Disclaimer-I don't own anything except Elizabeth, but I would love Heath Ledger and if anyone asks no I did not kidnap him!
Heath-HELP ME!
Me-Puts duct tape on Heath's mouth That wasn't Heath Ledger…that was some hobo….yeah, a hobo. STOP CRAWLING AWAY! runs after Heath
Authors Note- I do not, I repeat DO NOT like this chapter cause of my writing in this. So it is perfectly fine if you don't like it.
Hate Can Turn To Love
Elizabeth looked up and saw the famous Brothers Grimm. She could tell that the man with the long blonde hair and cocky grin was Angelica's soon to be husband Will. She then looked over at the younger Grimm. He was, in her opinion, gorgeous. He wasn't those tough, muscle headed idiots. Actually, he was rather smart looking and had high chiseled cheek bones. Not to mention amazing deep brown eyes.
He didn't notice her at first since he was scribbling in a book and chewing on his pen with a frustrated look on his face. She didn't really expect anything different. It wasn't that she was homely…far from actually. The problem was that she was different then most of the women in the village and that made her unattractive to most common men. She had dirty blonde hair which she usually tied up in a black ribbon, a pale complexion even though she spent a lot of her time in the sun working with horses. Training with them was where she had gotten her muscle. Her favorite thing about her self was in fact her deep blue eyes which turned grey when she was angry. She was pretty sure that she wasn't homely, yet she was used to men ignoring her.
"I suspect you know MY name." Will commented with an oversized grin. Even though Elizabeth had known who he was, it would have been politer to at least offer your hand.
Jake who had overheard his brother's comment and rudeness rolled his eyes. Even though he was in fact used to his brother's attitude he still couldn't believe that he would act that way to a stranger. He honestly wondered how his older brother had still so much to learn. It was then he realized that there was a new person and he had yet to introduce himself, so he was actually as bad as Will at the moment.
Elizabeth thought she would die when Jake gave her an adorable lopsided grin and stuck his hand out for her to shake. He then mumbled "Jaahke Gurm" with the pen still in his mouth. Elizabeth determined that that meant Jake Grimm.
"Elizabeth Rossum" she replied taking his hand and shaking it with a smile.
"Well boys, I'm sure Elizabeth would like to freshen up and we need to catch up so we will see you at dinner!" Angelica laughed, taking Elizabeth by the hand.
They arrived at Angelica's house and Angelica decided to go for it.
"So, you like Jake?" she questioned innocently.
"No!" Liz replied her cheeks tinted slightly. Angelica realized that she could drop the subject since she had her answer and the girls continued to catch up on what happened in each others life. Angelica told her all about meeting Will and Jake and the amazing adventure that came with their meeting. Pretty soon it was dark out and the girls decided it was time for dinner, so they went to their rooms to freshen up.
Authors Note-Okay that's it. Personally I don't like this chapter as much as the first and yes I did already state this in the beginning but I've been freaking out with school starting even though I'm positive Im gonna have a good year! So, please do not base your opinion of my writing on this chapter because even I don't like this one. Also, it is perfectly fine if you DO like this chapter and if you do I am very very happy! Cheesy smileBTW, I saw Red Eye last night and it was awesome so if you have a chance GO SEE IT!
Reviews-
Blazergal2006, Pokerfiend1313, Fernadez- Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like the story and I hope you continue to read!
Kagii- Thanks for the wonderful compliments and I'm glad you think I write well for the story. I hope you continue to enjoy it and I will definitely be writing more!
SweetiePye2332-Thanks for the advice. I tried to make this a little longer and added a description of Elizabeth. I hope this suits you and you continue to read, I also saw the movie twice actually and I also loved it!
Lone Dark Wolf- I'm glad you think this is the best Brothers Grimm Fic so far, I'm soooo happy to get reviews like the one you sent. Thanks for the compliment on my story and my name! Lol Phantom of the Opera is the best! The other lyrics with my name could be Help me make The-Music-of-the-Night Lol .
Thanks to all my reviewers I appreciate it greatly! . . .
