by imanut
Thank you soo much for your reviews! I had already written this out when ya'll sent me your ideas…sowwy…and sowwy for my taking so long.
Kistune Thief- I'm glad that you liked the last chapter! As for the odd predicament, I'll see what I can do. The idea of Tohma coming in contact with a hyper Shu sounds cute…Thanks for your review!
ichigo-chan- Hmm…a fight between Yuki and Tohma. I like the sound of that. I think I can work that in somewhere…
Amethyst Blossom- Since you say that Ch.12 is perfect, I won't replace it! As for Yuzuki's twin's suicide…they way I have it written out is that Yuzuki and Suzuki (her sis) are as different as night and day, yin and yang. Yuzuki is the stronger of the two, Suzuki the gentler. Because Suzu is so gentle, she was often picked on. One thing led to another and Suzuki wound up feeling in the way, weak, and worthless…it is sad, isn't it? No one should have to feel worthless. Anyway, thank you for reviewing.
Felicity Dream- I'll see what kind of confrontation I can come up with
dragonfly-affinity- ACK! Intriguing is my favorite word! n.n The next chapter is on its way, too. I hope I didn't make ya wait too long.
Sutzina Zion- Lunch sounds good right now…especially Bar-B-Que!
Kiki-sama- I'm glad that you like Yuzuki. I was worried that no one would! Um, if you don't mind me asking, how does she remind you of yourself? As for da e-mail, don't worry…I'm very patient! (Patience is a virtue as I always say)
bowwowlover- You're welcome. I'm working on da action, don't worry! And if Yuki accidentally gets really violent in the near future, I'm really sorry. My friends tell me that I've got a habit of losing control of my imagination. Just wanted to warn you for the future…thank you so much for your review.
Chapter 13
The lunch was wonderful. Yuzuki sat with the celebrities, telling stores that made them laugh. One, though not really funny, was the "honest" danger(s) of money…
"One of our customer's friends worked at the U.S. Mint. One bright and sunny day, his friend pulled the wrong lever 3 tons of dimes fell on the poor man."
Shuichi gasped suddenly drawing Tomo's, Yuzuki's oldest brother's, attention, "You're not really gonna believe my crazy sister's nutty story, are ya?"
"It-it could happen, right?" stuttered the vocalist.
"You better believe it! Pennies, dimes, not too sure which one," she replied. Tohma smiled and Tomo just covered his eyes and laughed, shaking his head. Only those who knew her could understand the sixteen-year-old.
-Later-
The pink-haired vocalist stood outside by the car, waiting for Tohma to pay and come on out. Lately, Shuichi was feeling something deep down in his chest. 'What's this feeling in my heart? Why does it race when Tohma holds me to him or smiles so sweetly?'
He looked toward the sky. The clouds were as dark as they had been for the past several days. 'I'd really like for it to snow. That way we could get outta work and I could spend time with Tohma! Hmm…I still need to find out what I should do for him..'
He was then brought out of his thoughts when the café's door opened.
"Ready to go back?" asked Tohma.
"Yeah! Hey, thanks for lunch!" smiled the pink-haired fluff.
"You're welcome."
Elsewhere-
Hank Kennett sat in his office at his desk, searching through files on his computer of the person in his "care." He was a rather large man with unkempt brown hair and a five o'clock shadow, and piercing black eyes that would make a person swear they were being seen through.
"Now where is it, dammit?" Clicking on one file after another was seriously ticking him off, and making him tired.
He decided to try a different maneuver and hacked into police files, searching under "S."
"Bingo. Gotcha, snott-face," he smirked. "Now to put my plan into action. Mika-chan'll be sooo happy!"
To be continued…
Well, I'm sorry that it's so short…I just couldn't think of what to do! So…sorry TT.TT
Love,
:imanut: