Sailor Chinese Zodiacs The bronze Millenium

Chapter One

Queen Shuang gazed out at the destroyed Kingdom of the North Star, then to her arms In which The Prince's Lifless Body was Lying Then Down at her Fallens Sailors, Her Daughters,Tears began to form in her eyes as she ran out of the palace and infront of the 12 girls.
"I shall stand for no more of this!" Queen Shuang yelled at the evil red eyed shadows and a bronze crystal appeared in her hands.
"Mommy no!" Shouted a small girl with pink hair.
"There must be another way!" said another girl with longish bolde hair.
"I'm Sorry Shu Fang, Fen all off you, my daughters I will miss you dearly, Dear Gairdian cats Please Protect my Daughters." Queen Shaung Said with Saddness "Of Coruse your majesty" A Black Cat Said Bowing her head "But what will happen to you?" Asked A White cat also bowing her head.
" That I fear you alreay know." Said THe Queen Sternly. " Bronze crystal lead my daughters, Son and cats to the future Earth 21st Century."
A beam off Light ShotDown and serounded the sailors and cats And another one surrounded the Prince and Prepared totake them to the future "Mommy I'm scared don't leave us." said a Small Girl With Black hair.
"Hui ying don't be scared I'll always be with you, goodbye my Darlings." The Queen Shouted as she watched her daughters, son and cats Go forever with tears streaming down her face. " Now time to put an end to this, goodbye Kingdom, goodbye Family." She whispered as a Beam Hit the ground destorying everything in its path, then as suddenly as it came it was one, every thing had gone except for the Queen Who was Standing with her eyes clossed but she was Slowly dissappearing but before she had completly gone she whispered these word:
" Be Safe and strong, Sav the the world and OneDay Return to the North Star Where we will Meet again." the she was gone.

A.N so what do you think? I know it's a bit lame. But this is afterall my first Fanfiction.