for the rest of the men.
"Why does your village hate you to the extent of asking me to assassinate you?"
"I have a Bijuu, they put it in me and casted me away."
"I shall not kill you, but where you go now that I haven't done my job is your own decision. The village will now be in chaos and they would be even more desperate to get rid of you now. I'm faking your death for you, I don't know why I'm doing this but I am."
She made her way to the Kazekage's office and chucked the bloody heart on his table, he handed her a small box and she checked the money inside. Closing the box she turned to leave, she then pulled a netted bag full of the other ninja's hearts out from behind her and chucked it at him.
"Don't underestimate me, you will regret it."
She then leapt out and disappeared. She reached home and undressed, dumping her bloody clothes on the floor and loosening her hair, now a little wavy from being tied up so tightly. Sensing someone in the room, she grabbed a shirt off a nearby rack and wore it hastily. It was too big and long for her with short, netted sleeves. A silhouette was at the corner of the room, clearly a male's. She threw a shuriken at him but something came up to protect him, he stood up and walked towards her until they were face to face.
"Omaiwa…. (You…)"
She said. She wasn't exactly comfortable now being a room wearing an over-sized shirt ONLY with the guy she just tried to assassinate. Then it struck her, he isn't wearing a shirt, she's wearing HIS shirt.
"What are you doing here? I'm my home?"
"What are you doing in my shirt?"
The deep voice answered.
"When I said you could go anywhere I didn't mean here."
"I didn't intend for it either, it was empty."
Even these simple words sounded like a death threat, in fact, their whole conversation sounded like death threats.
"I can go no where now."
With that, he invited himself to Jiyu's house. Jiyu sighed and went into her bathroom to change, coming out with black shirts and pants. She then threw the shirt which landed where she was aiming for. His head before climbing into her bed and sleeping. It was dawn. Before she fell asleep she mumbled.
"Kill my scorpion and I'll kill you"
Done, im quite pleased wid dis chap even tho its quite shortso pls review more. I need to know. ITS FRIGGIN 1AM IN THE MORNING DAMMIT...LOL...
Ja Ne
