Here is a proper reply to a review from last time and to the other ones I've just gotten:
Lady Saint: And in answering to the Tomoyo thing, her personality is just to make the story more amusing...sorry if u don't like it. and no Tomoyo isn't crazy about sakura, actually she's just crazy about her designs. the reason she wants to get sakura and Meilin on tape is cause they're wearing her 'kawaii' designs. So in that sense, Tomoyo, i repeat, is not an obsessed-sakura freak. More like an obsessed wit designs freak.
Yup, I agree with you, she does speak good English and I'll be sure to tell her that. And sorry about the whole hentai thing. It's just that i have a friend who likes to ridicule half the things that come out of anyone's mouth. So i have to b very careful in what i say. Her mind works that way, thinking of all the ways to twist a normal sentence to sound so wrong. Sorry for offending you. Thanks for reviewing!
Yellow blaze: Thankkkkkkkks for the review! I love hearing from you! SMILE
Samurai-brat: I love the way u wrote that email! WICKED!
Youkaigirl64: Hi! Cool, I'm glad to know you like it!
I hope all of you review this chapter too, I appreciate it a lot! Thanks!
Oh yeah... P.S. Only Eriol will have magic in this story no matter what I may have said before.
Chapter 7
"Well Tomoyo-san, you see………..we just…….decided to come to the dance early to help out with preparations…" Eriol finished lamely.
"Uh….that's it……right," added Syaoran.
Tomoyo just kept giving them the suspicious look.
Meanwhile, onto the escape of Sakura and Meilin…
"Well Sakura, this is as far as we go…."
"Yes……..who went and locked the door?
And the two stared disappointedly at the front entrance door.
"Oh well it doesn't matter, we have to perform soon, the dance is going to begin in 10 minutes. People are going to be here soon."
"Well then I guess that means we might as well get our snack. I think Syaoran and Eriol will keep Tomoyo busy for a while," said Sakura.
"Good point. Lead onwards," replied Meilin. And off they went, in search of goodies.
Back to the trouble-makers
"Well Tomoyo, don't you think it's getting late? I mean….aren't you going to the dance? It's going to start soon," said Syaoran, trying to throw her off track from her……..snooping. (LOL)
"Good point. I guess we should all go…." And then off she dragged the other two with her to the dance hall. Not realizing that of course that she was going to bump into the other two, getaways, as well…….
"Sakura! Meilin! Glad you could join us! Now we can all go together!" said Tomoyo, using her awesome eye power (also known as super glare) into making them walk ahead of her, so she could keep her evil eye on them. And so walked a cheerful girl, along with four depressed, maybe with a tinge of fear, teens off with her into the decorated room.
Luckily for the other 4, the staff, students and all had started coming. So this is where they all depart yet again.
"Hello Mr. Terada," all five said simultaneously.
"Good evening all of you. Tomoyo, Sakura, and Meilin, will you three please come with me for a moment. And I hope you two enjoy the dance. I'm sure you'll like the surprise," Mr. Terada said with mischievous eyes.
"Um…….yeah……… Well we'll see you later Mr. Terada," said Eriol.
"Or not," muttered Syaoran.
After the three girls and Mr. Terada had left the two decided to see if they could continue their……..plan. As they looked for a good place to set up their prank, suddenly someone started talking in the speaker, indicating everyone to listen. So the two turned to the stage and saw a sight that shocked the two as well as everyone else.
"Good evening everyone! There are three ………well you'll see in just a minute. You will all get to hear a live performance by some talented teens. They will start off the dance, and after wards the DJ will continue from there. Well everyone, cheer loud and clear as we welcome Magical Dreamz!"
And as he left the stage, behind him three figures came into view along with some instruments.
"Hello Tomoeda High! We're going to play three songs for you all today!" yelled the girl at the front, and on cheered the audience.
"At the end of our performance, we'll introduce ourselves!" said the other girl with the drums.
"And now be ready to hear us rock!" exclaimed the girl with the guitar.
And the three started their first song. While whoever was singing, the other two would dance, and that process repeated over while someone else sang… etc, etc.
As they were in the middle of their first song, Syaoran and Eriol started whispering.
"Hey Eriol! Is that Sakura, Tomoyo and Meilin? Didn't Mr. Terada take those three away right before this started?"
"Yeah I guess that could be them. Well we'll find out anyway at the end. Though they do sound pretty good, whoever it is."
Syaoran just nodded in compliance. He was still shocked that it could be those three.
As soon as they finished all three songs, the singer in the middle yelled out earning cheers from the audience.
"What did she say?" asked Syaoran.
"I have no idea, everyone's too loud," replied Eriol.
"Whatever."
Then the spotlight slowly went toward the one at the drums. Everyone was silent, waiting to find out who it was.
"And at the drums, is TOMOYO DAIDOUJI!" exclaimed the singer.
Now Tomoyo started to speak. "And at the guitar, MEILIN LI!"
By now Syaoran was pale, and he said out loud, "Oh my god, you can't be serious."
Now Meilin decided to say the final introduction. "And last but not least, one of the most amazing singers, SAKURA KINOMOTO!"
At this point you could see them all clearly with the light shining on them, where the three were smiling at the cheering audience.
"Thanks everyone for listening to us! Now it's time for the DJ to take over! SPIN IT DJ!" yelled Meilin.
As the DJ took over, the three girls went to the bathroom to change into their, how Tomoyo would say, dance clothes.
As the three came out, they were met by unexpected … friends?
"That was a great performance!" congratulated Eriol.
"Wow Kinomoto, didn't know you knew how to sing. I'm surprised that I didn't go crazy listening to you," said Syaoran.
Of course the other two girls and Eriol both knew that this would soon turn into a "cat fight" so they all left the so called enemies together as they looked for something fun to do.
Meanwhile the bickering two didn't realize that they've just been deserted.
"Well LI, I could and I can sing better than you any day!"
"Yeah well I bet I can dance way better than you can!"
"No you can't!"
"Yes I can!"
"No!"
"Yes!"
"NO!"
"Fine. Prove it then. Let's dance," he said as he led Sakura to the dance floor.
