Wow I got like..six reviews! In about a month..-.-…I'm not sure whether to be happy or disappointed…ah well. Review responses!
Lady Eris of Chaos: Thank you! Why is it a parody? Mwaha..mwahhaha….MWAHHAHA! yeah…you'll find out..
TheGreatKillerChicken:..That was nice..and slightly weird…thanks anyway!
Riu Yami: Well duh it's heavy! And angsty! I write those stories shngrflbm! (THAT'S HIS NICKNAME PEOPLE!) And at least it was only one error!
Synthae: Yes! Poor Baraky!sniff Let us take a moment of silence to mourn a characterI spent so long in developing..silence yeah yeah that's enough. Thanks tho!
Samuri Light: For your questions..you know I responded in a review..but thanks! That's a great review and I've been waiting for em!
Snail: Wow! Thanks!
DarckMoon: OMG, I really can see Ravyn doing that. "Fire fire fire! Oh look a donut!" Hahah
ON TO the STORY!111one!
Snape walked into the room to see the young girl sitting cross-legged on a chair, absorbed in the book. Her piecing eyes gleamed in the firelight and her fiery hair shone. Hearing him enter, she looked over her book, gaze penetrating.
"You're late." She half snapped.
He stiffened. She was so hostile. "I was…very busy Kaida."
She was merely ten, but spoke eloquently. It reminded him of her father. A twinge of guilt made him stiffen more and look away. "I realize you were busy Sev, but I'm having trouble controlling my power and you're supposed to help me so I don't lose control!" Her eyes flashed.
Snape's gaze grew hard. "Kaida, do not talk back to your godfather. Now, finish your studying and we will begin your Occlumency."
Kaida sighed and rolled her eyes. "Fine..." she grumbled.
Snape's eyes snapped open. He rolled over in his bed to see the time. 3:00 A.M. Kaida would usually be up by now, making some commotion. Fear gripped him. He rolled out of bed and ran to her room. Her bed was neat, and she was gone. He ran to the library. Nothing. The kitchen. Nothing. The bathroom. Nothing..
He sank to the floor, muttering, "No...no...no…" His voice was choked with sobs as tears slipped down his pale cheeks. He covered his head with his arms and slowly rocked back and forth. "I promised him...I promised..." he sobbed…
Snape's eyes snapped open. For real this time. He ran a hand through his greasy hair and sighed. They had taken her two years ago. He had to do something about it, but every time he was there he couldn't find her and guilt racked at his heart for taking her memory. She didn't know who she was, and it was his entire fault…
He pushed himself out of bed and walked into the bathroom. These quarters at Hogwarts were much more to his fancy than the small house he had kept Kaida in. He muttered a spell and the lamps lit. Looking at his reflection in the mirror, he sighed again.
He smiled softly. "If he could see me like this now…" he said softly, thinking of his old friend again. When he had cleaned himself up he walked into his room again and pulled on some black robes. No one else knew besides Dumbledore why he wore constant black. He had begun wearing it after Barak's death and it just had stuck with him. Little did Dumbledore know what Snape was really hiding.
He began to walk to the door before there was a phoenix's cry and in a flash of flame a letter appeared on his bed, still hot. Picking it up, he read, 'Come to the order.' He rolled his eyes. Having to come and talk to that annoying Black again would be torture on his part. Nonetheless he went to his fireplace, threw in some floo powder and murmured, "Number Twelve, Grimmauld Place."
He stepped through the grate at headquarters and brushed some ash off of his black robes. Lifting his head, his coal black eyes scanned the room. All of the order was there, looking very grave. For a moment he quailed, but strengthened his resolve and took his seat at the kitchen table.
Kingsley Shacklebolt stood up and said in his deep voice, "We-" Suddenly he was interrupted by a giant commotion from outside. Everyone's heads snapped to attention as Snape stood up. "It's coming from outside." He said softly to himself.
"Well that's obvious." Sirius snapped, "Snivellus..." He said the last under his breath, but Snape could hear him. Eyes narrowing in annoyance, Snape walked out of the kitchen. In the living room, he heard something slam into the door. BAM! It happened again. Eyes widening in alarm, he walked a little closer to the door. He took another tentative step when, WHAM! The door was smashed as someone was thrown through it. She had black, grungy hair, piercing grey eyes, and a pale complexion. She jumped back up, dressed entirely in black, and ran outside again, wand in hand.
Snape's wand clattered to the floor. The eyes were different. So was the hair. But there was no mistaking her. "K-Kaida…?"
Yeah I know that was short…didn't have much time...R&R!
