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Jak's P.O.V

The pair made up of Jak and Daxter, soon find thier way out of the portal and down towards a city, where they have a crash landing. They looked around, and saw metallic structures everywhere. This left an angry face on Daxter, who raised up the metal pipe he was holding and threw it to the ground.

"Okay, I swear that that is the last time I ever, EVER, touch any stupid precursor crap!" Yells Daxter, while Jak is just content to look in awe at the city. That's when he sees another form, falling from the sky. At first, he thought it might be Samos or Keira, but from what he could see, itwas a young man, around his age, who just crashed into the side of the city opposite them.

Then from in front of him, a bunch of soldiers, led by a sleek, sly looking man, who they would soon find out is Errol, came towards them.

"There he is, move in!" Said one of the soldiers. They all walked up to the two. "Step away from the animal!"

"Yyyaaaaahhhhh!" Daxter yelled, as he ran between Jak's legs and kept running until he was out of sight.

"Forget the rat!" Errol yells to the guards as they start to run after Daxter. "We need the boy! And hurry it up! We still have to capture the other one before he comes to and wanders off somewhere!"

One of the soldiers walks up to Jak, and hits him on the back of the head with his gun. Just before Jak falls unconcious, he hears Daxter yelling in the distance.

"Don't worry Jak! I'll save you in no time!"


Kaze's P.O.V

When I woke up I was in a strange place. I was straped on an examination table in a dark room. However this was definetly not a hospital. I could tell this by how even with so little light, I could see that the walls of this room were black. There were also large assortments of knives anddaggers lining the walls.I also heard someone else breathing close by. Although I didn't pay it much attention. Probably just another prisoner in this damned place. Besides, there were much more important things to look at. Like the giant laser aimed right at me! I kept looking around the room and saw another laser pointed at a figure straped about two meters to the right of me.

Thats when I realized. We weren't just prisoners here, we were experiments! I started to fruitlessly struggle again'st my bonds, and I heard groaning. I probably just woke him. Oh well, he'll probably start struggling too when he finds out where he is.

"Oh,they're both awake already? Thats unexpected. I thought both of them would be out cold for at least a few more hours." Said a voice from the wall in front of me. Suddenly, the lights turned on.

Once my eyes adjusted, I took this chance at light to look around the room again. There was a big door with a metal frame on my far left. And when I look over at the prisoner, I see that he is a boy probably only around seventeen! Wow... what are the chances of of him being only one year older than me? Also, I found that the reason the man's voice was coming from the wall was because there was a room there, and a plate of glass connected the two rooms.

Inside the room were many terminals and computers. Because of this, I correctly assumed this was thecontrol room. Inside the room were two people.The man who had spoken had tattoes on his face and strange multi-color armor. I thought it looked quite funny. The other person had a giant sword and he was a rather big man. Also, half of his face was metal. Kaze wondered what happened for him to have a metal plate on his head, but I didn't dwell on it. I probably would never find out anyway. Besides, they were starting to talk now.

"Should we start the injections, Baron Praxis?" Said the strange one.

"Yes. Begin the injections, Errol." Said the one in red.

So the small one is Errol and the big one is the Baron. Wait... what did they mean, INJECTIONS! What are they going to inject us with? It can't be good if they're using lasers! I thought, as I continued to listen to what they were saying.

"So it's settled. Jak will be used for the dark eco, and Kaze will be used for the light eco. Let's start."

Dark eco and light eco? What do these freaks think they are experimenting with! And how strong do those idiots think we are? I mean, sure, light eco is supposed to be non-volatile, but having any eco forced into your system is deadly! I thought, frightened.

Suddenly, both of the lasers started glowing. The one aimed at the other boy, who Kaze knows is now named Jak, glowed a mix of black and dark purple. Dark eco... I thought when I saw it. The one aimed at me glowed a brilliant white which seemed horribly out of pace in this hellhole. ...And light eco.

Both lasers glowed brighter and brighter until...

They fired.


Jak's P.O.V

(Two years later)

"Aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!"

That...was...horrible. That was one of the more forceful injections. They've been steadily getting worse for the past two years. And although the scientists don't notice, I am steadily changing. I've been having beast-like urges lately. And the worst part is, I have a voice in my head that can think for itself. I'm guessing that other guy, Kaze, has one too, but i've never asked. Not thatI think I could. Although I probably can now.The Creaturehas done something to fix whatever was stopping me from speaking. It seems logical, because there was never anything physical from stopping me.

"Dark eco injection complete. Subject normal and unchanged." That was the computer. Although, for a computer, it's awful stupid. Normal and unchanged my ass. I'm abloody freak of nature!

"What in the world? You should at least be dead with all the dark eco i've pumped into you!" Yelled the Baron.

"I think we should dispose of this 'experiment' Baron." Said Errol.

"Why would we do that?"

"You see, dark eco is very violent. I am positive that at this level, the only thing holding it back is the fact that the boy doesn't like to kill. Also, if he ever uses his power, we will definetly be the ones attacked. Not the metal heads."

"So you expect us to dispose of this guy and the other one? We'll be throwing two years of work down the drain! You expect me to do that?"

"No. Only dispose of the dark one. Keep the light one. Light eco is easier to control. The only problem is that that one also dislikes killing. He may have the power to rule this city with an iron fist! But he won't let us use that power in his right state of mind."

"So what do you propose we do?"

"To put it bluntly? Break him. We will put him through so much pain and torture that he won't know the difference between left and right! We will beat him to within an inch of death, wait for him to regenerate with his light powers, and then beat him again! And we won't stop until he is insane! We will punch him, kick him, cut him, shoot him, everything within our power!"

"Intresting, and you think this can work?"

"I am positive. However, it will take an undetermined amount of time."

"Very well. Proceed with this plan of yours."

"No need. It is already in progress. It has been for at least six hours."

"It has? Then why haven't I heard any yelling or shouts of pain?"

Errol grinned. "I had them conduct the torturings in a soundproof blast chamber on the fifth floor. In fact, I was cutting him open for a couple of hours."

They started to walk out. "So that's where you went..."

SLAM!

Now, I was all alone in the room. And truthfully? I was scared. Not for myself, oh no. I was scared for Kaze. I mean, I may be done away with tonight, but at least I won't live a life of torturing.(There's the whir of an elevator in the background)Too bad there is nothing I can do to save the guy...

"Ding, ding...third floor...body chains...roach food...torture devices..."

...Perhaps I spoke too soon! I'ts Daxter!

Daxter starts walking around the room, then he jumps on my stomach and stares at me.

"Hey buddy, you seen any heroes around here?" He doesn't even recognize me? I guess I changed more than I thought. "WHOA! Jak? Is that you buddy? It's me! Daxter!" I try to lift my head to look at Daxter, but flinch from the the pain."Well, thats a fine way to say hello! I've been crawling around this place for two years, literally risking my tail to save you! Please say something! Just this once!"

Something within me just seemed to snap at that sentence. So, let it be known, that these wereJak'svery first words. "I'm gonna kill Praxis!"

"Ssssshhhhh! Quiet! Now just stay still while I try to get these off you."

But I wasen't listening. I felt a sudden surge of power go through me. A dark power. I saw red. I tried to stand up, and I easily broke the restraints. Then I set my sights on the furry ottsel. I didn't know then, but I had transformed into Dark Jak. I now had claws instead of nails, two horns on the top of my head, and my skin and hair had both turned very pale. Also, my eyes were completly black.

"Easy now Jak, easy buddy, its your old pal Daxter, remember?

I continued to tell the voice in my head that was now in control to not attack Daxter, that he was a friend. And it listened. I now had control.

"What the hell was that? What did they do to you here?Actually, forget it. Justremind me never to get on your bad side. Well lets get out of here, tall, dark, and gruesome. Follow me! But first, I got you some new duds. Put em on. I've brought more just in case."

Jak now had on a blue long sleeved t-shirt along with a pair of blue gauntlets. He also had a pair of black steel-toed boots. Alongwith a more advanced pair of his old goggles. He also had a steel shoulderpad on his left shoulder. Jak was also fairly tall, with greenish-blonde hair that was slicked back. He also had a small green goatee. However the strangest part was probably his eyes. His blue eyes were a much darker shade than they should be.

Daxter walked out of the room, then turned left. Jak turned right.

"Hey Jak! Ground floor is this way!"

"I know."

"Then why are you going that way?"

"To break someone out."

"Who would you want to break out of here?"

"A friend."

"How did you manage to make a friend in this hellhole?"

"A whole lot of time in each other's company."

"Oh."

"C'mon Daxter, lets go."


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