Hey everyone, Cetesy here.
Ok, so don't be mad, this is NOT another new chapter.
I think it's obvious now that I am on a severe writer's block with this story, and I'm really sorry for that! But I finally figured out that the only way I'm going to be able to continue this story is to tweak up what I've already written.
My characterization of Santasia has really been bothering me, so I've decided to revise the majoritty of the story. Currently, (oct. 26) I have replaced the first chapter with a revised copy, and the changes are on the considerable side, and I'd just encourage you to read it, but you don't have to of course.
I'm not going to continue until I am done revising as much as possible, and though that may seem monstrous, I don't think it'll take very long at all. So not to worry, this story is going to turn out to be better and soon enough I'll upload a 17th chapter!
I honestly appreciate everyones pacience. And I do encourage you guys to reread as I revise, but I don't think you will get alerts when I replace chapters, so you'll hav to check on your own.
Again, thanks!
I'm out,
Cetesy