Chapter 11- Bloopers and deleted scenes
Disclaimer: I do not own Avatar or any characters like that, just my own.
Wow, it's actually raining over here right now. It's been looking like it should all day, but it's finally raining! Whooo!
Right now, my birthday was Wednesday, and so, I'm in the mood for some funny. Oh, and again, Kabby's words will be underlined, and mine will be regular.
Khazia- 10-Do you mind if I use your format for these? Tell me if you want me to change it, and I will. Thank you so much for the locket, I love it! 9- Yes, it was Amy Lee from Evanescence, and one of my fave songs, too. I'm such a nut for that band
FireGurl107- Thank you for the gift, since you said anything Kabby would want, then it would have to be and Evanescence CD. WHOOO! I love that band…wait, I think I've already said that…ah well. Thanks for the link by the way!
Monkeybrains127- You don't have to go to school? Lucky. I wasn't too clear on that fact last chapter: Her father abandoned her, and her mother died about 4 years ago. Her brother and sister are actually the foster parent's kids; she was an only child. Is that better?
SeethingxShadows- Her mom died when she was young, and her father abandoned her. The two parents that she went on vacation with are her foster parents who eventually adopted her. Ok, then, you get sherbert. What flavor would you like? Thank you so much for the locket. I decided to put a picture of Pavan, Cadee and I in it, when we went to New Orleans once.
Lin13- HAPPY BUNNY ROX! Thank you for the gift, I like it a lot, and like o-dragon pointed out, HAPPY BUNNY ROX! Lol
Elf of rohan- The confession to each other...I'm going to put that at the end of the story, otherwise it wouldn't make much sense to do it now, but I'm hoping it will be good. Seems to me they both have Daddy issues...hmmm, is this a hint?I love being hyper. It makes life better.
Oh, you guys don't forget that a new episode of Avatar is October 7th, this Friday, and Zukie (Zuko growls) will be in it! WHOOO! Ya, ok, here ya go…
This is how it will work: Every "shot" is like a different scene, and every "take" is a different take of that scene. And everything in parenthesis is what they are doing. Make since? Note: CM stands for crewmember.
Chapter 1---
Shot 1- The ice competition
Kabira: (goes out on ice and begins all the spins and turns. In the middle of the routine, she falls on her butt.) Ow! Can we do that over again?
Shot 2- Saying goodbye
Kabira: Kegan! You know I can't take you! (Hugs raccoon to her) Uh…can someone help? This raccoon is stuck to me!
Five minutes later:
Kabira: Ow! Ow! Ow! Ow! Ow! That hurts! (Crewmembers try to pry the animal away)
CM: can we get some scissors in here? (Kabira's eyes widen)
Kabby: That's ok, I'll just deal with it.
CM: But we need to finish the scene.
Kabby: (sighs) Pull him off really quickly then. (CM grabs raccoon and pulls. The raccoon takes some hair with it.)
CM: Are you ok?
Kabby: (eyes have begun to water, and her mouth has been clenched shut. She hoarsely whispers--) Yea
Me: Ok, people on with the scene! (Kabby gives me a death glare)
Deleted scene: Pavan is drunk
While drunk, Pavan began doing a very strange impression of me ice-skating. I was talking to Mosho at the time, and then we heard a crash that sounded like glass breaking. We looked up, and Pavan was lying there on top of the China Cabinet, everything in it broken. The whole room went into laughter, except me.
"Come on, Mosho. Let's get out of here." I grab her arm and pull her towards the stairs where we go up into my room.
Chapter 2---
Shot 1- Kabira is trying to tan on the boat
Me: (talking to the camera) Kabby has been sitting here on the boat for some time now; we think she's asleep.
Kabby: (when CM gets near her, she wakes up with start and tries to move) OWWWW! Sunburn major! Why do I keep getting hurt!
Me: You are the leading role.
Kabby: I know that, but you didn't say anything about possibly getting hurt!
Me: (shrugs) Sorry.
(Kabby gives another death glare)
Shot 2- Pavan vs. Kabby
(Kabby singing to the radio while Pavan dunks her.)
Kabby: Stop! Sto-
(Pavan lets go of Kabby and tries to kneel over in the water while Kabby comes to the surface and swims away and gets back onto the boat.)
Me: Pavan! What's wrong?
Pavan: She kicked me in the gut!
Me: Kabira! You weren't supposed to kick him!
Kabby: I wasn't?
Me: No! You were supposing to keep getting dunked and then swim away!
Kabby: (blushes) Sorry Pavan!
Pavan: Imma gonna get you! (Hops out of water and Kabby runs)
Me: Common guys! We gotta shoot this! (The two still play chase) ARGH!
Chapter 3---
Shot 1- Kabira tells Cadee not to be afraid
Take 1:
Kabby: This is no time to be frightened, you have to be- ACHOO!
Me: CUT!
Kabby: sorry!
Take 2:
Kabby: You cannot live life without being afraid, but you need to fry not to be now. (Cadee cracks up)
Me: Kabby!
Kabby: What'd I do? (Crew cracks up) It's her fault she laughed!
Shot 2- Jumps into lake
Kabby Narrates: Just as we jump in, lightning strikes the front of the boat. I jump into the waves. (Jumps onto camera)
Me: Where'd that camera go? (Looks into the water) Cut, Cut!
Kabby: I think I landed on it. (Looks into the water as well) Yep. There it goes!
Me: (sighs) Can we get some diving people in there? (Mutters the next sentence) Thankfully, the practice lake's only 10 feet deep. (Puts folded hands on head)
Shot 3- The boat explodes
Take 1--
Kabby Narates: Then I realized it: I was in mortal danger. There had been gasoline on the boat to power it. Gas and fire do not mix, so I began to swim frantically trying to get away, dragging my driftwood with me. When I was a safe distance away, it exploded, fiery wood shooting around me like missiles during the Cold War.
Kabby (in water): Why isn't it exploding? (Swims over to it and pokes it with driftwood)
Me: Cut! Kabby, don't do that! Ka- (Kabby climbs into boat)
Kabby: Guys? There isn't any gas in the fuel tank!
Me: Can we get some fuel in there?
Take 2-
Kabby Narrates: Then I realized it: I was in mortal danger. There had been gasoline on the boat to power it. Gas and fire do not mix, so I began to swim frantically trying to get away, dragging my driftwood with me. When I was a safe distance away, it exploded, fiery wood shooting around me like missiles during the Cold War.
Me: CUTTTT!
Kabby: What now?
Me: Cue Rain! And…Action!
Chapter 4---
Shot 1- Part where soldier alerts helmsman on something in ocean
Take 1-
Soldier 1: Person…dead…ahead…about to…run…into it…one mile…'head…turn 10 degrees…left…
Narrator: And he almost collapsed, but another soldier rushed forward and caught him.
Kabby: Hey, Iroh, you got any more of this totally awesome tea?
Me: (groans)
Kabby: Oh, I'm sorry. Are we filming?
Me: Cut! (Everyone in room laughs except me) Kabby! You're supposed to be in the middle of the ocean unconscious right now! Ok people, let's try this again.
Take 2-
Soldier 1: Person…dead…ahead…about to…run…into it…one mile…'head…turn 10 degrees…left…
Narrator: And he almost collapsed, but another soldier rushed forward and caught him.
Pavan: Guys, quick! One of your rhino's is chewing on Cadee's hair! (Everyone except helmsman and soldier holding collapsed soldier rushes out)
Me: Wait! No…stop! Ok, everyone just ignore me since I'm the director! Guys, could you get into position?
Soldier holding collapsed soldier: Hey, Ming! Did you hear the joke…
Me: (rips up paper)
Take 3-
Soldier 1: Person…dead…ahead…about to…run…into it…one mile…'head…turn 10 degrees…left…
Narrator: And he almost collapsed, but another soldier rushed forward and caught him. The Captain got the message though, and began to turn the ship hurriedly, while the prince and uncle raced to the deck.
(Zuko trips over the table leg from the table with the map that he was leaning over. Iroh stops in his tracks and doubles over laughing)
Zuko: Sorry! (Bursts out laughing, and so does Iroh)
Me: (bursts out laughing)
Kabby: (from sidelines) Why don't you ever laugh at my stunts?
Me: Because he always acts military!
Kabby: Makes sense.
Zuko: (rolling on the ground laughing)
(All of the crew begins to laugh)
Me: Ok guys, it's not that funny!
Shot 2- Kabira vs. the ship
Kabira Narrating: Then my eyes adjusted to being able to see again, and I saw this gigantic metal ship coming straight for me! But I didn't scream, which was strange, especially for me, but I just floated there, silently staring.
(The boat stops dead in front of her. 1 foot of space between the two.)
Me: Kabira! You're not supposed to freeze the water yet! Oops, my big mouth! (Slams clipboard on head)
Chapter 5-
Shot 1- Kabira realizes where she is
Doctor: Ok, lets get you to the ward.
Narrator: The doctor said as he stood up.
Kabira Narrates: He and Uncle Iroh helped me get up, although that was very hard, since I hadn't used my muscles in almost an hour, and from my very hard sailing trip. I finally stood, but as soon as I did-
(Kabira stands up fully and runs over to Zuko, leaving the other people staring after her. Kisses Zuko on the lips then walks back slowly to her original position, and puts her finger in her mouth)
Kabby: Sorry, I just had to do that (goes back to sitting position). Let's do this again! (Winks at Zuko and motions with her hand and mouths, "Call me")
(Every one stares at her)
Me: (still staring) Ok, people…lets do this…again.
Chapter 6--
Shot 1- Iroh notices a change in Kabby during Fire Bending lesson
Take 1:
Iroh: Are you feeling all right? (looks at Kabby)
Kabby: What…? Oh, I'm fine- (bursts out laughing)
Me: Ok, people, lets try this again!
Take 2:
CM: Marker.
Iroh: Are you feeling all right? (Looks at Kabby)
Kabby: What…? Oh, I'm fine, I probably just need to rest…Thank you for teaching me.
Kabby Narrates: I got to my feet slowly, my muscles stretching almost painfully as they re-adapted to movement again, and walked away slowly and sadly.
(Fish jumps onto the deck. Everyone turns to look, and CM runs in front of camera to retrieve it.)
Me: No more jumping fish, please! (Begs)
Chapter 7--
Shot 1- swimming
Take 1:
Kabby Narrates: …I climbed the 30-foot side of the boat in just a matter of minutes this time.
Kabby: You take the fun out of everything. (Shakes head and sprays Zuko with it)
Kabby: Sorry! I just had to do that…sorry.
Zuko: (growls)
Take 2:
Kabby Narrates: …I climbed the 30-foot side of the boat in just a matter of minutes this time.
(Kabby slips and falls and lands back into the ocean. Zuko cracks up.)
Kabby: Hey, o-dragon?
Me: Yeah?
Kabby: (Treads water. Zuko and I lean over the side of the railing) This wall is like really slippery. Can we put indentures in it for my feet? I mean, it's metal, and I'm wet. Not a very good combo.
Me: I'll see what I can do.
Kabby: Thanks.
Me: Sure, no problem.
Take 3:
Kabby Narrates: …I climbed the 30-foot side of the boat in just a matter of minutes this time.
Kabby: You take the fun out of everything.
Kabby Narrates: I stuck my tongue out at him, being me, a total difference than that I was only an hour ago. And with that I walked below deck-
(Kabby slips and falls on metal deck)
Kabby: My bad. (Every one cracks up. Zuko offers her his hand to her and Kabby pulls him down with her.)
Shot 2- streaming the water
Kabby Narrating: I tried streaming the water, because you can't really push-and-pull the water while it's in a teacup, can you?
(The water splashes in Kabby's face, and everyone cracks up laughing)
Chapter 8--
There were no bloopers or deleted scenes for this chapter
Chapter 9--
Shot 1- going over the music/practicing the scene
Kabby: So I have to sing this?
Me: Yes. Can you?
Kabby: I'll try.
(5 minutes later)
Kabby: Well I won't back down, No I won't back down, You can stand me up at the gates of hell, But I won't back down.
(Mike squeaks)
Kabby: (cover's ears, and backs away from the mike.) AHHHH!
Me: Hey, can we get that fixed?
Deleted Scene- Iroh appears on deck after Music Night
Kabby Narrates: I looked out at the ocean at nothing in particular, the stars shining brightly up ahead of the boat, and me when I heard a drunken voice behind me. I got scared again and whipped around with such momentum that my ponytail swung in my face, then I relaxed as I saw that it was only Iroh. I clutched a stitch in my chest.
Iroh: (Singing) No…you…can stand me up…hic…but…no, won't …back…hic…down!
Kabby: Iroh, you scared me!
Chapter 10---
There are no bloopers or deleted scenes for this chapter.
I hope you enjoyed this chapter, and I'm really sorry it took so long to get out here! I hope you all didn't give up on me.And anyone who wants to be invited to my party, review for this chapter! Thanks for reading!
And, here's a new thing as well: a Poll! Ideas just keep popping into my head...
Who do you like better? ---
Aang
Sokka
Zuko