"Kosetsu: Snowfall" Chapter 9
by imanut
I'm sorry that it's taking me so long to get these up, I honestly am! I've just gotten over being sick and I've been trying to catch up in schoolwork (which has been nuts!). But the way I see it, there's no excuse for me not getting this up sooner, so once again, sowwy. Anyway, thanks to my reviewers:
Lina the Outlawed Bomber- I'm glad you think so! Well, here's the rest and sorry for it being so short.
Kiki-sama- That's a good question. Who would win in a fight between Tohma and Yuki? I've gotta agree…they're both kinda nuts! Anyway, I'm glad that you liked my little mention of Shigure. He's one of my favorites too!
ichigo-chan- I'm sorry! I didn't mean to be…mean! Thanks for saying such a sweet thing tho. And it's ok if you spaz…I'd do the same thing in your case!
Felicity Dream- Ooh! A wresting ring! Neat idea! I like the idea of Shuichi going back and forth between them, it's cute. (Now that you've said that, I can picture it too!) Sorry that it took so long, here's chappy 9!
Makkura Arashi- Well, it's my fault Yuki's mislead and uh…evil. I don't like Mika anyway so…I'll just have her being evil!
Kaibafangirl- Awww thank you! I honestly don't know how I'm gonna make Yuki confront Tohma. Any suggestions? I've said this plenty of times, but I like saying it: Mika is evil and I don't like her either. I feel bad for Yuki, too! Here's more!
Ivin Artemis Draconis- heh heh heh…Yeah, that's why I like this pairing! Sorry that it took so long! And thank you!
Falcon Zanbandia of Nightmares- Yup, sister is evil! Obsessive Yuki can sometimes be scary… and I know they didn't sleep together, but Yuki doesn't know that. (And in this fic, Mika's hardheaded…or is she already?)
seven maxwell- THANK GOD FOR SHIGURE! Now I can live and write this fic! I'm sorry for it being short, but I'll try to write a longer chapter next time!
Kistune Thief- I'm sorry, but this chapter is just as short. I had it written when I received your review. But I'll definitely try to make the next chapter longer. I'm glad that you love my fic. That's made my day! Thanks a ton!
Chapter 9
For the first time since he got there, Shuichi looked around the room. There were two identical full beds with soft pillows and satin sheets. Red, velvet curtains donned the large windows and a French door that lead to a balcony, overshadowing the city. Off to the side, there was a desk and several comfy chairs littered around the room. 'This must have been expensive!' thought the pink-haired boy. He plopped into a chair by the desk and looked around again.
"Wow…" he whispered.
"Do you like it?" asked a voice as it re-entered the room.
"Ah! Don't do that!" shouted the cotton-candy haired vocalist. Realizing what his outburst must have sounded like, he immediately corrected himself, "er…I mean…please don't do that sir! The room's nice, no…beautiful."
Tohma smiled, "I'm glad you think so. When it's just us, you may call me by my name. You could say we're friends, right?"
"Ah, of course we are! Thank you for everything, Segu-er…I mean Tohma." The boy's amethyst eyes twinkled brightly, expressing his thanks.
"Anytime," was the keyboardist's simple reply. 'Friends…it's a start.' He smiled brightly as ever, emerald eyes twinkling. "May I call you by your first name, too?"
"Hm? Oh! Yeah, sure ya can!" Tohma was calm and smiling on he outside, but he was shooting off fireworks and doing strange and creepy dances on the inside
-elsewhere-
Outside, the air turned colder as Yuki's rage toward his brother-in-law grew greater. There was no doubt in his mind that Tohma had seduced the little twit. The keyboardist was, after all, a shark. And the beast fit him, too: with the cunning of a fox, the mercy of a demon, and the sting of a jellyfish!
Eiri Yuki walked into the kitchen, heading straight for the fridge. He needed a beer…badly. A nice cool beer would calm him down a tad and relax his nerves.
-8 seconds later -
Well, so much for that idea. Maybe a cigarette would do the trick. He lit the end of a Marlboro Light and held it to his lips.
Ah, he could feel the tobacco whisk away the sharpest pain in his skull. Now he could think clearer…now he could think of a possible revenge to get his idiot back.
To be continued…
Yuki's part was my friend's favorite part. She's the one who suggested Shigure. And I'm really glad that ya'll liked that suggestion!
Love,
:imanut:
