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An Unexpected Love
Who's the Angel?
Angel's POV
I was already in Mr. Dickinson's office.
I was sitting in a chair across from Mr. Dickinson.
I was sitting straight and ready for the day ahead.
"Today we will introduce you to the all famous Bladebreakers" said Mr. Dickinson casually.
"I'm so excited, I've heard so much about them" I told him in a calm manner.
"I'm sure they will be very surprised to find that they are having a new team member"
"You mean they don't know yet?" I asked surprised. I thought that they would have known.
"Well not really. Let's just say you're their reunion present"
"Oh" I said not knowing how to react to this, "anyways, there's something that I've been meaning to ask"
"Go ahead"
"Well, umm... why did you choose me to be part of the Bladebreakers out of all the kids in the world?" I asked curiously.
"Well that's simple. I think that you would be a great addition to the team, not only because of your beyblading skills but because I'm positive that you could contribute a lot to the team in many other ways" Mr. Dickinson explained to me.
"But I'm not that good to be a part of the Bladebreakers" I denied, "I haven't been playing for long, I mean I just started learning this year when Juan and Vicky gave me Elzer"
"I am well aware of that. You consist of great potential and if you had the right team to train you could become strong enough to be able to take on the greatest of bladers"
"You really think so?"
"Yes and your already very good, and if you work hard and are determined then you could surpass what you know" said the cheerful Mr. Dickinson, "We will be going to the park where you will meet them"
"Oh, ok" I responded with a small smile on my face.
I really hope they let me be on their team I don't wanna go back not yet anyways.
Normal POV
The Bladebreakers were all practicing outside at the dojo.
"It's almost time you guys" Kenny said closing his laptop.
"Time for what chief?" asked Max.
"Mr. Dickinson said he wanted to meet us at the park at six, he said he had surprise for us and that we all had to be there"
"A surprise?" Tyson beamed.
"It's for all of us so don't think of taking it" teased Ray.
Kai didn't seem moved by this he was just standing there watching all the other happy teenagers talk about what it might be.
"Let's go then, it's already 5:52" he said to the overjoyed teens.
"Yeah, we don't want to miss Mr. Dickinson"
"I wonder what it is?" said Max.
"Yeah, me too" Tyson agreed.
Kai took the lead as they walked towards the park.
Then came Ray and Mariah close behind, Ray held her close by placing an arm around her waist. Then the Chief along with Max were also close behind them. In the far back were Tyson and Hilary they were talking to each other hand in hand.
Hiro was watching them from a close by tree.
'They look so different now. Tyson is actually quiet when he's around Hilary. Kai hasn't changed at all. I wonder how and if this Angel will even affect him. I hope she does for the better' thought Hiro as he watched them walk by.
Hiro jumped down and landed in front of Kai a ways.
Kai didn't even flinch, everyone else was surprised at his entry.
"Hiro!" yelled Tyson as he ran to him still holding Hilary's hand dragging her along with him.
"Slow down Tyson!" yelled Hilary as she tried to keep up with him.
He let go of Hilary and ran up to Hiro and gave him a hug.
"It's been so long big bro" said a childish Tyson.
"Hey, Hiro" they all greeted their old coach.
"Hey I hope you have been taking good care of my baby brother"
"Huh" said Hilary confused.
"How did you know?" asked Tyson.
"Oh, I know these things" said Hiro in a cocky voice.
"So what brings you here?" asked Ray.
"Yeah" said Kenny and Max together.
"I was wondering the same thing" said Kenny.
"Are you going to coach us again?" asked Max.
"I guess so, I mean if you're up for it" he said.
"Yeah!" the Bladebreakers said in unison excluding Kai.
"It seems Mr. Dickinson has something for us" Kai said changing the subject.
"So he's telling you today" said Hiro amused.
"What exactly is it?" asked Ray.
"Well I guess I'll give you a clue, It's not a what it's a who" said Hiro confusing the team.
They all were dumbstruck.
"I wonder who it is" said the surprised Kenny.
"I wonder why he's bringing them here as a surprise to us" pondered Max.
They all started wondering.
"Well I bet that they are pretty important to have Mr. Dickinson present them to us" Mariah said finally getting into the conversation.
"Yeah, I wonder if we already know them" said Hilary also trying to get in to the conversation
"Let's go" said Kai, "or we'll miss Mr. Dickinson and his surprise"
"Yeah, we better get going" said Hiro agreeing with Kai.
They walked together to the park.
When they got there they saw that Mr. Dickinson wasn't there yet.
"I guess we'll have to wait" said Mariah as she shrugged her shoulders.
"Yeah" said Ray agreeing with his girlfriend.
"We can practice one on one until they get here to make up for the loss of time we wasted coming here" said Kai.
"Ohhh" groaned Tyson "Do we have to?"
"Stop whining, a little practice never hurt anyone" said Hilary to Tyson.
"Fine" he said in an annoyed way.
"Come on it'll be fun" said Max.
"Yeah we all need the practice" said Ray.
"I'll even practice with you guys to get you motivated" said Mariah.
"And I can check your power levels and record them" the chief said as he opened Dizzy.
"Ohhh, why'd you have to wake me up chief?" complained Dizzy.
"Oh stop complaining we have work to do" he told her.
"Besides while you practice I can see what we'll have to practice on" reasoned Hiro.
They only got about 15 minutes of practice when Mr. Dickinson arrived with a young girl besides him.
He came up to them Kai and Hiro were the only ones to realize that they were coming.
'Who's that?' thought Kai, he had a strange feeling about her.
"Hello kids" said the cheerful Mr. Dickinson, "I'm glad that you could come Hiro, as well as the rest of you"
"Hey Mr. D!" they all yelled.
They looked at him then at the young girl with him, she was pretty attractive, she was wearing baggy, dark blue jeans with a loosely tight, baby blue and black, sleeveless shirt that came a little lower than her belly button that said 'Keep Dreaming' in bold faded letters, she wore black fingerless gloves. Her coal black hair was up in two messy buns on either side of her head and blue bangs that framed her face which brought out her eye's which were a strange clear, icy, crystal blue with a hint of green in the inner ring of her eyes, they were unlike any they've ever seen before.
"Oh, this is your surprise, this is Angel" Mr. Dickinson said as he introduced her to the group.
They all smiled at her so not to be rude.
She smiled back at them.
Tyson's POV
Mr. Dickinson presented Angel to us I wonder why. I have a feeling it's gonna be good. She seems nice but you never know, appearances can be deceiving.
I wonder if she blades. Oh well, I'll ask her later.
Ray's POV
Angel, huh, she looks more like a rebel, tomboy type girl but I have to admit she is very pretty. I wonder what Mariah would do if I said that.
Now that's funny!
Well I can't wait to get to know this 'Angel'.
I wonder if she's nice.
Max POV
So the pretty lady has a name, and it's Angel, it seem the exact opposite. Wow, I wonder why she's here. Maybe they're related. I wonder if she's staying for long. I want to get to know her more she sure seems nice.
Hilary's POV
I wonder why this girl, Angel, is here. It must be something important to have us all meet here to meet her. Oh well as long as she doesn't get on my bad side I'm fine with that.
Mariah's POV
This girl better stay away from my Ray because if she doesn't she won't know what hit her. Well she seems nice but she better watch out because I don't like it when girls though and friends are no exception. I better go greet her.
Kenny POV
I wonder why Mr. Dickinson brought Angel with him, she's probably here for something important, and I think I've seen her or heard of her before I just don't remember where. Oh well I'll probably remember sometime soon, and if not then I was probably wrong.
Kai's POV
Why did Mr. Dickinson bring her, this better be good I've got better things to do than to be here. We already missed a lot of practice. Anyways what does this girl have to do with us, does she even blade. What exactly does he mean by this?
Normal POV
Hiro went to talk to Mr. Dickinson and Angel made her way to the group.
Max was the first to introduce himself to her.
"Hi, I'm Max" he said with a huge grin 'she's really cute' thought Max.
"Hi mine's Angelyn but you can call me Angel or Angie I don't care" she said happily they shook hands and she gave him a slight kiss on the cheek, she had to get on her tiptoes to reach his face.
She was short compared to the rest of them except for Kenny who was shorter than her.
Max and everyone else were thinking she was strange to kiss people that she just met them. They were all confused by her actions.
"I guess your wondering why I kissed him it's a way some Mexicans greet others, that's how I was brought up to greet people, weird I know but still."
"Anyways my name is Kenny and this is Dizzy" he pointed to his laptop.
"Hello Angel, like he said I'm Dizzy" Dizzy said from her prison of a laptop.
Kenny shook her hand, Angel had to bend down in order to give him a greeting kiss.
"We call him chief though, I'm Tyson, and this is Hilary" he said introducing Hilary and himself. Angel shook his hand as well and also kissed him on the cheek on her tip toes.
"Pleased to meet you" said Hilary deciding to ignore the kiss Angel had given her boyfriend.
"Same here" Angel said with respect as she shook their hands and also gave her one.
"Hey I'm Ray" he said smiling so he was showing his cat like fangs, as he too received a slight kiss from Angel who was on her tip toes trying to reach him.
"I'm Mariah, Ray's girlfriend" said Mariah making herself known she was starting to get jealous, Ray noticed this and tried to suppress his laughter. Then Mariah also received a kiss from Angel.
"Nice to meet you Mariah" she said to her.
"Umm... who's that?" she asked pointing to the tall, blue haired teen that looked like he was sleeping against the fence.
"Kai" said Ray.
"Yeah, he's the team captain" Mariah added.
"Oh" she went up to him and introduced herself to him.
"Hi! I'm Angel"
"Kai" said Kai in an 'I don't care' voice.
She put her hand out in a handshake gesture but then realized that he wasn't going to shake hands with her so she shrugged and pulled her hand back and got on to her tip toes gave him a light kiss anyways.
Kai didn't seem react to it.
She walked back and then Hiro came up to her to introduce himself.
"Hi Angel, I'm Hiro"
"Hello Hiro" she greeted him with a hand shake and a kiss.
"He's my big brother" Tyson bragged.
"And your new coach" added Hiro.
They just smiled at each other while the others were dumbfounded by what Hiro had said.
Kai had opened his eyes in surprise.
"Yes, she is to be your new team member" Mr. Dickinson told them
They all looked at Kai waiting to see what the team captain would do or say.
Kai just stood there and didn't say a word to them for while, he just looked at her, and then closed his eyes thinking if it was a good idea.
"Is she good?" he finally asked Mr. Dickinson not looking up.
"Well I wanted you to help her get better, she has great potential, she hasn't bladed for long though" answered Mr. Dickinson.
"Is she good?" asked Kai once again getting annoyed.
"Yes, she is very good" responded Mr. Dickinson.
"Fine, I'll take your word for it"
Everyone was surprised at first but then started congratulating her.
She was really happy. When they headed back she only carried a black backpack with her. Kai was ahead of them as always and they walked back in the same order they had before. Hiro and Mr. Dickinson had left and Angel was going to crash at Tyson's house.
She went up to Kai and began walking along with him.
"Umm... Kai?"
He didn't answer.
"Um, thanks, thanks for letting me be on the team and just so you won't regret it I'll train hard and become good enough to reach your such high standards" she said sarcastically as smirked "and I'll show you what I can do tomorrow at practice, kay?"
He still didn't answer he had a smile hidden in him somewhere wanting to come out.
Kai's POV
I just hope that I made a good choice letting her be on the team, she's already trying to make me laugh, and she almost succeeded, and I just met her, what's happening to me! I just hope she's a good addition to this pathetic team.
She stayed walking next to me the whole way to Tyson's. Everyone else was behind us.
They all were talking about all sorts of things, I don't care anyways. The whole way Angel hasn't said a word I would have though she'd be like all the others but so far she isn't.
Angel's POV
The whole way to Tyson's house or should I say dojo I walked next to the silent captain, I didn't bother to talk to him he probably wanted to think about his decision I mean I would too.
They all seem real nice. I'm glad they all accepted me into their team. I'm officially now a Bladebreaker, how cool is that!
Well, let's see Max, blond hair, blue eye's, seems cool and happy all the time, we'll get along just fine. Tyson it seems that Hilary has already claimed his but I think that we'll get along pretty well, navy hair and mahogany eyes. As for Hilary she's ok, brunette with ruby eyes. Let's see then there's Ray he's cute but taken, oh well, I'm not much of the dating type either, not after what happened, oh well I hope I can finally forget, anyways I think we could be good friends he seems like the understanding type, he has golden catlike eyes and raven black hair. Mariah, she'll be hard to be friends with she seems like she gets really jealous easy, once we get to know each other I hope we can be good friends she looks like she'd be a good one, pink hair and golden catlike eyes, actually now that I think about it they both have a catlike look to them. Then there's Kenny and Dizzy, I'm gonna have to ask him about her later but he seems the smart, genius type, he seems nice brunette and you can't see his eye's. Oh and there's Hiro he seems really nice and I think that he'll be a good coach, light blue hair and mahogany eyes, like Tyson's. Kai, well he's quiet he seems like he's protecting himself from all of his surroundings I wonder why. I'll get it out of him eventually. I wonder if he's ever even smiled or had a good time, doesn't seem like it. Oh well, maybe if I get to know him it'll be different. I mean who knows? I just got here after all.
Anyways I've noticed he's so serious, it's like he memorized the way to Tyson's house because he's walking with his eyes closed, in fact I haven't even seen his eyes but he has two toned hair silvery blue in front and a darker blue in the back, he was clearly the best looking guy on the team.
Have I mentions that he's so hot! Not just 'good looking' as I put it before but I'll never tell him that so it doesn't make much of a difference considering I'm way out of his league, he probably goes for a certain kind of girl not a tomboyish, punkish type of girl like me.
Well maybe things will be different tomorrow.
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