This is my first story so its probably not that great. Please leave comments after you read it. This takes place just after Satine and Christian get back together. Only this time Satine doesn't die. Only has another fainting spell.
The curtain closed and neither Satine or Christian could believe that they where in each others arms again. Still smiling from ear to ear, Christian gently attempted pulled Satine with him for curtain call, but Satine couldn't move. Suddenly she couldn't catch her breath, let alone move. Christian helped ease her down to the floor.
Satine new she was dying and finally told Christian the truth. No Christian thought. This is not happening, not now when everything is going to be ok. From those beautiful lips a red liquid came trickling down her chin. Blood, oh my God this isn't just pretend. This isn't something love can fix. My darling Satine is dying. Christian could not believe it, and yet is seemed all so real, as if reality had just come crashing down upon him leaving him dazed.
Satine kept saying she was cold, even though she felt as hot as coal pressed against Christians heart.He tried to put on a brave face so she wouldn't be scared, but his heart was breaking into pieces. He couldn't go on if she left him forever. Even worse Satine wanted him to "tell their story." Christian knew he couldn't write their story. All the emotions and all of the love would never be clear on paper. Still he promised her he would and also made a promise to God. If she survives I will write the story, and it will be the best story I have ever written. Satine's body became limp in Christians arms.
Remember this was my first story. So leave you comments and I'll try to write more asap.