Disclaimer-blah, blah, blah, you know I own absolutely nothing besides Elizabeth.
Authors Note- I am SOOOOOO sorry. I know I haven't updated in forever, but school has been so weird getting back into it and everything has been hectic. I hope you haven't left me! I heart you all! hands illegal copies of the Brothers Grimm to all reviewers THERE! Hopefully that makes up! muffling screams heard from the closet Oh yes, I forgot to thank what-is-a-youth for the nice suggestion about a certain Mr. Ledger. Anyhoo, enough rambling, here it is! BTW, for the sake of this, their sister's name was Sophie.
Hate Can Turn to Love
Elizabeth quickly dressed in a white dress with short loose sleeves that came down to her knees and let her hair down from the tight ribbon. She quietly walked and observed the Brothers Grimm talking and laughing amongst themselves. She wondered if she had judged Wilhelm wrong and tried to decide if she should give him another chance. As she was debating, she opened her eyes and realized that both brothers were looking at her in awe. Both of them insisted that this was a different person from the tough woman with the dirt streaked face that they had met this morning. At this a small blush crept upon her face. Will's attention was soon adverted to the equally beautiful Angelica. Elizabeth felt as if a pair of eyes were still on her and turned to find Jacob holding out his arm. For the second time that night, a blush crept up and she gladly accepted his arm.
They walked out of the house and Elizabeth thought about how impressed she was with how the Grimm Brothers cleaned up. As she was thinking about this she glanced over at Jacob who in turn was looking at her. This caused both to look away embarrassed. What's wrong with me? she thought I feel like a kid with a crush! She spent the rest of the walk to the inn/pub trying to stop thinking about the youngest Grimm brother.
They finally got to the inn/pub, but it still took about 15 minutes to get to their seat considering Wilhelm decided that he had to sign every autograph and smirk at every girl in the pub. That decision to forgive Wilhelm tilted more to the "no" side by the time they finally sat down. They ate their meals while happily conversing about anything that came to mind. The topic that came up the most were stories about Angelica and Elizabeth as girls. Will took every opportunity to gloat about their stories that Elizabeth found fascinating and gave Will more credit. Jake didn't say much throughout the meal and every time Elizabeth looked over he kept having a dazed look in his eyes. She thought about questioning him about it after dinner.
The meal was delicious and the company was great. All four of the people had smiles on their faces at the end, even Jake which made Elizabeth forget the look in his eyes at dinner. When they got home Angelica was tired from the days events and headed to bed. Will was talking to Jake when Elizabeth went into her room to change. She got changed into her night clothes, washed her face in her basin, and brushed her hair out. With all the memories that came back to her tonight, it was a surprise that the only thought in her head was of the youngest Grimm. His eyes, high cheekbones, cute yet perfect smile, sweet personality, selfless acts, the way he could make her blush and seem like a young girl . She flushed at the cheeks thinking about it. I sound crazy. I should just stop, why would he even like me? I mean first, he probably has tons of girls who like him and his brother. Secondly, I just met him today!………why do I feel this way then? She snapped out of her thoughts by Angelica's cat rubbing up against her leg and looking up at her with those big adorable eyes. She grinned and bent down to carefully pet the cat making it purr loudly.
She wondered how long she had been thinking. She slowly wandered out to the other room. The fire was still on in the fireplace. That's weird…I guess they realized I was coming back out. She sat down on the small chair and stared into the fire, watching the flames dance back and forth. Elizabeth slowly turned as she thought she heard a small sound. She looked in the corner and saw Jake.
"Jake?" she questioned slowly walking up, "Jake?" He turned and her eyes went wide when she realized that he was crying.
"Jake what's wrong?" she said desperate to know.
He only mumbled something, while turning around. Elizabeth put two fingers under his chin and turned him to look at her.
"Please…tell me what's wrong?" she pleaded.
"Sophie…" he said tears rolling down his cheeks.
Authors Note-Okay there you have it! Hopefully it makes up for the short chapter last time! Anyhoo….you know what to do! LMAO THAT RYMED!
REVIEWS
Lone Dark Wolf- Glad you liked it. I never looked at the chapter that way…thanks!
KatelynnLynn- Glad you liked that chapter and I definitely agree, Jake is adorable!
ReahX25- Your review rocked! Thanks so much for saying I put my own twist on it. That definitely helped!
chalet beauregard- Sorry I didn't get to your review in the second chapter. Anyhoo, I couldn't really find a German name and yes I understand that Elizabeth isn't a German name, but I couldn't really find one I liked. I hate spelling Angelika like this, even though it is the proper spelling. I might switch it but please don't mind if I do. I was proud of myself for getting Wilhelm's name right . People have reminded me about the grammar and my friend is going to start checking it, not including this chapter though. My character will spend the rest of her time in a dress, but it is not pleasant riding for hours on horseback in a dress. Sorry about the Lizzy thing, no one else will call her that, it will be plain Elizabeth or if you could perhaps think up a shorter sub-name for her , that would be helpful. To clear up the boys intro, Angelica and Elizabeth were talking while walking. I definitely could have explained it better. I personally liked Wilhelm with Angelica instead so there ya go .
Kagii- Glad you liked it. Can't wait to see where the curiosity leads you!
Aylah- More people have pointed out the grammar and my friend will be checking them, not including this one. If anyone would be willing to help, just e-mail me about it! I will definitely stop adding comments in the middle, I will either add them at the end or beginning like I did in this chapter with their sister's name. The last chapter was rushed and as I admitted definitely not my best. Thanks for the Pen in mouth comment, I thought that up all by myself .
what-is-a-youth- glad you liked it! Yes, I am in fact a phantom phan. BTW, I do have a phantom fic up if you are interested in reading it. I suck at tenses BTW. I constantly switch so I will definitely try to work on that. Also, I will try to make Wilhelm have good intentions, like in this chapter! Also, thanks again about the whole ummm…closet thing. Muffled Screaming Ummm…the hot aussie closets monster needs me! Thanks for the review, continue to read.
Mark My Words-Glad you liked it. Please continue to read!
Alatarial Elf- glad you think that this will be a good story and I hope that it lives up to expectations!