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I'm glad you thought it was exciting and not boring!lol

glad you thought it wa sdescriptive!

happy you thought it was awsome! im glad u want me to keep writing!

thanks ya that one didnt have much excitement, this one does though

um, i guess that it'll sell at borders, idk!

yes i know its u paradise! thanks i think im awsome too, i guess...lol

ya thats my own, lol

btw, that seagul, i actually saw it. only it wasnt possessed! hahahahahahahahah

thanks ruth! i rally appreciate ur guys's reviews! they make me want to keep writinbg! but u gotta read um!

ok here i go now, god and i still have hw! lol

Chapter 2:

The sound of footsteps filled her ears as men and women marched around her. Her eys fluttered open in fright remembering what had happened before she had seen that swirl of dark sparkling midight blue surrounded her and put her to sleep.

She sat up, moving her legs so they made an "M" shape and looked down to pick at the dried blood on the hem of her dress, but when her eyes veeered down, she saw that she wasn't wearing the dress she was wearing before that was given to her by her mother. She was wearing a swirling, literally swirling right then and there without her moving, the colors changing by themselves, orange and red, red orange, orange, then back to orange and red.

It was the most beautiful thing she had ever seen. The colors on the dress, swirling in and out of each other, were mesmorizing. Like shadows dancing on a wall, only better. She touched the dress to make sure that it wasnt going to slip through her fingers like sand. Her fingers touched the fabric, picked it up and, to her surprise, it was real. She rubbed it between her thumb and index finger feeling the fabric and examining it. It didn't slip through her fingers. What was enchanting this fabric?

Enchanting? What an I thinking? I certainly can't be doing this! I can't be a witch... she thought.

Then, all of a sudden, the men and women around her stopped walking around her in a circle, and there was a blood red chain covering them and a string of blood red light linking person to person. Then a light hum, started by a tall older woman, started running wildly around the circle, getting louder with every person following it.

The powerful hum filled the air and echoed amongst walls she could not see. Then it abruptly stopped and every head turned down towards her.

Then the eldest looking women of them, probably the leader, spoke with a clear voice.

"Gemmenite Harish?" the elder spoke.

"Y-yes," she stuttered. Was this bad too?

" You are a Shiffron, and no, we aren't bad like the Abbiss, I assure you." Her voice shreiked with laughter and the others followed in suite. Then the laughter died away, and the elder spoke agian.

"The Shiffron is the order against the Abbiss. Before these was clodded times, we would live in peace. Now, more than ever, do we fight against the lost souls for the power over the realms, so we can establish peace again. Many witches and wizards have lost their souls to these 'possessers' of the dark.

"These realms used to be a peacefull escape place of the Shiffron and the Abbiss. A get-away from the mortals and their hand-made devices. How do you stand living with them in that world?" she gave no time for an answer but plowed through with the rest of her explanation anyways.

"Anyway, the Abbiss started believing that we, the Shiffron, were letting the mortals come through the portal and get powers that only a witch or wizard can have. They thought that they should banish us for eternity.

" Karkarik. The most powerful one of then all, was their leader. He would injure for recreation, and then, when they were seconds away from death, he would take their souls, and stick them in a single jar. Once the soul was taken from a witch or wizard, he becomes not knowing, and one of Karkarik's amry's, as you could say it.

"Now, it is war between the realms. And you, my dear, are the one who can save us all." The elder concluded. Her arms raised and her mouth opened wide, and started to whiper a ancient chant.

"Thou that was brought to us, speak thy name," They started out, then stopped, waiting for her to say something. They want me to say my name...

Gemmenite Harish," spilled out of her mouth fast than u could say Talahassee, and as soon as it did, her body was rolling upward into a standing position. Arms and chest out. An Accepting position.

Then the elder spoke again,without stopping, and this time the group followed with shinning faces that told her that everything was going to be okay.

"Then thy aggrees to the power being chosen, given by thine mother and father, wanted y HIM, loved and respected by all. The power has risen once again. The power IT cannot defeat. I give thee this." A shot of blue sprang out of a glowing ball of many colors, swirled down before her, and circled her.

"The power chosen by the elders before us, given to us by the elders before us, and now, given unto thee. This power to choose becomes you, and is you." Another swirl of light, this time lime green, came from another ball of light, and came down uponher, and danced around her as well.

"The final power we cannot speak of, for Karkarik's souls seek us here. Some of the power that all of us have, some the power that almost none know not of. A power that surely cannot be found by those lost child's souls that seek it. This is the from years gone by that has been forgotten until now. This is the girl who can save the realms from themselves." And with that, 5 different glowing colors spun from way above her. Silver, yellow,orange, midnight blue, and last, blood-red.

The many colors danced around her in a magic chant as the group of Witches and Wizards died away along with the red beams and dome of light and stared at her.

"Accept them," a voice said from behind her. She turned around ready to use whatever power she could muster to throw at him, but then saw a boy, no older than 15, with dark brown hair like hers.

"The elsers want you to accept them. To have the full powers of a witch, like your mom, you need to accept the powers." She stood there in awe. He looked so familiar, where had she seen or heard him before? Then, her own voice in her head cleared in her head to make room for his and then, she realized what he wanted her to do.

She looked straight at the colors and said, "I accept thee." Immediately, the colors rose miraculously into the air and then started to dive for her. She saw it coming and swept her arms in so that they were protecting her face.

Then she felt 7 swoops of heat enter her. Once the heat had receded, she opened her eyes moved her srms down, and then stumbled and fell forward into the boys arms, her back landing against his hard, well built chest. His arms wrapped around her waist to keep her from falling to the floor. She steddied herself by putting her hands ontop of his.

"It's alright," came his soft voice, "I won't let you fall. I've got you. Your not going anywhere bad.

"Thnakyou," she smiled. She turned around in his arms, and realized that her eyes were only level with his chin. SHe smiled and put her arms around his neck to pull him close to her.

(a/n: I know I know a cruel place to leave off, but let me tell you this, dont jump to confusions soo fast.!)

ok thats it for this chapter, but i will update sooner than this one i promise!

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-Gem