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Chapter 18: Ray Returns
Next morning at the airport where passengers were getting off their flights and making their way in, a boy with long black hair tied back with golden eyes and a red bandana with the yin-yang sign on it and was wearing a his G-Rev outfit and he was accompanied by a girl with pink hair tied in a ribbon, golden eyes and was wearing her pink Chinese outfit.
"I'm glad to be here in Japan again, aren't you Ray?" Mariah asked
"Yeah, once I face Tyson and the others at the Tournament soon!" Ray replied
Ray was so excited about the world tournament that was coming in a month he couldn't wait for it to happen as well as facing the other Bladebreakers.
"Ray! The cab's here now, let's go!" Mariah called
"Ok Mariah!" He shouted
So Ray and Mariah with their arms around each other went off to the taxi, as they got in it drove off to the Dojo where he practiced along with the rest of the Bladebreakers but during the ride Mariah laid her head on Ray's chest for a while until they got there.
"Your competition has arrived Tyson!" He thought
Back at the Dojo there was more practice going on between Kai, Max and Daichi while Tripp and Deja were practicing other at another dish.
"DRANZER, FLAME GIGS TURBO!" Kai shouted
"DRACIEL, GRAVITY CONTROL!" Max screamed
"STRATA DRAGOON, GREAT CUTTER!" Daichi commanded
Dranzer GT, Draciel G and Strata Dragoon G were bashing and circling into each other at the same time and were not holding back since there was a lot of power coming from their Beyblades.
"DRILLANZER, GOLD BREAK BARRIER, NOW!" Tripp shouted
"ANAYA DRAFOXIS, FIRE SWORD ATTACK!" Deja screamed
Drillanzer V2 and Anaya Drafoxis V were grinding into each other and there was heat and a smell coming from the friction of the Beyblades but then all 5 of the blades collided and shot out of the dish and into their owner's hands.
"Great work older bro, you'll be a constant treat at the tournament now!" Deja commented
"You too D, once I come across some fresh face they'll be in for some of my mad skills!" Tripp boasted
"Not if I'll get there first!" Daichi interfered
Kai, Deja and Max sweat dropped as they watched the scuffle between Tripp and Daichi but when Kenny got there he was looking at the stats on everyone's Beyblades and noticed that Tripp's and Deja's went up by an inch.
"Well Tripp's improving but is it enough for what lies ahead?"
"This is just like when Daichi was arguing with Tyson all the time but this isn't so bad?" Max commented as he sweat dropped
"What's not so bad?" Kenny asked
"This!" Kai replied with his eyes closed and his arms folded as usual
Daichi and Tripp were about to rip each others heads off beat the life out of each other like Tyson and Daichi would.
"Yeah not almost as bad as that smell coming from the friction my Beyblade" Deja stated as she looked at her V blade as well as sniffed it
"Well you shouldn't light a match or else this place will explode!" A familiar voice teased
Everyone wondered who it was as they turned their heads around to the entrance to find Ray who was with Mariah and not the rest of White Tiger X.
"Ray's back!" They all shouted cheerfully except Kai who just grinded
"That's right I'm back and ready to practice!" He said as he showed them his Beyblade
"And so am I!" Mariah stated as she did the same thing
"Check it out, Ray fixed his Driger Gatling and Mariah's got a new Galux, looks like things are picking up!" Kenny said
Everyone was happy to see Ray and Mariah again, but a few blocks away a certain girl who appeared last night was on her way to the Dojo.
"Another Blader has arrived! And he has the White Tiger of Gold! That might make an interesting challenge for you Jaygo" She smirked as she held her Beyblade tight
To be continued!
That's Chapter 18 done!
Well now that Ray's back and along with Mariah things are going to get interesting and I hope you liked this Chapter.
Please review and sorry if its lame.
Bye!