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Those footsteps were not human. Whatever made them was some sort of beast, Reed thought. Sues force feild was faltering they
needed help.Those huge bugs were coming closer , and closer ramming their huge bodies at sues force feild. Reed wrapped
his body around Sue. And as the force feild faltered he streched his legs so he could reach the top of a tree nearbye. Jhonny
flew to the tree and sat on a long branch next to Reed who was carrying an exhausted Sue. The creatures were at the bottom of
the tree now ramming it with their heads, while some more bit the trunk weakening. Jhonny closed his eyes and screwed up his
face and screamed as he openeed his eyes he was on fire. Reed looked at Jhonny, at his flaming hair. His yellow eyes. Jhonny
stood up and jumped into the air. Reed had never seen Jhonny in his fire form before. He had only seen him use fire to throw
or to fly but then he remained human. But now he was like a god of fire, dancing through the air sending a non-stop torrent
of flame at the creatures and it was driving them back, but the tree in old age could not hold against the constant barrage
of head-butts and huge chunks been taken out of it.Jhonny landed on the tree gasping for breath.Reed streched his arms and
started punching all the creatures. But after about ten miniutes his arms were tired and covered in bite marks. The tree
had now finally gave with a huge CRACK the tree fell and sent the 3 humans falling to their Doom. Sue was woken up by a gush
of cold air in her face her boyfriend and her brother next to her all of them plummeting to their death. Suewas terrified and
as she screamed she turned invisible. Reed and Jhonny looked around where was Sue. Then they felt a hand grab them both and
they too turned invisible. THey hit the ground with a THUD! The creatures were expecting some prey to fall from the tree but
instead not even the tree had fallen it was suspened in mid air. The bugs didn't know that Sue had not only made her fellow
humans invisible to the creatures she had also stopped the tree from crushing them. Sue knew she couldnt hold the force feild
for long but she knew she coiuld turn invisible as long as she wanted. She pulled Jhonny to her and whispered " Jhonny i cant
keep the forcefeild up for much longer and i cant keep you two invisible too. So while your invisible you fly Reed to that
rock there and i'll lure the creatures here then i'll fly away releasing the force feild crushinbg them. She couldnt see them
but she knew they wern't there. She turned uninvisible and shouted at the boerd creatures until they surrounded her. She then
stopped concentration on the trees force feild and willed herself to fly. She was about ot fly when one of the creatures
grabbed her foot with it's pincers and wouldn't let go. She was going to be crushed by the tree. She closed her eyes and
wished for it to be a quick death but instead of feeling pain she felt nothing. Nothing at all. She looked up and screamed
the tree was an inch from her face. But the tree didn't move. She wasn't raising a forcefeild so why wasn't she dead.
She then heard a rocky groan and the tree moved further away from her face. She rollled over and saw why the tree hadnt hit her. A huge orange rock was holding it. How was that possible.No wait the rock was moving pulling the tree away from her. Sue quickly turned invisible and walked towards the creature. As she got closer she could see it had arms and legs. And eyes and a mouth. The rock-thing looked at where the tree was gonna land. It saw no one was there, and dropped the tree. killing the bugs underneath It looked around and spoke "Sue where are you Sue...Susie" it sounded like Ben. Sue spoke "Ben is that you" it looked around and then Sue realized she was still invisible and flipped back into sight. She was getting good at controlling her powers. She tapped the rock that was now Ben. "Oh Benny whats happened to you" he looked at her " Susie I dont know" i woke up like this. How did you dissapear just the..." he didn't finish as he saw Jhonny flying at him and Reed running his arm a mace. They reached them and as they were about to fire at/hit they were flung back by an invisible force. They ran again to hit a wall that they couldnt see. Jhonny was firing a wall of fire at the force wall and making it difficult for Sue to concentrate.She raised one hand at Jhonny and he was surrounded by a force bubble "Jhonny stop its not a monster" but Jhonny wasn't listening to her. Then his flames ran out and sue smiled "you cant make flame without oxygen" she looked at Reed who was battering the wall trying to break her concentration she made a force bubble surround his hands and join them behind him making sure he couldnt attack with his hands. Reed looked at her his eyes filled with sadness "Sue put us down and lower the force wall the monster wont hurt you" Reed shouted pleaing with sue. "Reed you and Jhonny are being monsters this Thing is Benjaminn J. Grimm your best friend he has being mutated like the rest of us"
Reed looked at Ben "Ben is it really you" Ben nodded. Reed walked foreward and Sue released his hands. She then turned around and released the suffocating Jhonny. THey all walked to the Thing and realized it was their friend. After setting up a camp fire the four disscussed what has happened. Reed spoke first "Well it seems that the cosmic radiation has changed us all uniquely. First I have the ability to strech any part of my body at will and change its shape. Jhonny can create a firey plasma around his body and throw it and use it to fly. He cannot use it without oxygen as Sue showed us. Ben here's skin has being transformed into a rocky substance and has enhanced strength and I think he might me extremely durable to heat bullets and cold due to his rocky exterior. Jhonny flame him." Jhonny fired flame at Ben but he felt nothing." my theory is correct. And last Sue can become invisible and make other objects invisible too. She can also create invisible force walls which she can use to protect herself,fire at enemies and to fly. These abilities are probally to do with the storm rearranging our DNA I will conduct more experiment later." he looked at Sue who was looking into the jungle. Reed streched his arm to sue and tapped her shoulder "Susan dear what is the matter" she looked at reed " I was just wondering how did the bugs that attacked us grow to that size." Reed thought for a moment and then answered " The radiation from the ship probally mutated them too." he looked at Jhonny who was flying through the air "Jhonny why are you doing that" Jhonny flew down and landed next to Reed. "I was just thinking about being a superhero you know like on t.v" Reed looked at him and smiled " you know Jhonny that dosn't sound so bad" Sue nodded and Ben grinned "You know Strech thats not such a bad idea we could be the Avengers, The X-Men or something like that" Jhonny laughed " those names would never be used for superheroes we need something really good like.. I got it The Fantastic Four" Ben spoke " I like the name you could be The Fireman" Jhonny scowled " You could be the boulder" They both stood up facing eachother Ben cracked his knuckles, Jhonny flamed on. Reed streched between the two "Settle down we'll all pick our own names" Jhonny flamed off and Ben sat down Reed spoke first " I will be Mister Fantastic" Jhonny laughed " Yeah well i'm the human torch" Ben stood up " I'm the Thing" Sue laughed " and I shall be The invisible Girl" They all stood in a circle. " The fantastic four, this is the start of something great..oh and by the way how will we get home" Jhonny stood up and shouted " FLAME ON" and he did just that he flew out towards the sea. Reed and Ben stood next to Sue and she made an invisible force bubble and flew after Jhonny.
She then heard a rocky groan and the tree moved further away from her face. She rollled over and saw why the tree hadnt hit her. A huge orange rock was holding it. How was that possible.No wait the rock was moving pulling the tree away from her. Sue quickly turned invisible and walked towards the creature. As she got closer she could see it had arms and legs. And eyes and a mouth. The rock-thing looked at where the tree was gonna land. It saw no one was there, and dropped the tree. killing the bugs underneath It looked around and spoke "Sue where are you Sue...Susie" it sounded like Ben. Sue spoke "Ben is that you" it looked around and then Sue realized she was still invisible and flipped back into sight. She was getting good at controlling her powers. She tapped the rock that was now Ben. "Oh Benny whats happened to you" he looked at her " Susie I dont know" i woke up like this. How did you dissapear just the..." he didn't finish as he saw Jhonny flying at him and Reed running his arm a mace. They reached them and as they were about to fire at/hit they were flung back by an invisible force. They ran again to hit a wall that they couldnt see. Jhonny was firing a wall of fire at the force wall and making it difficult for Sue to concentrate.She raised one hand at Jhonny and he was surrounded by a force bubble "Jhonny stop its not a monster" but Jhonny wasn't listening to her. Then his flames ran out and sue smiled "you cant make flame without oxygen" she looked at Reed who was battering the wall trying to break her concentration she made a force bubble surround his hands and join them behind him making sure he couldnt attack with his hands. Reed looked at her his eyes filled with sadness "Sue put us down and lower the force wall the monster wont hurt you" Reed shouted pleaing with sue. "Reed you and Jhonny are being monsters this Thing is Benjaminn J. Grimm your best friend he has being mutated like the rest of us"
Reed looked at Ben "Ben is it really you" Ben nodded. Reed walked foreward and Sue released his hands. She then turned around and released the suffocating Jhonny. THey all walked to the Thing and realized it was their friend. After setting up a camp fire the four disscussed what has happened. Reed spoke first "Well it seems that the cosmic radiation has changed us all uniquely. First I have the ability to strech any part of my body at will and change its shape. Jhonny can create a firey plasma around his body and throw it and use it to fly. He cannot use it without oxygen as Sue showed us. Ben here's skin has being transformed into a rocky substance and has enhanced strength and I think he might me extremely durable to heat bullets and cold due to his rocky exterior. Jhonny flame him." Jhonny fired flame at Ben but he felt nothing." my theory is correct. And last Sue can become invisible and make other objects invisible too. She can also create invisible force walls which she can use to protect herself,fire at enemies and to fly. These abilities are probally to do with the storm rearranging our DNA I will conduct more experiment later." he looked at Sue who was looking into the jungle. Reed streched his arm to sue and tapped her shoulder "Susan dear what is the matter" she looked at reed " I was just wondering how did the bugs that attacked us grow to that size." Reed thought for a moment and then answered " The radiation from the ship probally mutated them too." he looked at Jhonny who was flying through the air "Jhonny why are you doing that" Jhonny flew down and landed next to Reed. "I was just thinking about being a superhero you know like on t.v" Reed looked at him and smiled " you know Jhonny that dosn't sound so bad" Sue nodded and Ben grinned "You know Strech thats not such a bad idea we could be the Avengers, The X-Men or something like that" Jhonny laughed " those names would never be used for superheroes we need something really good like.. I got it The Fantastic Four" Ben spoke " I like the name you could be The Fireman" Jhonny scowled " You could be the boulder" They both stood up facing eachother Ben cracked his knuckles, Jhonny flamed on. Reed streched between the two "Settle down we'll all pick our own names" Jhonny flamed off and Ben sat down Reed spoke first " I will be Mister Fantastic" Jhonny laughed " Yeah well i'm the human torch" Ben stood up " I'm the Thing" Sue laughed " and I shall be The invisible Girl" They all stood in a circle. " The fantastic four, this is the start of something great..oh and by the way how will we get home" Jhonny stood up and shouted " FLAME ON" and he did just that he flew out towards the sea. Reed and Ben stood next to Sue and she made an invisible force bubble and flew after Jhonny.
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