Yay, review response corner, for my first (kind of) negative review (I like these types of reviews better if they're constructive, so feel free to go nuts)

Anyway, about the story line…I believe that Delita does hate Ramza at the end of Chapter one, but as the game progresses I believe that this hatred dimmed. He seems to have stopped blaming Ramza personally for Teta's death. As the game progresses, Delita opposes everything that Ramza fought to uphold, but this comes at a time when Ramza is also forced to question the society that he lived in. I think Delita is trying to change the world in a big way. He seems self-serving, and I'm sure that this played a role in his actions too, but for the most part, his overarching goal seems to be a major social reform. He disagrees with Ramza often, uses Ramza all the time, and at times is even opponents with Ramza, but I think that he still respects Ramza's own way of trying to fix things, though he disagrees with them, and perhaps a small part of him still thinks that things could be solved within the system. Ramza's naivety seems to have a way of drawing people in . I think the script supports my theory…(http/db. I do refer to the script often

Also, if you had read the next few chapters you'd have seen that there are a lot of politics at work here. Delita's going to be controlled by politics if he wants to keep his power. I think it's ironic that he's going to be forced to play the game that he fought so hard to destroy, but he's already playing in the (video) game…once he's king it'll be all the more necessary.

Anyways, short chapter, but I like this better than most of the previous ones.


Mustadio wiped the sweat off his brow…or at least…he tried. All he really succeeded in doing was smearing more grease on it. He had been truly lucky to return to Goug, he decided. The vast number of eccentric engineers there meant that one more could easily escape notice, and Mustadio truly loved his work.

"There you go!" he said brightly, "all done."

Worker 8 turned around and gazed at him solemnly.

"Acknowledged" he…she?…responded.

Mustadio laughed, a carefree boyish laugh that many found attractive, and poked Worker 8 in the side, earning himself a sore finger.

"Well, you were the one that was whining that your exhaust ducts were getting clogged!" he accused.

"Negative, I merely advised that a repair would be advisable for me to continue working at peak efficiency"

Mustadio sighed, it had been interesting living with this semi-sentient hunk of metal, but sometimes it could be tiring. Not only was he not the best company in the world, but Mustadio had to be careful to keep him hidden. Worker 8 was the only think in his workshop that could give away his former life. Mustadio shook his head, not former life…real life. It was impossible for him to think of his life here in Goug as real now that he knew everything…

"Come-on!" he said lightly, "let's go!"

Worker 8 looked at him confusedly, the only real emotion that ever showed on his mechanical face (though he insisted that it was just Mustadio's imagination).

"Go?.." he asked monotonously.

"Yep!" Mustadio answered, "I think we should visit Ramza!"

Worker 8 would have sighed if he had lungs. What a typically Mustadio type decision, spur of the moment, not thinking things through. Living with humans could truly be tiring…