okay so heres chapter 2, i really hope you like it, i typed it on the lap-top so its not at all perfect, but i tried! so please review! Enjoy!
Daniel and Teal'c walked into the clearing, Sam was standing there with her back to them and was staring at a pedestal type thing. She glanced behind, "Daniel I have no clue what this says, but it does look Ancient. SO you and Teal'c stay here and figure out what it is and I will go and get our own personal Ancient."
"Umm... Sam, tell Jack it looks like some sort of weapon of some sort. Then he'll come."
Jack stepped through the gate, "Well, not exactly what I had planned for my weekend, I was thinking a few more trees, maybe some grass, a little less sand and more dirt, and a couple lakes and birds. But… it will have to do I guess."
"Hey Sir, how was the trip?"
"Just as pleasant as always. You know, I really do miss going off world, you should find more Ancient gadgets. So what sort of the did you kids find?"
"Daniel said he thought it was a weapon of some sort, so we'll see what it is when we get there."
"You lead the may, miss Carter."
"Sooo, what's the update at the SGC?"
"Well, SG7 came back and they found a plant that they want to bring back, and SG5 found some rocks that that I need Danny-boy to read." Jack started naming the events of the day. "So exciting as it all sounds, I jumped at the chance to do some weapon testing."
"Okay well lets get walking."
"Carter, we still on for fishing this weekend? I've got all the beer and everything else ready, and we are both scheduled for this weekend off, so unless something big happens then, you have no excuse to stay here working. And you already agreed to go with me anyways…"
"Don't worry, I'm planning on fishing in Minnesota for the weekend so I thing that's a yes."
"Great! So pick you up tomorrow around 9? And did you ask if Danny and Teal's wanted to come?"
"Yes, I asked them and they said they didn't want to come and interfere with our plans."
"What do they think we are going to do? They do know that we follow the regs. Don't they? Well most of them anyways…"
"Hey Sam, Jack you got here fast."
"Well space-monkey it was a very exciting day at the SGC, I just had such a hard time tearing myself away." Jack replied sarcasm dripping with every word but wearing a straight face.
"Well I'm pretty sure it's a weapon, but I'm not positive. So I say we just try it and see what happens."
"Daniel are you sure about that, maybe we should run some test on it first you know…"
"Actually, in the text it says stuff along the lines of 'complete control and order. So I think it is very… mind controlled."
"So, you better hope I'm not mad at you when I do it?" Jack asked with a smile.
"Jack just try it."
"So you're sure I'm not going to kill you guys?"
"Jack just try it."
"Okay I'm just making sure…"
"JACK JUST TRY IT WILL YOU!"
"I'm going Daniel, I'm going!"
Jack put his hands in the circles on the pedestal, it lit up and then jack closed his eyes. He stayed there for a minute or two.
"Jack, I think you can let go now." He stayed there not moving.
"O'Neill, the weapon seems efficient." He still didn't move.
Sam started walking toward him, "General, GENERAL" he still didn't move, She reached to grab his wrist off the machine.
"Colonel Carter, I do not believe it would be smart to touch him."
"Teal'c, he's not reacting to anything, I've got to try something!" Sam grabbed his wrist, the machine jolted and they both shot across the clearing, landing next to one of the cactus type plants in a tangled heap on the ground.
"Carter, you okay?"
"General?" she blinked a couple times, "Yah I'm fine. Are you okay? You wouldn't respond to any thing earlier."
"Yah, it was just that stupid thing, most defiantly not a weapon."
They could here Daniel and Teal'c coming, and then they realized their positions and sprang apart.
"You guys alright?"
"Peachy Daniel just peachy!"
"Okay good. But I don't think that was a weapon."
"Yah think!" jack growled, "well anyways, enough napping time Carter, time to get up!"
"So Daniel, any idea at all what that thing is?" Sam asked, as soon as she was up.
"Actually no, not yet. But there is still more writing to read."
"Well Daniel that might be cut short, we've got company!"
Daniel squinted into the distance, and sure enough there was a group of men coming toward them, and as good as Daniel could guess, they were not very happy!
"Jack just be nice, maybe they can tell us what this thing is and does."
"Daniel, I'm hurt. When have I ever not been diplomatic?"
i don't know when i'll be able to update agian, i'm going to have to type the rest but i'll go faster if i have some reviews! and if anyone has some ideas then please send them to me, and the jack/sam will come sometime within the next few chapters!