Hi this is my first shot at a Love Hina Fan Fic avoid flames if possible, but if I deserve them please send them, and remember that I am writing this at 1 in the morning. Story takes place during some random time during the story. I just wanted to warn you that this does have an ACC, but I swear that its not one of those get all the girls, I'm practically god self inserts merely a character to help change the story line so I can avoid occ as much as I can. Well I'm pretty sure you are all pretty sure that you all are tired of my constant rambling, so now on to the legal stuff and title.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the Love Hina stuff.
When Visitors Come To Town
The Introduction Of The New Variable, and now finally on to the story
Well I lied here is just a little bit more of my rambling okay now its time for the story.
It was just a (relatively) normal day at the Hinata-su, and the surrounding area. You all can picture the day, sun coming over the mountains birds chirping, and poor Keitaro getting sent to the other side of town courtesy of everyone's favorite brunette Naru (for all of you who have a problem with me using that instead of Narusegawa I don't care it's just much easier for me, but if this really bugs you put it in your review, and I will see if I can go all out for you guys), and of course the moment he gets launched it starts to rain.
But now lets go and look at the place where he was headed, the busiest street in all of their town, which basically meant only one or two cars every one of them. Now nothing on this street looked particularly interesting, except for one guy who looked around 5" 8' (170 cm) tall. Wearing a long trench coat that reached his ankles.
"Wonder why it started to rain so suddenly" the young man thought to himself when he suddenly saw through the corner of his eye a small child run into the street to get a ball that rolled into the middle of the road when he noticed that a moving truck was coming and wasn't slowing down. He then did what any man should do, dropped his bags that he was holding, and ran to the kid, and tried to get the kid out of the way.
While pushing the kid out of the way, he himself tripped and fell getting his foot stuck in a pothole securing him into the spot that he was. "Damn what a crappy way to die getting run over." he thought when he suddenly heard a whistling sound, followed by some thing yelling. He then looked up and saw a strange guy falling from the sky who then suddenly crashed into the moving truck, causing it to flip, and stop right in front of the strange guy.
"Are you okay" Keitaro asked the strange guy. "You just saved my life! I am forever in your debt" the young man told Keitaro. "Ohh it was no big deal, don't worry about it," returned Keitaro as he helped the guy out of the pothole. "Well my name is Drake, Drake Tain, nice to meet you, but sir I am serious I am forever in your debt, I beg of you that you will allow me to be your body guard." he said getting on his knees for the last part. "No it wouldn't work out, I am sorry." "Thank you, please excuse me." Drake said picking up his bags, and heading to the bridge.
"Wait" Keitaro shouted "I live nearby, and its almost breakfast, so if your hungry your welcome to drop by. The food is good." Keitaro asked him trying to sound as generous as possible. "Well I am a little hungry and it has been a while since I had a good home cooked meal." He said trying not to sound excited, but was failing miserably, and that is how Keitaro Urashima, and Drake Tain came to meet, and create a friendship that would warp and change the lives of many people, especially the special girls of the Hinata-su.
I know that was short, but this is merely the prologue, and I wanted to see if this story would be liked. If you liked it and think that it may turn out good please just drop a simple review of yes or no, or you could just drop a really long one whatever you like. Ohh and as you probably guessed I am lacking a proofreader, and I plan to make many blatantly wrong spellings and such until I get one. So if you are up for it please drop me a line, as an email, review or you can contact me using one of the messaging services out there. My yahoo is vibious, my aim is todeskurier, and for the windows messenger. Hope to hear from you soon.