Authors note Chapter:

((I'm sorry other reviewers… but I had to answer this review. It was nagging at me, but Read Tolly's stuff. And she should have the next chapter up soon enough.))

To "theweirdperson".

First of all… 'Gee thanks for the email address! Now I can email you and give you answers!' Not! Now I have to create a whole random wasted chapter just to explain to you everything that you asked in the story.

First of all, you must not of read very well. Kiki didn't know where the lab was, she had just escaped and was panicking so she flew away. She was flying over the ocean and just kept flying until she could make it to some land. She just so happened to land on Besaid island because that's where she needed to land for the story to progress correctly.

Second, yes it is harsh for a little girl to kill all those people and destroy the lab (wondering if you've read tollivandi's chapters as well…?) but the whole point is to show that she was CREATED to kill. She is technically a weapon, and she's only known that all of her life. She was practically and indestructible weapon with a little child's temper. That was the point, so read between the lines a bit.

Thirdly I have no clue what a "perfect ending" story is, but trust me I have enough of a demented mind to twist a story and change it completely.

Fourth(ly?) I don't know what an AU is and, frankly, I don't give a shit.

It really doesn't matter when the story is set, but you do know that this is after the first game (obviously because the gullwings are together) and if you must know I was thinking that this is after vagnagun also.

Lulu, wakka know her because they were once friends with Kiki's parents. They used to visit her, but Kiki had gone to the island very little. Yuna didn't really have contact with Rikku until after Kiki was taken. Yuna wouldn't remember Kiki from when she visited Besaid because of what she's been through and Kiki visited very little. Yuna was also busy with training. (though I must admit that Wakka shouldn't have known her because he hated Al Bhed…. I may make one of the step parents not al bhed… I'll have to speak with Tolly.)

Her godfather was always evil, and getting the parents of the children to trust him enough to be their godfather was all in his plan to get the children for his experiment.

Kiki had been through a lot in the lab, and had too many old memories to remember thoroughly. She is slightly fiend, injected with fiend DNA to get their instincts. Her mind, out of the three sisters, was messed with the most. So she won't remember as much of her old life as the other girls. But also remember that Metal and Lily didn't really have too much of a life to remember before the experiments started.

If the person is who I think it is, they haven't broken of all contact with Yuna. And Yuna does think of them, but this story is not about Yuna. It's about the K3, M5 and L4 experiments. So that part does not matter at the moment.

" Please don't take this the wrong way; I am trying to help you improve your writing."

I'm really trying not to take this the wrong way, but it seemed like you asked a lot of stupid questions and I needed to answer them so you'd stop. I'm trying to improve my writing as well, but I don't appreciate it when you have no stories that I can improve as well. I don't see how you can edit stories without having enough skill to write one of you own.

Thanks for the compliment about the Al Bhed, I wasn't going to translate it but I figured I would get too many questions about it so I added translation.