Hello, Hiei666 here with a new chapter. Now I know some of you have reviewed my work and I am very happy you did. I am sorry I did not reply, that is something new to me and I really hope you can forgive me. (bows down and beggs for forgiveness) Now I will answer your reveiws. Many people reviewed so...this may take a while.
(maze2976: i really like the story so far. one suggestion though. might want to proofread to make the selection a little bit easier and more enjoyable.)
Thank you maze2976, I fhope you continue to read. I would put more only I know you and can simply tell you in person.
(Flamegirl37c: It was good. Keep up the good work. Oh, if you remeber me, I fixed my story. You were right. I was a little hard to read. LOL)
Thank you very much Flamegirl37c! You have been very helpfull with all my chapters and I hope you continue to give reviews. You are one of the only ones who did not critisize my spelling...sniff, thank you. There were many more people who did not critisize my spelling, but you will know by the review.
(shadow miko: ok i think this fic is coming along quite nicely lol update asap plz hiei/kags 4 eva)
Well, that wasn't a long one, but I must still say, thank you soooo much for this! (sniff) And I compleatly agree with you, hiei/kags 4 eva!
(Red Kitsune Flames: All good inu crossover stories seem to have good titles too. Yours is one of them.)
Why thank you very much! I had to switch from title to title in order to find the right one, and I guss I did!
(shadow miko: oh i cant wait for the next chPPYS LOL UPDAET ASAP PLZ hiei/kags 4 eva lol)
(stunned) well...alright gotcha.
(Ryukotsusei: Nice updates, a few spelling errors but nothing to get in a tizzy over. I like how Hiei and Kagome are coming together though if the others know what's good for them they'd back off on the teasing. I don't see Hiei tolerating them for long if they keep it up lol Good chapters, update soon please.)
Wow, that's one heck of a pen name. I hope I spelled it right...anyway thank you for the review. You are the only person I put on here who had a coment my spelling, but that is only because the rest of the review I thought was really good. And you were just really nice!
Whew, alright, that should just about do it. If I did not reply to your review, it is either because all you did was tell me that my spelling sucked, I could mentionpennames but I won't, or I did reply to one already and have limited time on the computer, or you are one of my friends who I alreadyknow and I can just say thank you in person or by instant messaging.
CH. 13
Kagome and Hiei were both silent as they walked toward a familiar sent of corpses and death. Apparently, Yomi had agreed to help look for the person after Kagome. That was great and all, but not only did none of them like Yomi, he had asked for something in return. Yomi was not the type to want false power; he had no intention of asking for the jewel. Kurama already knew what he wanted, so he could safely assume he meant no harm.
When they got there, Yusuke took a deep breath and everyone except Kagome waited for what Yusuke did every time they came here.
"YOMI, YOU GREAT BIG TURD! GET READY YOU BLIND FREAKY OLD FART WE'RE COMEN' TO KICK YOUR ASS!" Yusuke shouted before taking off towards the castle. Kagome was dumbfounded. Hiei had his hands over his ears and had a painful expression. "Must he do that every time we come to this damn place?" Hiei growled. Kagome started giggling and Kurama looked a little embarrassed. "Well at least he has something else to say every time we come here." He comforted, though it was ignored.
They all ran after Yusuke hoping he hadn't done anything stupid like every other time. When they did get there, they weren't surprised to see Yomi holding Yusuke by the ear. "You really should get a leash for this one Kurama, holding him like this is degrading for both of us." Yomi said a slight smile on his face.
Kagome looked at the miserable Yusuke and started giggling. Yomi looked at them, and then turned his head towards them with a surprised look. "It seems you have graced my presence with a female, a human no doubt." He said walking up to her still smiling but let go of Yusuke. "Is this the girl you said needed help Kurama?" He asked touching her face to assume what she looked like. Kagome squeaked as Yomi moved his hand across her face. But then he stopped and turned towards Hiei. "What's wrong Hiei, you seem upset about something, I can tell by the way your heart is pounding and your fists are clenched." Yomi said.
Hiei quickly relaxed his hands and Yusuke laughed. "Aww, Hiei just wants attention right lover-boy?" Yusuke said making kiss faces. Hiei was highly uncomfortable. "Talk to me like that again your sick child, and I make sure you never know the meaning of love or even what it feels like to be happy for a good long time." Hiei spat. Yusuke laughed even harder. "Oh sure, and Kagome will be right there holding your hand the whole time." Yusuke cooed. Hiei's eyes turned red. Shippo, who had been there the whole time, looked confused.
"Kagome, what's he talking about?" Shippo asked as Hiei looked even angrier at Yusuke who had now started acting out the little show they put on last night, Kuwabara helping out which made it all the more disturbing. Hiei started growling and that scared them a little. "THAT'S IT!" Hiei yelled as he flung across the room tackling Yusuke as Kuwabara ran for his life. Hiei grabbed his head and put him in a head-lock. Yusuke licked his finger and stuck it in Hiei's ear which made him shiver and quickly let go of Yusuke. "GROSS, WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?" Hiei demanded as he held his ear like it had been poisoned. No one, not even Yomi could contain their laughter. Kagome giggled for a bit as well. Hiei blushed and everyone laughed harder.
After a few minutes of tormenting poor Hiei, Kurama got back to the important matters. Yomi agreed to help as long as he could have the liberty of fighting a warrior truly worthy of his time, which sounded to Yusuke like a load of BS. Kagome knew just who to ask, and since she had spoken with him on several occasions where he wasn't trying to kill her, she thought she had a good chance at this. Yomi had been very happy to know that someone with enough power and strength to at least amuse him was truly coming at last.
Now Yusuke and Kuwabara had been assigned to an easy mission alone while Kurama went to school. Hiei then continued his duties as her guard. They went to her house and Shippo went to bed. It wasn't that it was late, but he just got so tiered at demon world that he almost passed out. Kagome sat on the coach a little board as Hiei sat uncomfortably in a corner. He would have sat next to her, but he just could not contain the thought of her…next to him. He didn't know what was happening, but if it was scaring him, it would really scare her. Kagome looked over at Hiei only to have him avert his eyes. She sighed.
All of a sudden, the front door opened and Sango and Miroku walked in. Sango walked into the living room with a sad expression. "Kagome, we were able to find out where your family is." She said. Hiei looked up. Kagome nodded her head and looked at Sango. Miroku looked down. Sango continued. "His name is Sesuren…he's the one doing this to you; the one who kidnapped them. Hiei got up and walked over to Kagome.
"So all we have to do is find this moron and get her family back, then kill him right, that simple?" Hiei asked. Sango looked even more uncomfortable. "Well Hiei, that's not all we found out." She said holding the hem of her shirt. Hiei looked at her funny. Sango looked at him seriously. "As it turns out Hiei, Sesuren is kind of…" She said tailing off. Hiei looked at her again even more confused. Sango looked at him again. "He's your father."
Well, my wrist is officially not working...but it's worth it to make you all happy! I just hope I am making you all happy with the chapters...(sigh) R&R!
