O.k, I'm writing chapter 5! Whoo!

Phil looked from Via to Owen, then back at Via. Tears were streaming her face and, before long, he was too. Soon the 3 teenagers were bawling their eyes out for Keely. A slight rap on the door brought them too.

"Visiting hour is almost over." The nurse told them and walked out, off to the next room.

"Well, see ya Phil!" Owen said, spraying Oreo crumbs onto Phil's bed. Phil looked at where his gifts and cards were and wasn't surprised to see that most of the food boxes had been pried open. Phil sighed. He was alone again. Where was his family? He wondered, were they here earlier? But his first priority was to find Keely. He knew that the nurses and doctors wouldn't see her, he was a recovering patient. Shuffling out of bed, he made his way to opened door. Glancing out, he saw a nurse kicking out grieving friends and relatives. Where was the invi-spray when he needed it?

"Rats!" He shouted, a bit loud. The nurse almost turned around, but then just carried on walking. The wizard was in his suit pocket, and his suit was…where? He'd never been to a hospital before, well not a 21st century one. In his time, all the doctor had to do was put this little light over the broken thing and presto, it was fixed. He'd had to have that treatment when Pim pushed him down a flight of stairs for a "science experiment". The nurse had moved on, Phil could see her at the end of the corridor.Looking through every door, but at no prevail, he soon started to give up. As he trudged back, depressed, he walked straight back to his room. As he walked back, he crashed straight into one of the doctors who had been treating Keely.

"Sorry" Phil grumbled, unapologetically.

"Sir, are you lost?"

"Huh? Oh, I was just looking for Keely, but I gave up. You don't know where she is, do you?"

"Are you a close relative? Because I'm afraid visiting hour just ended."

"No, I'm here best friend. I've the one who saved her life…but put her in an irreversible coma instead." Phil stated, he felt like hitting himself.

"Mr Diffy? Is that you, Philip Diffy?" the doctor asked

"Yeah" Phil nodded half-heartedly.

"I'll take you to her, but don't tell anyone, else, k?" Phil nodded again and followed the doctor up and down long corridors and flights of stairs. Phil desperately tried to remember the way. The doctor stopped outside a room. 666, Phil had the number stored in his brain.

"Thanks, Mr Doctor, dude…" The doctor smiled at Phil

"That's O.k, and I'll make sure no one sees you."

"Thanks, but how come you're being so nice to me?"

"Because I know I'd feel and do exactly the same if it happened to my girlfriend."

"Oh, Keely isn't my girlfriend" Phil told him. The doctor raised his eyebrow and rolled his eyes. Phil said thanks once again and went into the room. Keely was lying in the bed, life support beeping normally. Phil burst into tears when he saw this. There was a chair in the corner of the room; Phil dragged it over to the side of the bed. Gently, he whispered to Keely,

"Hey Keels, it's Phil. I know you can't here me, but I'll try anyway. Keely, you…I…I can't form a proper sentence but, we'll go skyaking, to Africa and we can go on Safari and we could go to Hawaii and China and Australia and England and my dad is close to fixing the Time Machine, you could come to the future with us- all you have to do is wake up" Phil gently held Keely's hand.

"Please wake up" He said softly, a salty tear fell down his cheek and landed on their interlocking hands. He felt a small squeeze on his hand.

O.k, I may not be able to update as much as usual because I have been banned from spending too much time on the 'puter