I am now attempting Jake! I tried him once, but the poem was horrible, I deleted it and started Cassie.
Why me?
I was just a normal kid,
Before the night.
Now I'm a leader,
Of World War III
Why me?
Risking the lives
Of my friends.
Making decisions,
Good and bad.
Why me?
My cousin is a brutal killer,
My best friend is unhappy.
My girlfriend has to kill,
Tobias is indifferent.
Why me?
I made many bad decisions,
The ones that almost killed.
Because of me, my cousin's dead,
With her 7000 yeerks.
Why me?
I was just a normal kid,
Before the night.
Now I'm a leader,
Of World War III
Why me?
Well, that's Jake for you. Oh, and Sinister Shadow, thanks again! And, I'm a girl, I know that I don't rhyme, it's just that when I rhyme, nonsense shows up! Example:
There once was a janitor named Ann,
And she had a big brown hen.
The hen could write with a pen,
Etc.
And I want to show feeling (not nonsense). Yes, I do need help with rhyming, and yes, I MIGHT need a beta.
And Thank you LilManiac, my best reviewer! You even made my story on a story alert list /hugs author/ thanks!
