Okay people, I've been working my butt off on these. It's getting harder now that I don't enjoy writing Tamora fics as much anymore. But actually I didn't work that hard... I wrote the rough in school while the teacher was talkin' eheh... Anyways... I hope you like it but...well the writing's a bit forced so it doesn't flow... Oh yea this is a relief chapter so... yeah it really doesn't affect the plot.
The Last Two Doves
KatYoukai
Chapter 4: Relief Chapter
The brunette snuck out of the palace using an old servant's entrance. The last days had been stressful but for once things were going well. She was getting out of that stuffy palace and spending the day in Corus! And with who other then the one she loved most?
Not getting lost in the crowds was tougher than not being spotted sneaking out. Kel heaved a weary sigh and trudged on. The crisp fall air chilled her breath. It was a nice change to the hot and humid summer weather.
As she finally found her way to the eating house they had chosen to meet at, a small smile graced Kel's lips. The princess could still remember when they'd been here last just a day before they parted long before.
( A/N: I just reread "Forbidden Love" and I found out how cheesy and sappy my writing was. -cringes- It's so pathetic T-T )
She entered the building to be greeted by two familiar voices," Don't give me that look, it's the truth and you know it."
" Well then you won't mind taking my share cause I'm not eating them."
" Oh no, you're not getting out of it that easily!"
Kel shook her head in mild amusement and walked over to the two bickering cousins," Stop being a spoiled child and eat your vegetables Neal."
He looked up at her with a smile and replied mockingly," Yes, mother."
He said that but throughout the whole meal, those green ickies were left untouched. Sometime near noon, passerbys crowded around the window at the comical scene of a brown-haired woman forcing a platter of vegetables down a green-eyed man's throat while another blue-eyed man grabbed him from behind.
Minutes later, on the street, that same emerald-eyed young man shot a glare at the young woman walking next to him," Gods, you're as strong as a monster! You ain't no woman!"
Dom snorted, glancing at his cousin who was clutching his troat and glaring at him with a deathly gaze.
" And you are...?" The blue-eyed man asked with a far-too-nice smile.
" Who's side are you on?" Neal snapped, still fuming.
" Not yours."
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The setting sun threw shadows over the group as they talked, sitting at the fountain in the city square. Corus was pretty empty at this time compared to the way it was in the morning.
The princess shielded her eyes, looking up at the setting sun. It was barely visible behind the buildings.
" Looks like I should be heading back," Kel remarked quietly.
The day had been fun, she hated to have to go back to the palace. Life in the palace for any regular person was fine perhaps but for her, it was suffocating. But she was willing to go with the promise that she wouldn't have to stay there forever.
She got up off the fountain edge and dusted off her dress. The princess smiled and the two ex-thieves returned the smile. After prolonged farewells, Kel finally set off in the direction of the palace.
-.-" I don't knwo if you noticed but I forced the last bits... . I need inspiration to write! I can't do this! --.-- Truth is, I want to give up... I'm sure you all know by now that I'm leaving TP fandom. If you don't read my profile for more info. I just can't seem to find reason to write here anymore. On the other hand, I'm completely obssessed with FullMetal Alchemist, D.N. Angel, and Angel Sanctuary! - I don't know if any of you are anime fans but it'd be nice if you'd read my anime fics ) Anyways, stubborness prevails and there won't be any changes till I can get these fics done. But it'll be horrible... I mean, no one's gonna enjoy reading it if I don't enjoy writing it! -sigh- I wanna die...
TPFreak: Well hope I didn't disspoint you too much --.--" It's another relief chapter! Argh! I just can't figure out a way to do the next chappie the way I want it to go... siigh...
Wildace Keladry2005: Thanks! And in return, you get your own persona thank you. Although I do that everytime so it's not special heh.
Ivory Nightshade: Yes! I updated! Then I took forever with this one and it still ended up like crap -.-" Sigh, well I hope you liked it anyways, I sure didn't o.O
WitchyMage: Well it'll get more angsty in the future. I didn't update soon unfortunetly -.-" and itended up so bad anyway...anyways, thanks for reviewing
FanFictionFantom: Yea... I feel bad, all of you are in highschool and still manage to get so much more done then I do and I'm only in Grade 8... But I'm trying to update all of ti now. But it's not really that good cause my motivation is that when I finish these I won't have anything tying me down to TP! Except my readers and reviewers -sobs- It's like switching schools!
Soccerchick- 08: Really? I can't remember doves in Aladdin... But then again it's been how long since I've read/seen it? ) I've updated for you, now you'd better update too! Or else I'll poke your eyes out with a spork! Well I'm kidding, if I poke your eyes out then you're never going to be able to finish the story anyways so it really defeats the purpose.
Riverchick: Wow you've been counting? Yea well finally I posted! But... it's really bad. My writing's slipping up. -sigh- But I hope you enjoy it anyways.
