Why am I not getting any reviews?

Should I move this to the Harry potter category instead?

Anyways, this will be another quick random story. And this time, there will actually be a story line. OOOOOOOOO, AAAAAAAAAAA.

This is where the story begins.

The train soon started after they settled themselves into the cab. Gaara settled himself into a comfortably made and sofa, and Naruto just stared at him in hatred… while sitting down on the muddy wooden floor. Al however, made an approach sitting on the old sofa that was already there. While his butt almost landed on the sofa somebody screamed.

"Ouch! FVCK! FVCK! FVCK!" A dark haired boy suddenly appeared out of the thing air swearing mildly, but quickly shut himself up after he realized everyone is staring at him like he was a masturbating monkey in the zoo. "Er… Hi my name is Harry, you must've heard of me before. Yes, people call me… the Chosen one, the boy who lived, Blah blah blah." But Harry's proud look soon disappeared when he saw the blank expression on everyone's face. "Common! You must've heard of me at one point, does 'the sexy young actor' reminds you of anything? No? How about 'the knight in shiny armor'?"

"What is that freak talking about?" Gaara murmured to Naruto under his breath.

"Dunno… I thought you were the official freak until I met him." Naruto remarked silently but he couldn't keep his silence anymore when he saw that lightning scar "Wow, what's up with that huge scar on your face!"

"Oh gee, thanks." Harry was a bit annoyed with that comment "At least you recognized my scar, so you all know who I am now?"

Everybody shook their head in confusion.

"Oh My God! You people just broke the magical law, third book, number 18994' that says 'Everybody needs to know who Harry Potter is'!" Harry Gasped at the Horror.

"Dude, shut the hell up!" Gaara screamed while his sand tied Harry up. "I thought I was the official freak until I saw you!"

"Anyways, my name is Al, the one with that sand jar is Gaara, and the other one with the whisker like scars on his face is Naruto." Introduced Al politely. "How did you end up in the storage cabinet?"

"Well, every year She who must not be named –whom is the ultimate author that even the author of this story fears- makes me go to Hogwarts a different way every book, so I thought this year I shouldn't be treated differently." Harry explained proudly.

"Huh? Who is She who must not be name?" Naruto asked.

"The TRUE author of the Harry Potter trilogy, J.K. Rowling!" Harry whispered as if fearing that some one might hear him.

"Do not speak of that name in that unworthy manner!" a young red haired girl popped up out of nowhere just like Harry, she is dressed in what looked like school uniform, except it's all wrinkly with parts of her shirt unbuttoned reveling lots of skin.

"Ginny! I thought I told you to shut your mouth and hide under my invisibility cloak!" Harry screamed.

Naruto's gaze switched between Harry and Ginny's flesh suspiciously "Um… Harry? Why were you in the storage Cabinet again?"

"Er… never mind that." Both Ginny and Harry answered while flushing furiously. Ginny quickly buttoned up her shirt and stretched her skirt a bit lower.

Suddenly, the train came to a crashing stop, and screams could be heard thousands of miles away. Ginny, Al, Naruto, Gaara, and Harry all came out to see what was happening alone with all the other wizards in the train.

Half of the train was dangling down in a gap on the famous bridge as if half of the bridge just suddenly disappeared. Students were murmuring in confusion while lights blackened out. The surroundings became darker and darker until all naruto could see was his friends.

"Dementors…" Harry whispered "Be careful, they feed on your fear, and they can suck the joy out of you until you di…" Harry was not able to finish his sentence because a dementor just appeared in sight within two meter of range.

The dark creature is flouting around them while screaming out screeches that produces nothing more but pure fear amongst its victims. Naruto's surroundings became icy cold, he felt empty and hopeless as if there was nothing more he could do but to wait here till he dies.

The creature settled beside Gaara and examined his first victim.

"Don't let him kiss you with his second mouth; he'll suck the joy out of you!" Harry screamed while scrambling with his coat trying to find his wand which he probably left at the storage cabinet while snuggling with Ginny. But it was too late.

The dementor opened its second mouth and preceded sucking Gaara, but Gaara made no attempt to stop it. After a minute or two instead of Gaara looking pale and dreary, the dementor became dryer as it went on. To the point that the dementor became so dry that it just fell dead on the floor.

"What the hell? Why isn't it sucking your joy?" Harry gasped.

"Joy?" Gaara answered calmly with pride "What joy? What's that? Never felt it, never will."

Naruto smirked, Gaara is the only true dementor, one can be without fear, without love, and without weakness. It is the only blessing he have received upon his forever bleeding heart.

No comment was made after that. Several more dementors circled above them, surrounding them and observing them. As time went by more and more dementors jointed them. The dementors are every where hovering in the air surrounding the whole bridge. It is now so cold that Naruto was barely able to move his fingers.

The blindfolded creatures slowly cleared a path to a dim light afar, and it moved closer and closer. Harry could feel the burning pain upon his scar, he knew instantly, or instantly had a feeling that this event was somehow related to Lord Voldmort. As the dim light approached slowly Harry's scar burned more painfully.

He saw 5 women dressed in dark purple gown with hoods covered all their faces walking closer from the cleared path the dementors created, one of them holding a what looked like a wand made of broken branch that emits dark blue light which looked like the leader. The group stopped at a distance but the leader walked on. She moved closer and closer, Harry could sense the dark aura radiating from her but could he do anything about it because his body was as somehow paralyzed.

Harry just somehow knew that the woman wanted to hunt him down. He tried to run but his body just didn't co-operate "What do you want!" Harry forced the words out "What do you want with me!"

The woman, however just walked right passed by Harry as if he didn't exist, making the famous "chosen one" feeling very ignorant and dry. She stopped in front of Naruto and caste him a meaningful look with her glowing sapphire eyes while uncovering her hood.

The woman was taller than him around 20, she looked more tired than ever with heavy sacks under the eyes but that doesn't take away the gleaming tension in her gaze. Naruto could tell she is a beauty hidden under the pale skin and weary face. "But nothing can be compared to that fine body of hers!" Naruto remarked in his mind.

The woman bent down to level her face with Naruto's and touched the marks on his cheek –which is burning just like Harry's- with her silky fingers "The Never-Decaying mark of the sinful deeds…" She whispered softly and blessed it with her lips.

At this point Harry, felt ignored, humiliated, and even worse, replaced. "WTF! I was the "Chosen One" in the hall of the prophecies!" Harry thought angrily "I was supposed to be the special one under all the attention!"

"You are…" she answered Harry as if reading his mind without even looking at him "And 'No' I can't read your mind."

Naruto is just drowning in that woman's gaze; it felt pleasant and calm, he can even feel himself slipping away… dieing in a joyful manner. "It's nice." He thought. Then there was this scream of s spell of some sort from Harry but naruto was no longer able to focus. Everything went dark.

End of chapter

No, this is not the last chapter and no, Naruto didn't die.

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