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The Change
Trapped Within memories
She stood at the roof were she had first seen the red reploid. Their was something soothing and comforting about this place, it provided her with the seclusion she needed.
''Zero'' she wondered why she said the commanders name as she was falling unconscious.
She tried to look into the files of the flashes she had stored, but the red reploid didn't appear in any of her broken memories. She didn't even understand why she was so fascinated about him.
Why did she feel that she wanted to make him proud of her, he wasn't her creator she had no obligation toward him so why did she feel this way. She stood leaning against the wall and remembered what happened a week ago.
Flash back
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She was surrounded by darkness, she cried out asking if any one their. Sensing someone approaching she crouched into a fighting position. AS the figure came out of the shadows, she snarled Vidal.
She quickly jumped at him and found herself slashing the air as the image disappeared. A hole appeared under her feet and once more she was engulfed in darkness once more.
She looked around surprised it was the room she lived in the lab before it happened a destroyed. She prayed silently that it would be true, was she finally free of her nightmare.
She walked out and headed for the lab, as the main doors opened se almost cried out from happiness.
'' Father'' she shouted and started moving toward him.
She felt tears forming in her eyes; it had been so long since she had shed a tear since that fateful day.
She had promised herself that she would never cry again, weakness was not possible in her world. But when she had reached him she fond herself passing through him, she stood shocked and looked at her hands, hearing the sounds of the door opening she turned around and couldn't help but gasp.
It was her she was wearing the same outfit on the day of the attack. She walked over to her image with her hands shaking she reached out, and found her hand passing through as well.
She shook as she realized were she was ''no not again she moaned''.
She was once more trapped in her memories was she cursed to watch those she loved over and over again. This was not the first time she wished to die to leave all the pain away, but she knew that life couldn't work tat way and probably never will.
She could only stand watching Vidal demanding where was he hiding the maverick hunter body. She wondered silently as she watched the massacre before her who was so important that her father died for that made sigma hunt him down to begin with….
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End of flash back
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She started hearing voices as she swam in and out of conciseness. What do you think is wrong with her doc., her brain waves are above average her memory chip is probably jammed, what ever fight she was in, the damages she sustained were to severe for her systems to fix on its own. It's surprising that she was able to walk much even pass the first level simulation in her condition.
She wanted to shout out for help but before she could say a word, she w had as pulled back once more, and was lost in another memory buried within with in her lost memories.
Another flash back
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Professor she called out but the old man in front of her remained silent oblious to his surroundings. She walked over and saw the file that her creator was working on.
''Maverick hunter'' she read out loud. Surprised doctor Michael turned around to see hid daughter.
It was true that she was a reploid but they shared a closer relationship then creator and machine. Her designs were built based on his past daughter looks and identity. But after activating her he had started noticing the difference while his daughter was peaceful and quite, she was more outgoing and had trouble controlling her temper most of the time.
He had come to see her as a second daughter whom he had come to love and adore just the same. He had told her the truth that she was a rebuilt of a damaged reploid but he wanted her to make her own life and memories and not be shadowed in her past life shadows.
Her memory core had been too damaged beyond repairs, flashback were her only key to her past. He smiled at her waving its nothing.
''Nothing'' she snorted'' ya right that's way you didn't eat lunch and have buried yourself in this room since morning''.
'' Are you sure you're alright dad''.
He swatted her hand from his shoulder'' yes mother hen''.
She gave a small laugh at their private joke'' if you're sure pops but im not leaving till you close that computer and come and eat something its Lasinia''.
His eyes started to sparkle at the mention of Lasinia. He told her he will follow in a minute turning around he sighed looking at the files one final time before deleting them the truth must never be known.
With that he left the lab closing the doors burying another secret in the dark. A secret that could change the whole war, and bring back hope that was lost after the death of the greatest maverick hunter X.
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End of flash back
Zero leaned again watching a small smile forming on the young rookies face. He had carried her to the medic bay after she collapsed in the simulation; he was impressed at her achievement in the simulation.
In a weird way she reminded him of X, she had a peaceful but pained aurora. He had seen reluctance in her movements, as if she didn't want to kill anyone but was forced to. But still she was more aggressive, and her fighting style was merciless like a maverick, but still held some compassion that he doubted she realized she held while fighting.
But who was he to judge, he sighed sadly as he remembered his fallen comrade and dear friend things haven't been the since, the cheerful and up lifting aurora the hunter had left a whole that no one can fill, even Axel was more quite and less cheerful.
He had matured over the last years loosing X had shook him up.
He smiled as he remembered then meeting he had with X after Axel had been in the maverick after two years had passed.
Flash back
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''So what is the mighty X hiding from?'
''He gave a faint chuckle as he turned around and smiled at zero.''
Look who's talking, still hiding from Iris.
He turned around and managed to hide a grin when he heard Zero groan. He knew that even Zero tried to avoid the young reploid he loved her dearly and would die for her. Even though zero didn't know X looked up to him. He was happy to find his friend happy.
Iris had filled his heart, and managed to keep zeros dark demons away. He looked at zero and smiled once more pleased to see sincre smile adorn zero face a thing that has become common since zero met Iris.
''Zero tell me what do you think of Axel.''
''Zero blinked surprised at X question.
'' He's a great fighter and reminds me of you X, before the war an over active and rash young hunter who wanted to prove himself.''
X nodded'' that's why I didn't want him to be a hunter Zero I don't want too see him change, and be burdened over the years.'
''You can't shelter him from life X''.
''I know Zero, he sighed I really do. '
''But well be their for him X.''
X smiled at Zero the hunter was always able to sooth his worries. Axel soon appeared commander signas is asking for you too looks like were gonna blow off some mavericks today he grinned in anticipation. X fought with himself from grinning and scolded the youth for his lack of patience.
Zero smiled at X lecturing Axel the young reploid stared grinning. X covered his hand from frustration and gave up trying to make the boy lesson, and followed the enthusiastic reploid. He looked at Zero who was grinning. He scowled and left. Zero followed amused at how Axel always brought out the childish part f X.
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End of flash back
He sighed as he remembered Alia distress she had a crush on X, and blamed herself that she couldn't offer more help.
Only Axel and zero protest that she had agreed to stay at the base. He smiled as he reached out his hand and brushed her bangs from he eyes he couldn't help admire her strength for battling even with her injuries.
He shook his head he figured that she was probably the one that had spied on him earlier on, nothing more could be done till she regained conciseness. Smiling he left to join Axel.
To be continued….
Sorry I haven't updated in a while college has only started this week and im over worked. But I promise to update early about a chapter a week. Please review and tell me what you think. I know that this chapter wasn't very long I will try to make it up next time...