sighs …….just because my reviewers are so demanding I'm going to update my story….I've been having trouble trying to decide which way the story should go, so just be patient….lol
Anyways, here's chapter 8!
-I wanted to be so much more
Chapter 8: Take my hand
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Night was falling rapidly, and Claire was falling depressed and worried.
'What if he didn't make it?' She thought.
It would be all her fault.
Claire started to cry.
She looked at the medical tent longingly.
Shannon and Kate were outside talking, possibly about the worst.
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"I saw him, I'm positive!" Shannon said.
"Now, are you sure it's his?" Kate questioned her.
"Yes!"
Shannon said getting somewhat frustrated.
"Is that what he was doing?" Kate asked in a low whisper.
"I'm positive," Shannon said nodding.
Jack poked his head out of the tent.
"He is awake now, but not for long, I'm thinking…..do you want to ask him?" Jack said to the girls.
Kate and Shannon filed into the tent quietly.
Shannon went up to Charlie. "Is this yours? Is this what you were doing?"
He nodded slowly.
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"Claire!" Kate called.
Claire looked over and saw Jack, Kate and Shannon near the medical tent.
'Did he die?' She wondered.
No.
She had to stop thinking the worst.
She slowly walked over to them.
"Yes?" she asked.
"Charlie wants to show you something." Kate said.
Jack opened the tent flap for her.
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When Claire got in Charlie was awake.
She sat down next to him.
Charlie took her hand in his, then removed it.
In Claire's hand lay a ring.
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Hope you like the story! i really am sorry for the length of the chapters. As for my reviewers……
Jaye Black- hey thnks for the review! And yes I know…..i am mad at me too for making such a sad story…….lol
Sawyerslover- Thank you, I will keep going for as long as I can….:-)
SpikeandCharlie'slostlove- omg, I never knew someone could love a fanfiction that much….o yes I've done it before too…lol
LOTRDomnLijfreak- Thank you, Ashley! I'll try to update ASAP
Fluffy Puff Marshmellow- Apparently there is justice in this world. ;-)