I'm sorry for my awful writing that I put up the other day. I know a lot of you were disappointed by it, and I am sorry. I just really haven't had time to write and I was getting emails to update, and I just updated. I am planning on removing Chapter 5 and rewriting it. I can honestly say that I knew it wasn't the best writing, but I wanted to give you guys something to read. It might take me awhile to rewrite chapter 5, but I will have it out and better than what you read the other day. I will also put Chapter 6 up once I get chapter 5 rewritten. Please keep reading, and reviewing. I appreciate all your honesty when reviewing. Now for anyone who reviewed saying my grammar was poor, well I am sorry for being rude, but my grammar is better than yours. I could barely read your email because of all the spelling mistakes and others of the sort. I appreciate you reading and reviewing but if you want to criticize my poor grammar, then I would rather you not read it. Also, if you had read my whole story instead of skipping through it, you would have realized that I already stated the Braydon is Hermione's. But thank you for letting me know about using an omnipresent point of view. I will do that.
Thank you to all who have read and reviewed, I really appreciate it. I will have a better Chapter 5 written and updated in the next few weeks.