"Kosetsu: Snowfall" Chapter 11

by imanut

Wow! 100 reviews! I'm soo happy! To celebrate, I'm gonna post this short but sweet chapter! Thanks to all who reviewed and all who have read my story:

Mizthang22- If you feel like b-slapping Mika, be my guest! Thanks for reviewing

Berylia- I'm sorry that I made you feel like and idiot. I didn't mean to, but that's just how I do things. There are a lot of people like me who needs that so they don't go, "Woah, what the Hey just happened? Wasn't this dude doing that, or that freak doing this?" It's just an innocent precaution to warn a scenery change. And I'm sorry that my chapters are so short. I've already realized that, thank you, but once again, that's just how I do things. I'm glad to hear that you thought my fic was nice and would appreciate it if you would continue reading and reviewing!

Kaibafangirl77- Oooh I'm so glad! I don't know whether to make it a love triangle or not. I hope you didn't have to wait long for this chappy!

Kitty in the Box- ACK! No don't bite me, please! Here, use this cheap imitation of me! It's not really imanut, but an incredible simulation! I'm sorry that it's so short. I'll do my best to make the next chapter longer.

Lina the Outlawed Bomber- I'm glad that you're so happy and glad! And that you liked this chapter!

Falcon Zanbandia of Nightmares- Yay! It's awesome! Thanks thanks thanks!

Makkura Arashi- Thanks! Sorry that I confused you, but I'm glad it turned out all right!

White Topaz- I'm sorry. It wasn't intentional, I promise! Better, eh? I'm so happy you like reading this!

Ivan Artemis Draconis- I didn't mean for it to be short, it just kinda….happened. But continue I shall!

Kiki-sama- Alright, thanks for the suggestion! I'll definitely see what I can do!

clueless97- Exactly! Mika is the definition of evil! (Or so I believe) It really does sound like they have a nice relationship, doesn't it? Hm…intriguing. I figure Yuki is pretty much unpredictable with his "mask" so I can't help but wonder what he'll do, too!

bowwowlover- I'm so happy you think so! Thanks for telling me that Yuki's getting ooc. I really appreciate that! Should I tone down his violence? Opinions matter to me, so what do you think?

Amethyst Blossom- I'm glad that you love it! And I'm glad that you loved that part, because I had fun writing it! After all, a good angst story needs at least a little comic relief!


Chapter 11
Silence…the hotel room was filled with silence. The young, pink-haired singer had locked himself into the bathroom. He turned on the shower to give the effect that he was bathing, not wanting to be disturbed.

"Damn it…" he whispered. 'I was almost over that. I would have been able to go back to him! Why did I have to see him today?'

Shuichi collapsed to the floor, head bowed and sobbing like mad. His hands gently rubbed his upper arms where Yuki's grip had pained him.

Tohma walked into their room, the only sound greeting him was the sound of water running. He walked to the bathroom door, knocked and said, "Shuichi, just wanted to let you know that I'm back!"

"Okay," was the weak reply. Tohma could hear the slight pain coming from that usually cheerful voice, and it made him hurt.

'I wonder what happened today?' The keyboardist walked over to a chair and plopped down, in deep thought.

Today, it felt like someone had been watching him, watching his every move. And that thought alone was nerve wracking enough. Though, it mad him worry about Shuichi and if he was being stalked. Now that worried him. If the keyboardist was attacked, he knew that he could defend himself, but if the vocalist was ever attacked…?

His thoughts were interrupted by Shuichi coming out of the bathroom. The pink-haired singer looked sad, just like he did that night

The vocalist slowly walked toward Tohma and climbed up in the blonde's lap, he buried his pink head into the green clothed chest of the keyboardist . He sobbed quietly, grasping Tohma's jacket as though he would vanish.

Nittle Grasper's Tohma wrapped his arms around the boy, one hand rubbing circles on his back.

"What's wrong? Why are you crying, Shu?" The only answer he got was a sob. "Go ahead and cry if it will make you feel better. You can tell me what happened whenever you feel like it."

Fifteen minutes passed, Shuichi still on the blonde's lap, savoring the comfort given. His face was no longer buried, but facing towards the window instead. The pink little fuzz-ball had told what progressed in the alley earlier on. He could definitely sense that Tohma was angry.

The blonde keyboardist had one arm wrapped protectively around the vocalist's waist, the other stroking the pink hair comfortingly. He let out a sight, filled with frustration.

'Shuichi had almost been over that stupid ordeal. Had he not assaulted him in such a way…' Tohma couldn't finish the thought. The complete thought would have been '…had he not assaulted him in such away, Shuichi would have been able to go back to him,' but he knew that if he did, it would hurt worse than anything else on this Earth.

"It's okay, Shuichi. I'm here and I won't let anything happen to you. So don't you worry about him."


To be continued…
I'm sorry that this isn't as long as everybody wants it to be. I have yet to post any pictures yet, but don't worry, I'll say something when I do.

BY THE WAY:

If you want a long chapter, I'll take a couple of weeks or so to write one. If that's what ya'll want, a long chapter that is, then just tell me and I'll do it!

Love,

:imanut: