AN: I decided to edit this chapter, to make it more interessting for the readers of the story.
I read through the reviews, and tried to put the suggestions of some users as best as I could into the story.
Chapter Two
Goirdo finally reached the Mc Guire residence, he hit the doorbell and waited for the door to be openend.
"Good Idea, lets do that Mc Guire."
"Ok Im going to kitchen to tell my mom that we are going to mall and rent a video, I´ll be right back."
Lizzie went into the kitchen and then said to her mom ,who was cooking in the kitchen" Mom Im going to the mall with Gordo to rent a video, is that ok?"
"Sure that's ok Honey", Jo Mc Guire replied.
"Bye mom, cya later."
Lizzie went back to Gordo, grabbed her purse from a table near the door and the two left the Mc Guire residence in the direction of the Mall. Ten Minutes later Gordo and Lizzie reached the Mall and got inside the video rental shop, and searched for a good video to rent. After a couple of minutes of searching Gordo found a good action film: Terminator 3 and showed it Lizzie who said: "Come on Gordo not a Action movie, I wanna see a romantic movie like Titanic for example."
Lizzie searched for Titanic in the video rental shop, finally she found it and showed it toGordo.
Lizzie knew how much Gordo would like to rent a action movie, but she wasn´t a fan of explosions and all the other stuff that happend in action movies. She loved romantic movies like Titanic and actually had a little crush on Leonardo Di Caprio. Gordo and Lizzie looked each other in the eyes, Gordo didn't like´romantic movies at all, but he saw deep in the eyes of Lizzie and couldn't say, even if he wanted. So relented and said: "Ok let's rent Titanic, can't say no to you Mc Guire."
Lizzie smiled at him and gave him a short hug, together they went to the cash desk to rent video.
They left the Mall and made their back to Lizzies house, which was not far away from the mall, so it wouldn't take long to reach the Mc Guire residence. Gordos thoughts were full of Lizzie, while they walked. "She truly is a beautiful girl, I love to see her smile that makes me happy when I have a bad day. When will I be able to tell her what I feel? and does she feel the same way, or will she reject me and avoid me forever, Gordo thought while walking besides Lizzie. He was so scared of Lizzies reaction to his confession, and didn't want to loose her as a friend, that would be the worst thing for him that could happen.
AN: That was the edited version of the second chapter, I hope you like it and please review!