The Dream: Luci's Destiny: Chapter Eleven

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This chapter is very confusing. Basically they're all fighting each other. There are a few misunderstandings, but they are all exhausted at the very end. That is Mr. Fat guy's plan. "To wear them all out." So he can to plan 1B...

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Chapter Eleven: A Messy Fight

They were fighting. Friends all were fighting each other. How did this happen? It was all because of this evil, I mean very evil fat man with two bumps on his head.

Hiei and Yusuke were fighting so fast that not many could see their movement. Everyone else was pretty much watching. Luci was shocked. She couldn't understand how they could move so quickly. Her mouth hung open watching the two of them fight. They were simply punching each other very quickly. Nothing more.

They suddenly both stopped. Yusuke grinned. "Seems that you haven't weakened any since we last fought." Hiei said nothing and drew out his katana. He swatted at Yusuke with the sword and Yusuke dodged. Luci saw it all as a blur.

Suddenly Yusuke shot out a spirit gun. Hiei formed an energy barrier. They both stopped at once.

"Hn, you've gotten a good bit stronger," Hiei said.

"I know." Yusuke began to power up and Hiei did the same.

"They'll blow the place up!" Kuwabara said.

Luci watched in amazement. What's happening? Since when could Yusuke do all of this?

"We can't stop two angry powerful men," Kurama said. "It seems they are really going to fight for real this time. It's not their pride that keeps them fighting, they each have their own morals."

"You guys," Luci said to Kurama and Kuwabara. "Isn't this a three on two fight? Why are we all standing here watching them fight?"

"It would be best to leave them alone," Kurama replied.

"Ugh! I hate guys; they always have to stick to their codes! Can't do this, can't do that!"

-Meanwhile in the Computer Room-

A man said. "Octavos, it's time."

"Tension, 30%, 50%..." Another man said.

"Elemental Spirit Energy altering."

-Back in Arena-

"It seems like it's time to fight for real." He removed his bandana, revealing an eye. He then removed the bandages from his right arm.

"Eek!" Luci shuddered. "A third eye! That's pretty freaky." What am I doing? I'm supposed to show everyone that I'm not just some spectator girl! Yusuke, I'll show you!!

Hiei began to power up even more. "HAAAAAA...." Energy was at the tips of his fingers. His right arm was black. "Dragon..."

Kurama was the only one who saw it happen. She was gone. I sense another presence.

Luci popped up behind Yusuke and grabbed his arms into a strong lock. She was mad. "...of the Darkness..."

"What are you doing!" Yusuke demanded.

"Holding onto you," Luci replied.

"Fl—Kurama what are you doing!" Kurama had popped up before Hiei.

"I'm stopping you."

"Don't interfere—"

Kurama turned into Youko form and brought out a whip. Hiei drew out his katana and they began to spar.

"You're always thinking I'm some petty, sissy, whatever! I'm not!" Luci shouted with anger. She started punching Yusuke rapidly. Yusuke blocked the punches easily, but he knew there was something wrong with her.

She's not that fast. What's happening? She's probably twice as fast as usual, but still couldn't compare to any of us. I'd say she could be a C level fighter as of now.

Yusuke suddenly slipped on something and fell down, allowing Luci to land a hard punch straight onto his nose.

Yusuke started looking abnormal. Markings appeared on his skin. He was turning into his demon form, and he couldn't control it.

Luci was confused. "What's happenin—" Kurama and Hiei both stopped. Kuwabara ran up and swooped Luci in his arms.

"Uh, you'll thank me later, but it's not safe bei—" WHACK! Luci had smacked him.

"Don't try to tell me what to do! Now what's happening?" It was too late. A hand enclosed on her face and slammed her into the wall. Luci was too weak to move. "Yu—suke?" she said. The demon was not done. He started shooting energy blasts at her.

Kurama, Hiei, and Kuwabara all ran to save her. All three of them began to fight Yusuke.

"Urameshi!" Kuwabara pleaded. "Don't do this!"

"Yusuke, snap out of it!"

Everyone stopped. A very beat up Luci stood up. "I'm sorry; I guess I have caused you...much trouble. Please stop... I—uh...ugh..." She toppled down. Yusuke suddenly realized what was happening.

He landed on the ground and sat down, extremely tired. He saw what he had done to his sister. Kuwabara did not know what was going on.

"Urameshi! Look what you did!! You're going to pay." He ran up to Yusuke and began to punch him. Yusuke allowed himself to be beat up by Kuwabara.

Hiei and Kurama were both exhausted. They fell onto the ground with no energy.

Suddenly the screen dropped down again. The fat man appeared. "Hiei, it seems your team has been defeated. I will give you one last chance to save your sister."

"What?" Kuwabara said. "This guy has a sister?" Well, I guess it does explain why he'd do all of this stuff...I think...

What does the man plan to do? Will Hiei save Yukina? Will Luci survive?


I'm sorry this was a very short chapter... the story part isn't even 1000 words.... it's more like 800... but oh well. Was this chapter confusing? Please review and tell me! I'm sorry, this chapter is crap, or at least I think it is. I hope the next one will be better.

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