by imanut
I'm so sorry for the way I sounded in my last update. It was just that I was severely depressed and I was very upset with the way the chapter went. I thank all my reviewers and those who read my story! By the way, can you believe that I, the authoress and oh so unworthy one, can no longer respond to reviews? I'm so sad!
Anyway, I'm out of my depression and I hope you like this new chapter!
One with the 'fic!
Chapter18
Hank cursed as his car died in front of some wooden building.
"Dammit!" he shouted. He was supposed to meet with Mika at the docks in twenty minutes! He jumped out of the car and kicked the chrome bumper. Three minutes later, he realized how stupid a mistake that was and began to jump up and down, holding his foot, and yelping in serious pain. (AN: Whoa…he's got delayed reaction…like me!…sorry 'bout that.)
-Shu-
The pink-haired boy in the backseat had been wakened by an awful sound. After his eyes began to focus properly and his mind wasn't as hazy, he understood what was going on and that the dreadful noise he was hearing was actually his unknown captor. Shuichi carefully looked out the window and recognized the wooden building.
-Hank-
He glared at the car viciously.
"Damn you, traitor! Of all the times to die on me!" cried Hank. Out of the corner of his eye, he spotted a motorcycle. 'Imported I bet,' he thought enviously.
Suddenly, an idea sprang to his little bitsy mind. He stalked over to the envied motorcycle, looking it up and down. 'Hmm…I wonder.' He leaned over and messed with this and played with that. In no time, he had hot-wired said motorcycle and had it running. He ran over to the car and jerked open the back car door. Hank saw Shuichi lying there, eyes closed though he was unaware that Shu-kun was only playing opossum.
He picked him up and quickly got on the bike, praying that neither of them would fall off.
-Inside the Building-
As soon as the sound of a running motorcycle reached her ears, Yuzuki ran to the window. 'Oh Hell! Not my bike!'
She ran out of the café door screaming in pure, unadulterated fury.
"You got a death wish or somethin,' boy? GET OFF MY BIKE!"
She then noticed who was in the bastard's arms. The teenager began to see read.
Yuzuki ran after the speeding motorcycle, her screaming switching back and forth between Italian and Japanese quickly. When she saw that she'd never be able to catch them on foot, she ran hurriedly back into the café and straight to the phone. She dialed the number of a number she knew by heart…
-Tohma-
Tohma was deep in thought, searching for that cursed car that had taken Shuichi away from him. He was startled from his thoughts when his cell phone rang that annoying tune Ryu had put there several weeks earlier. (AN: it's the song from Super Mario Bros.1 Underwater Theme! YAAAY! Sorry again.)
"Hello?"
"Tohma! Shu-kun's been kidnapped!" cried a feminine voice on the other line.
"I know. I'm searching for him as we speak," replied the blonde.
"He stole my bike! My custom Harley! He somehow drove off with Shu-kun and left his damned car right in front of the café!" cried Yuzuki angrily.
"Did you see which direction they went?" asked the keyboardist.
"Yeah. Toward the docks, I think," she answered.
Tohma suddenly filled with dread.
To be continued…
I'm so sorry it was short. I was just inspired to write again by a recent TohmaxShu fic! And by re-reading all my wonderful reviews! Those always cheer me up!
Oh, and about Yuzuki. I know there are several people who really hate original characters. I honestly don't always like them myself. I wasn't planning on giving her much of a roll. So if you didn't like that YukixYuzuki thing I threw in there, forgive me. I just felt bad for Yuki because he seemed rather lonely.
And also, if I annoyed anyone with the AN's, I'm sorry about that too!
Love,
:imanut: