Hi..Sorry..I decided to re-write the story...the plot isn't changed. still the same, just written differently. Thanks guys for your support.
Special thanks to Keetra. and all others who reviewed.
Keetra - Thanks for letting me know what i should have fixed up..I did like what you said and kept the first chapter, I re-read the second chapter..and it sorta fits so. :P . I re-wrote chapter three though. I hope you like it..let me know what ya think. That last thing you said about the sequals thing..that really got me thinking..thanks :D
Meanwhile in the forest.
"Mauliba what shall we do? The great river spirit now has a son. They are over powering us, very soon their child will be as powerful as any thing on this world. Surely we have to do something to stop it, otherwise our great plan to take over the Spirit world is going to the bin." The small goblin like creature spoke to his master. His eyes were orange, and his skin, a deadly green colour. His face was hooded, but all that shown through was his orange eyes, the eyes of pure evil. He was a creature that the Spirit people call, Govascious.
Mauliba a young man, who also had his face covered by a hood spoke, his voice full of pure evil. "My brother, he got everything he ever wanted. A great girl, a son. And what do I get, living in the ditch. He doesn't know of me does he?"
The goblin shook his head. "Master, sir. Haku, never knew you were his brother. He didn't even know he had a brother."
Mauliba laughed. "Ah, well this is just the way life works, two brothers born into the world. One is pure goodness, the other the great opposite."
"I suppose I should get the troops ready to strike at dawn?" The goblin asked.
"No!" Mauliba protested. "Haku is a powerful spirit, a couple of troops is nothing to him. He can destroy each and everyone of them, in just a click of a finger."
"Then what shall we do?" The goblin asked.
Mauliba stared out his cave, looking at the dark sky. He smiled a evil smile. "Gather the troops." He said.
"Bit Sir? I thought you just sai.." The goblin replied.
"Get the troops! No questions asked." Mauliba shouted.
The goblin bowed, and quickly rushed off inside the cave to gather the troops.
Mauliba laughed. "I'm coming to get you Haku, enjoy the company of your son for now. Because tomorrow, he is going to be dead."
Back at the bath house the newly addition to the family slept soundly, and so did his parents.
It was night time, not even the early hours of the morning. Everyone was asleep, everything was dark.
Haku slept restlessly, tossing and turning. His head was dripping with sweat, and his face was filled of worry.
Chihiro awoke to his restlessness, sitting up furiously, she turned on the side light. Turning over she looked at Haku, who was now laying on his back.
"Haku?" She called softly, touching his forehead which was burning with a fever.
"Please." Haku pleaded in his sleep. "Don't hurt them.." He muttered.
Chihiro's eyes widen. "Hurt who?"
"My son." Haku answered. "..or Chihiro, pleaseā¦I'm begging you..don't hurt them." He begged, tears seeping out from his clasped shut eyes.
"Haku. Wake up." Chihiro said, shaking his hand slightly to wake him up from his restless slumber.
"Chihiro!" Haku pleaded, jumping up from bed, almost head bashing into Chihiro.
His eyes widen with happiness as he realized it was just a dream, he looked around and saw Chihiro sitting beside him on the bed. Smiling, he threw his arms around her, tears falling from his eyes.
"Chihiro." Haku exclaimed. "You're alive." His eyes widen, as he drew back. "Takato?"
He stood up from the bed, and walked over to where his son lay asleep.
"Takato. You're both safe." Haku sighed, sitting on the chair next to Takato's bed.
"What happened?" Chihiro asked, gently getting up from bed and walking over to him.
"Bad dream." Haku whispered, closing his eyes.
Chihiro kneeled down between his legs, she stared up at Haku who had his face covered by his hands.
She rested her hands on his knees. "What happened Haku?" She asked in her soft voice.
Haku looked at her through his fingers. "There was this dark spirit, who took you and Takato from me. Threatened to, take Takato's life away. And to..to.." Haku trailed of.
"To what?" Chihiro asked, running her hand up and down his knee to sooth him.
"To make love to you in front of me." Haku whispered, closing his eyes shut.
"Oh Haku." Chihiro sighed, throwing her arms around him.
She held him close as he sobbed into her shoulder. "There was nothing I could do Chihiro, either way if I did anything wrong he was going to hurt the only two things in this world that I love." Haku cried.
Chihiro pulled back, looking into his tear stained eyes. "Trust me Haku, no other man than you, would ever." She looked deep into his eyes. "Ever! Be allowed to do such a thing with me." Chihiro smiled to cheer him up. "I love you and only you, well besides Takato, but it's different." She smirked.
Haku smiled warmly. "Thank you Chihiro." He whispered, holding her closer.
"You are my first Haku." Chihiro smiled, kissing his nose. "And will be my last."
It's a bit short..sorry..I didn't have long to write this up..just did it a few minutes ago
