Mrs Captain Sparrow- Thank you so much! I enjoy those scenes also, there fun to write.
Crimson Rayne- Im glad you like it! I feel so special that you gave my story a chance. Im very pleased that you love potc a lot more. Who knows what's in store for those two.
Disclaimer: Since I didn't do it before hand I'm doing it now. I coughs do not own anything related to potc, even though I desperately want to own a certain Pirate Captain- oh well my imagination will have to do…
Chapter 6
Jack could hear everybody's different story, "I 'erd she turned him down and Jack couldn't take no for an answer….." one shouted. "Then she tied him up took everything from him……" another said. "No that's not how it went, she seduced him and left him to die for….." someone proclaimed.
He couldn't let his crew see him so weak, he is their Captain; he should be feared not laughed at. He griped onto the guy nearest to him by the neck and swung him to the edge of the ship being dangled on the open water. All the crew stopped talking and was in complete silence as to what Jack would do to Kin. "If any of you say another word, I will personally send you to Davy Jones locker, savvy?" screamed Jack with hatred in his eyes. "Aye" muffled the crew all at different times, which sounded like an echo which wouldn't stop. Jack chucked Kin across the deck and ended up hitting a barrel and knocking it over, which spilled water everywhere.
"Get back to work you mangy dogs." Jack says frustrated and headed towards his rightful place as Captain.
You reach for your door and opened it, finding it in a messy state and no Jack to be seen. You walk towards your bed and sit down. "Where the hell are my sheets?" you think about it for a moment then realize that Jack must have taken them to use as clothes. You laugh at the thought of him running around the streets with blankets covering him. "He had a cute but through…" you say to yourself thinking of his toned body and sigh. You wipe your mind free of Jack, and start to clean your room.
Knock Knock. "Can I come in?" "Just a minute" you say cheerfully. You quickly get dressed and hid Jacks clothes in one of your dressers. "Ok come in" you say while looking at your reflection in the mirror.
Derek walks in, and closes the door behind him. "You have work tonight, I got you in a gig. Of course Rose and Virgina will be with you but you will be the star. I had to pull a lot of strings to get it." He says seriously.
You let the news sink in and are in complete shock. "I'm the star?" you say to your self. "I'm the star?" you yell. "Yes you're the star!" he says moving his hands in the air. You jump up on him and he swings you around while you keep screaming. He looks you in the eyes and suddenly he tries to kiss you. You lean in and kiss him on the check, feeling awkward he places you back on the floor.
"I have some more good news." He explains. "There's more? What can be better then me being the star?" you ask totally excited. "You will be dancing at the Bloody Rose!" your eyes bulge at of your head and your mouth felt like it dropped to the floor. You stay like that blinking a couple of times first before he adds on. "It's the best bar in Tortuga, everybody will be there tonight to see you perform!" Derek said while helping you sit down on your bed. "I know this is a big step for you but I think you can do it, I know they will love you." he said encouragingly. "What am I going to wear?" not thinking about anything else. He laughs at your comment and says "We will go shopping." And takes you by the hand and leads you out of the house and into the streets.
He takes you into the most expensive store called the Rendezvous. You have no idea why they called it that but it was the best store. Derek tells you to stay and goes off to talk to the owner. He whispered some things in her ear she nodded and went off in the back. The store was not too big, it had two floors which you can see the top just by looking up. It is covered in a light wood and had mirrors every where. Also there are white boxes stacked on top of each other every where.
The woman comes back with six boxes in her hands, struggling to walk and put them down. She was at least over forty and had a belly, her hair was neatly tried back in a bun. Her clothes are very neat and clean, and wore a long black dress. You go over and help her, she thanks you and opens a box, revealing a beautiful white dress. It sparkled in the light and had pieces small of gems all over. It looked very seductive and was perfect for tonight.
"Why don't you try it on and see how it fits?" Derek asks smiling. Sandra hands over the dress to you and takes you up stairs for you to get changed.
"How does it look?" she asks trying to peek over. "Well I'm having some difficulties, would you mind…." "Of course not dear, their tricky little devils aren't they?" she says making you laugh. You open the door and turn around. She ties it up and tells you to turn around. "You look like an angel" she says an awe.
By the way I didn't mention it before but this was my first fan fic, it is complete and I'm currently trying to finish the sequel. So don't be too harsh it's not perfect. I will prob be updating about 5 chapters every other day or so. Anyways hope you enjoy the story. Thanx a lot!