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CW: Thanks you. Yep now I'm 14 And sorry I just like bold point. Oh well Thanks for saying the story is better. P.S. sorry I've been gone so long just been busy with Football and Pre-ap Math, Reading and Science so you could just say I'm being taking advantage of from school.
Well now to began...
That morning
Lloyd had forgot that Sheena had sleep with him and forgot she was lying in his arms. "Sheena wake up!" yaaaaawn 10 more mintues Lloyd...wait LLOYD! Yes Sheena remember last night when we... you know? ohhhhhh. Sheena said getting up naked. Well we better be getting down stairs to See Max, Kratos, and Mark. Sheena said putting on her " You look great" suit to look fancy. Yeah Lloyd said putting on his "Nobleman" suit.
Downstairs
Kratos...Kraaaaaaaatoooooooooooos. Max said snapping at Kratos. oh I'm sorry just thinking. Kratos said. Well are you going to finish that? No take it. Kratos said moving his plate to Max. Thanks
Then Lloyd and Sheena came running down the stairs.
You two sure are late. Max said eating a pancake. What were you two doing last night? Max said glaning at then with a supicous look. Well...we... just...MIND YOU OWN BUSSINESS. Lloyd and Sheena yell in unison. Ok ok. Sorry you must forgive my son he may be 18 put still acts like a child. Mark said. So where do you plan to go today? Mark ask. Well first we want to ask you sometime. Lloyd said. How did you...wife die Kratos finish. Well I don't like to talk about it but you see she...
Flashback...
Mark: Stop let her go and you can have my son Max(Mark was a swordsman just like Kratos). Forcystus: You son will be the next human to join the desians. And well let your wife go. Then he turn aroung to a desian soldier a snapped. Sarah/Max's mom Mark wife: No don't do it it a- before she could finish(she had a exsphere without a keycrest on it) her exsphere was rip off from her hand a she was trown to the ground. Mark: SARAH SARAH! he runs to her. Sarah: NOO...YOU MUST...STOP...AND KILL ME...! Mark: Why then she turned into an Exbelua. What...what the hell happen to you Sarah? Sarah/Exbelua: Please kill me you must then she began hitting him. Mark:No...Dammit I won't fucking kill you...I love you. Exbelua: I love you to and that why I want you to kill me...please do it for our son. Mark was now crying a river then he stab her heart with his sword. Exbelua: Thank you now go get Max back. Mark: Yes I'll get him back for you and will revenge you.
Back to reality.
I was right. Kratos said standing up. Did you know someone call Anna Aurion? Kratos ask. Hmm yes a girl with brown hair, wears close like you but green, and always smile even in the human ranch she was put in. You...know my mom? Lloyd ask. Yes and she is in Death Valley where I was going to see my mom you see spirits that still have something to do or wait for. Max said. How do you know Max? Lloyd ask. Because I've seen my mom before talking to Anna. Please show us where this Death Valley is Max. Kratos said. Ok but we should buy some Holy bottles first. Max said. Fine but we must send either Kratos or Sheena cause those girl might think that might think that I'm Max again and Max just can't go. Lloyd said with a frighten look on his face. I'll go. Sheena said. OK but be careful Alex might appear at anytime. Yeah I will.
Sheena walked out the house and began walking to the store when a girl near came up to her and ask "Hey did you just come out of Max's house?" Yes why? WHAT 10 girls scream in unison. Are you is girlfriend? Have you hade sex with him? Have you seen him naked? Have you played the "find out game" with him(a game where you bet money to see what color bra or panties the girls wearing)? WHAT NO OF COUARE NOT I'M ALREADY MARRIED! Sheena yell slighty mad. WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT! SO YOUR CHEATING ON YOU MAN. What no I just visiting him. Ohhhhhhhh...well...COULD YOU GET ME IN HIS HOUSE? NO ME. NO ME. BITCH I SAID ME. HELL NO I SAID ME. Then they all began fight even Sheena got in the crossfire. AHHHH I SUMMON THEE COME ORIGIN. What is it pact-maker? but he learn soon as he saw the fight. Ohhhh..."RAMESH" he yell and the triangle appear and began hitting the girls. AHHHHHHHH they all got knock out. Thank you Origin. Sheena said. You're welcome pact-maker. Then he dissappear.
Sheena ran into the store and all the guys began looking at her. She hurry to the counter. ammmmm excuse me but I need 30 Holy bottles do you have any? An extremely ugly man turn around then eyed her breast and said I'll give them to you for free for a kiss you sexy thing you. Shenna's eyes were now on fire and she said how 'bout you give them to me for free for a slap. What...no...fine 6000 gald. Ok here you go 6000 with an add 4000 keep it and by yourself a makeover or something. Then she left. As she walked out the store she was attack by a magic attack. "So shopping well you should have been shopping for your life". Alex said hold a sword. Alex what do you want? I want to kill you Sheena. Battle.
Alex: Now I going to kill you Sheena Kotomari
Sheena: My last name is not Kotomari
Alex: Hp:100,000 Tp:10,000
Alex began chanting great runner of the land...I summon thee come Dash while Sheena was chanting ancient ruler of the element...I summon thee come Maxwell. A nine tale fox like Verius appear a began going around in a circle around Sheena but attacking her at the same time while Maxwell was using Meteor storm 13/18 Meteors hit Alex. The attack Alex sent was to much for Sheena. Screen wipe off
Now you die here Sheena. Alex said as a transperent sword with a moon and a sun at the side and a fist and a foot inside the fist appear in his hands. He began walking to her when once again Kratos flew down and save her again. "Dammit Kratos why do you keep getting in my way?" Alex ask. For certain reasons but I have something to tell you. Kratos said picking up Sheena. Come to Death Valley to fight Sheena and I won't get in the way. Fine. And he warped away. Humph maybe Sheena can handle herself there. Then he warp off.
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